Batman: By Night

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I'm working on a new Batman story/universe: "Batman: By Night" is a Noir interpretation of The Dark Knight. some famous moments (ex. Knightfall) will be presented in a different yet recognizable way.
 
Looking forward to it.
 
Let's get some concept/fan art rockin' for BATMAN: BY NIGHT! :D

post what you got people. We can get character descriptions from Knight Rise and then design according to his descriptions

--dk7
 
Detective Bruce Wayne:A 32 year old ex soldier turned to the safer side of crime back in Gotham when he found his parents to be murdered with no clues to be found. By night, he is Batman: a vengeful detective with a torn black overcoat and a bat-like pullover mask. He's willing to dig deep into the black heart of Gothams most wanted to uncover the truth of his parents murder, for bats are blind but they can "see" what is there in the end.

Detective Thomas Elliott:The only man Bruce trusts enough for help. Although their boss favors Bruce more than himself, he merely puts on his overcoat each morning and mutters to himself one word: "Hush".

Dick Grayson:A close friend of Bruce's parents when he was serving in the army. He gets the nickname "Robin" because he is often seen flying over close rooftops. Although 15, he also vowed for revenge for the murder of the Waynes. He is often rejected by Batman for help, for he works alone. Later in his life, he will realize this to avenge the death of his own parents as "Nightwing".

Edward Nigma: Once the local crossword printer for the Gotham Times newspaper turned into a menacing blood thirsty murderer by his psychologist, Dr. Hugo Strange and the assistant Dr. J. Crane. Once he opened his mind, he began to kill off random civilians with a silver pistol with an engraved green question mark on the side. When he finds a torn faded jacket in a garbage can belonging to Detective Wayne, he dyes it in a deep tone of green and stalks him wherever he may go

Ben:Little is known about this bouncer for the Iceberg Lounge down in the slums of Gotham. Dressed in a black vest and black pants, he wears the face of someone desperate to be the king of Gotham. After he is encountered by Detective Elliott, he engages him in battle only to have acid splashed in his eyes, frying them to a bright white and bloodshot on the inside. He screams out in the night that he will find Elliott and break him or anyone else who stands in his way

More to come
 
Detective Bruce Wayne:A 32 year old ex soldier turned to the safer side of crime back in Gotham when he found his parents to be murdered with no clues to be found. By night, he is Batman: a vengeful detective with a torn black overcoat and a bat-like pullover mask. He's willing to dig deep into the black heart of Gothams most wanted to uncover the truth of his parents murder, for bats are blind but they can "see" what is there in the end.

Detective Thomas Elliott:The only man Bruce trusts enough for help. Although their boss favors Bruce more than himself, he merely puts on his overcoat each morning and mutters to himself one word: "Hush".

Dick Grayson:A close friend of Bruce's parents when he was serving in the army. He gets the nickname "Robin" because he is often seen flying over close rooftops. Although 15, he also vowed for revenge for the murder of the Waynes. He is often rejected by Batman for help, for he works alone. Later in his life, he will realize this to avenge the death of his own parents as "Nightwing".

Edward Nigma: Once the local crossword printer for the Gotham Times newspaper turned into a menacing blood thirsty murderer by his psychologist, Dr. Hugo Strange and the assistant Dr. J. Crane. Once he opened his mind, he began to kill off random civilians with a silver pistol with an engraved green question mark on the side. When he finds a torn faded jacket in a garbage can belonging to Detective Wayne, he dyes it in a deep tone of green and stalks him wherever he may go

Ben:Little is known about this bouncer for the Iceberg Lounge down in the slums of Gotham. Dressed in a black vest and black pants, he wears the face of someone desperate to be the king of Gotham. After he is encountered by Detective Elliott, he engages him in battle only to have acid splashed in his eyes, frying them to a bright white and bloodshot on the inside. He screams out in the night that he will find Elliott and break him or anyone else who stands in his way

More to come
 
Roman Sionis:The classic smug leader of his own gang that rules the streets of Gotham. Constantly questioned by both detectives, he knows there will always be no consequences for his actions for his men that consist of Waylon Jones and a newly scarred Ben prove to be a physical challenge against anyone. But his false black mask cannot hide from Batman forever.

