It's definitely an improvement.. Much less cluttered looking. There still seems to be a big gap between the menu and the main page content though. I still think you need to work a bit on actual layout.
I would write a couple of paragraphs worth of intro as well, you don't want the first thing someone sees on your site to be a video from another website!
I would write a couple of paragraphs worth of intro as well, you don't want the first thing someone sees on your site to be a video from another website!