Victor Fries:A Nazi doctor that escaped to Gotham in the midst of his career. White as a ghost, he shows signs of expirementation on his own body, becoming blinded and having to wear tinted shades. His body adapted to the chilling artic waters he dipped himself in so he lives in the freezer down at the Iceberg Lounge. Though he says he is a changed man, Batman is disgusted and does not come close to trusting anyone. Espescially a Nazi doctor.

Joe KerrA magician that was kicked put of a place called the Red Hood in Central Metropolis. Tired of rejection, he killed off 3 people to get his desired look: a baker for a flour white face, a woman for his scarlet grin, and a tailor for his purple pinstripe clothes. Later in his visit to Gotham, he finds the dye used on Waynes clothes, remnants from Nigma. Delighted, he soaks his hair in it. Now he is off to bring the people of Gotham a nice little smile for each and everyone of them. And who better to target first than stone faced Detective Wayne.

Oswald Cobblepot:The big cheese: literally. A short, fat pompous windbag of the sorts, he is the owner of the Iceberg Lounge. Although clean with the cops, Gotham Police suspects he has an inside with Roman Sionis but they are never sure. Strange how the lounge was opened shortly after the murder of the Waynes. But Batman knows the only way to know is to solve the case from the outside before taking on the biggest criminals all at once.

Floyd Lawton:The only criminal who can never shut up. Obsessed with guns, Lawton is Gotham's assassin for hire. Known for taking put former chief James Gordon a few years back, no one dares to mess with this sharpshooter because he's rich and always gets what he wants. Batman knows Gordon was close with Bruce and is going on the edge on actually willing to kill Floyd depending on the case.

still more
 
Actually I've laid out all characters needed for the 1st one
 
How it feels

Gotham City. No one has the balls to even cross into it's territory. If you can imagine John Dillinger with an army of his own men, you'd get the picture of what this place looks like to me. Of course the papers say otherwise. The papers don't mean **** to me. Not anymore. Not since I left the Allies to come home from the war. Not since one shred of an obituary crossed my path when I returned.

"Ah, so America's finest returns from the depths of hell. Need a bottle?"

Thomas Elliott. Detective Thomas Elliott. I couldn't imagine any other human being in this hell hole more understanding than him. He used to be a doctor out in the old looney bin Arkham, which sat out like Alcatraz in the middle of the Atlantic just off the shores of the docks. He quit after he found his boss Hugo Strange doing deals with the devil with a Nazi doctor named Victor Fries. Apparently, something big was about to go down, something that was kept secret at Arkham. Elliott, of course, was too much of a ***** to stay and find out.

"Finest? I took out a few men, nothing big. Churchill is about to make his next move. Too big for Bruce Wayne to stick around."

Elliott gave a smug look and began to go ahead of me.

The boat I came back on was garbage from the ship itself to its captain. ****ing Marines think they have the better of the men who do the real work. They can suck on my dick and piss off. If they really thought they could take me, I might've ended up in Arkham for a few murders. I would plead guilty before the trial began.

The docks were a bit slick for rotten wood. You take a few strides and you could find yourself digging a watery grave. Some say police chief James Gordon plummeted to his fate a few years ago, but people on the inside know better. Gotham's assassin Floyd Lawton pumped his guts full of lead and dumped the body near the shores. Gordon was a close buddy of mine before I left for the war. Now he was nothing but a memory.

I must say it was a bit crowded, people cheering on each side. A banner hung between 2 posts reading "Thank You!" in white letters, clashing with a deep shade of red, almost like blood. The men behind me embraced the crowd and gave kisses to their family, babies, the whole shebang. Elliott was quieter than usual to me but then again, it was hard to hear over the cheers of joy. It was definetely a night to remember for everyone. Including me.

Once we reached the side walk and tarred pavements of the slums, Elliott pulled me aside for a few words.

"Listen Wayne, theres something I've been meaning to clear up ever since you stepped off that boat. I've been hush hush about it too long."

He stood there waving his hands, trying to spit out the words. It lasted for a good 10 minutes. I grew tired of it and began to walk ahead. Not 5 steps later, Elliott appears in front of me like lightening. Tears welling up in his eyes, he pulled one of the Gotham Times from his coat pocket and pointed to a small article that was posted a few days back. Words cannot describe how it felt to read the headline as Elliott walked away bawling, leaving me alone on the pavement to stare into the inanimate eyes of my parents who were now with Gordon. Just a memory
 
Amazing Batman concept by Mister Meddle!

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"How it Feels pt. 2" may be delayed due to a storm we are having here
 
How it Feels pt. 2

10 days passed. Not a single soul heard from me. The entire city moved on after the news of my parents death was old news. They're nothing but two faced phonies that play your emotions like a hooker off the south side of the Narrows. It's hard to know who to trust these days.

Elliott was put in charge of the investigation. He would occassionally drop notes by my apartment door to give me an update. So far, no evidence was gathered from the bodies except a randomized order of bullets found around the torso: an estimated 2 along the left lungs and 4 around the hearts. The lead shards were too small to trace back fingerprints and the shell had been removed after the bodies hit the ground. Presetorn Street had been dead quiet that night. No suspects. No evidence. No clues. Just one bad day.

For the first 3 days, I took it hard. I was never an alcoholic before I was shipped off, I'd have a few shots every now and then. Now it seemed that the old Bruce Wayne was dead along with my mother, my father, and Gordon. Just a memory that was drowned in a sea of black tears and liquor. The shell was waiting for a new host. Lucky enough, a new figure sank in it's chair stone faced and blank. It didnt want anything by day. But by night, its post was about to be born. All it needed was a way to get around.


"YOU? Bruce Wayne, military man, a detective?"

"Don't bull **** me Ross, I need this job. I'm broke and I can only survive on scraps and bread crumbs for so long."

Ross Alan Ghould, the new big cheese of Gotham's police force. He tranfered out of the big leagues as a spy in D.C. Probably one of the most skilled officers within 300 miles of here due to the fact that he trained alone in martial arts and killed off an entire ambush of Japs with a katana, which sat ominously behind his desk. Well mannered and well dressed. No wonder they picked him.

"Well, I certainly have no issue with it. All you may have tO do is go into lethal training with Elliott and-"

"Lethal training?"

"Yes, Wayne. Lethal training."

The **** was he getting at? I came here to solve a murder, not commit one.

"Is that necessary? You of all people would've known I blew a few brains of Hitlers dogs all over the field. I think your little toy pistols are no match for those mad men."

He stared at me with his deep black eyes, thoughts running through his eyebrows all the way down to his cheek bones. He stood from his chair and paced his office. After 6 minutes, a sigh emerged from his lips.

"You start tomorrow at 3:00. Elliott will be your partner for the time being. You'll want to hit the Iceberg Lounge on most occasions. Cobblepot is crossing lines of suspicion and we can't take any chances."

Thank you Otto Obvious. Any how, I rose from the small stool he had given me, gave a subtle nod, and vanished out the door. The odds are in my favor. Anything personal would be gold for Elliott or myself. My parents will rest in peace after I find the bastard behind it all. One day did I have to wait. Or at least, one day for Bruce Wayne.


The night was illuminated by the neon signs of the Iceberg Lounge. The image of a penguin flickered across the street. Their personal bouncer stood at the door, big as an ox. Maybe bigger. I could spot Roman Sionis among the line of people in line to get in, grinning his cheap ass smile to the pathetic naive citizens. Nice night for a walk if you asked me.

Through the leather, I spotted a man going around back to take a leak. From the top of the Lounge, I quietly made my way down the fire escape, shadowing myself in the darkest corner of the lower level. It was dead silent for decades it seemed. My legs locked around the metal bars as I quietly hung behind the man, sweating heavily. I guess he felt like he was being watched. Or it was just natural.

"SWEET JESUS, WHAT THE HELL!?"

He was in my grip not one second later. I lifted him over and pushed myself over the railing. His eyes were popping out of his sockets as he stared into mine. The moonlight reflected a silhouette of a man hanging in the hands of a bat like creature in the puddle below.

"WHO DO YOU WORK FOR?"

"IM NOT- I CANT- WHAT?!"

His leather collar slid across my hands slowly.

"NO NO DON'T PLEASE! DONT!"

The grip returned.

"ANSWER ME! WHO DO YOU WORK FOR?!"

"LUTHOR! LUTHOR! I WORK FOR LUTHOR!"

"WHAT DO YOU KNOW ABOUT THE MURDER OF THOMAS AND MARTHA WAYNE?!"

Tears were streaming down his red face.

"SOMEONE HAS AN INSIDE EVERYWHERE IN GOTHAM, ARKHAM, THE LOUNGE, THE NARROWS, EVERYWHERE!"

"WAS IT LAWTON?!"

"THAT'S ALL I KNOW, THAT'S ALL I KNOW! DONT KILL ME, THAT'S ALL I KNOW!"

Pathetic son of a *****. Before he could spit out anything else, he was catapulted into the window behind me. Screams and gasps rang out as I made my way out of the back alley. Someone on the inside. Everywhere. That was a hard spot to have these days. Give or take, I knew where to start next: Gotham Times.

Bruce Wayne is a man by day, a shell by night. Only the dark figure rules the shadows past sundown. As it stands overlooking the city that holds the air it breathes, it screams out into the blackness.

"I AM VENGEANCE, I AM THE NIGHT, I AM BATMAN! AND I WILL FIND THE MAN WHO IS RESPONSIBLE FOR MY BIRTH!"
 
How it Feels pt. 3 (conclusion of Issue #1)


The morning lasted for a long time. When day broke through my apartment window, Batman sunk into the shadows of my closet with his body preserved seperately. Not once did I close my eyes to sleep. I stared at the white ceiling for hours, breathing in my rage quietly so I wouldn't disturb my landlord, Alfred. He was like a second father to me and didn't deserve any anger towards him. If anything happened to him, Bruce Wayne would be dead and Batman would take complete control.


My pocketwatch reflected into my eyes, reading almost quarter past noon. Slowly, I pushed myself off the bed and walked into the bathroom. My reflection showed a man of grief: messed up hair, stubble, and bags hung under my eyes. Ross would give me hell if I took a few Z's first day on the job. Elliott would probably giggle and lock my body in the backseat of his car so I would be safe. My knuckles were slightly red and cut. The shards of the window at the Lounge had flown across and struck me, but I was too furious to feel or notice. I took a long bath and sat in it until 2:45, giving myself enough time to regain my thoughts and be prepared
when Elliott came to pick me up.


"Christ, where the hell is he?"


My watch read 3:15. No sign of Elliott. I paced the sidewalk for another 20 minutes until a car came screaming down the street. It came to a harsh stop a few feet away from me, the tires producing a cloud of smoke. I walked over to the passenger door and opened it. Elliott was sweating heavily, but wearing an exhausted grin.

"Had a few drinks last night. Slept in too long."

"Hangover that powerful even for you?"

"No, but I wanted to see your pissed face when I wasnt there."


Same old Elliott.


"Very funny, jackass."


"Hey, be glad Ross assigned me as your partner. Otherwise, the investigation would feel dead. Half the cops down at the station pull **** like going to the scene and just dozing off for a good time. At least now we can do this city some real good. Hit the lunatics where it hurts, bring down Cobblepot, and find out what the hell is going down at Arkham. We share the same motive."


He had a point. At least the majority of it. His motive was to be a hero for Gotham, to bring it out of the hands of scum and criminals. I had that motive, but it wasn't as powerful. My parents were my motive. My parents were Batman's motive. Elliott would never understand. I didn't expect him to.


"I guess you're right."

"Course I am. So where we headin first partner?"

"Gotham Times Printing"

His face was puzzled.


"What would they know?"

"They are the ones who published the obituary, Elliott. Theres gotta be somebody there that can lead us one step closer."

"Maybe the reporter can give us some info on the man who found the bodies?"

"Exactly"


The drive lasted a good 10 minutes before we arrived. The building looked a little worn down, but not shabby for what it was built to be. The inside sounded like a freight train roaring past your house in the middle of the night. The press was running furiously, printing off copies of each paper. The workers were running around in a frenzy, yet somehow it was
organized. I stopped a young man that was walking towards the exit.


"CA OU ELL ME WHE YOU BOSS IS?"

"WHAT?"

"CAN YOU TELL ME WHERE YOUR BOSS IS?"

"YEAH, IN THE OFFICE NEAR THE BACK CORNER."

"ANK YOU."


We made it there after moving through a maze of people. The office was cool and quiet compared to the room itself. The boss was middle aged man of about 42 years of age. He looked tough, but you could tell by his voice he had a heart of gold.


"What can I do for you gentlemen?"

"My name is Bruce Wayne. I'm a detective down at the Gotham Police Station. This is my partner, Detective Thomas Elliott. We're here to ask you a few questions."

He plopped himself down in the leather chair behind his desk.

"Fire away."

"Who reported the murder of Thomas and Martha Wayne?"


"Paul Robinson. He was heading out for an evening with his gal when he saw a few people crowded over the bodies."


"But Pereston doesn't lead into downtown, it actually heads outwards towards the docks."


"I don't know the entire details, Detective. I'm having enough trouble finding a missing worker here."


I leaned in closely.


"Who?"

The boss sighed deeply and ran his fingers through his hair.

"Nigma. Edward Nigma. He was in charge of the crosswords. Always had a passion for knowledge. Good kid."

"When did he disappear?"

"Oddly enough, the same night your parents were murdered."


That caught my interest deeply.


"Did he have a motive for leaving?"

"The workers tortured him for being a weakling, even though it lasted for a long time. He went to a psychologist for help."

"What was the doctor's name?"


"Hugo Strange. He works at Arkham as one of the head medical operators. Gives me the creeps just seeing him, I already have enough worries about one of those ****ers swimming over to Gotham."


I feel your pain mister, I really do.


"Are there any signs of his whereabouts?"


The boss swallowed. His eyes were starting to water.


"I think you gentlemen should leave. I hope you do well on the search."


"We'll be in touch, sir."


He rushed us out of the office. A faint bawling could be heard outside of the door. It was soon drowned out as we made our way out.


Outside, Elliott and I had a few smokes.


"Wonder what got into him?"


"I think I have an idea, Bruce."


He turned towards me with a very serious face.


"Edward Nigma was committed to Arkham a few days after he disappeared. His blood was traced back to a few murders that were heavily wounded by knives and bullets. Ross told me there were rumors of Nigma being spotted in Gotham. The bastard left clues in the form of puzzles all over the bodies."


This was news. Big news. Nigma grew to be a psychopathic killer since the day my parents were found stone cold on the pavement. He was my only suspect besides Robinson and the boss. I needed to find him soon. As we drove back to my apartment, I glanced into the sun preparing to set, my emotions beginning to shift. Could Edward Nigma be the man who killed my
parents?


My apartment was starting to look dark when I returned. I made my way to the closet. Nigma would likely strike again sometime between now and morning and I wasn't about to take any chances. The leather cowl beamed at me, eyes filled with rage. I lifted it off the top shelf.


"Nigma way be able to avoid the police..."


I slipped it on, my spirit growing with rage.


"...but he cannot hide from Batman."
 
I read the character bios, but not the actual script you've posted (just being honest). Sounds like an interesting concept. Like an else world tale, which I always find interesting.

Taking classic characters and putting them into a world a bit different from their original one. Keep going, have fun with it. :)

--dk7
 
Oh my gosh, we are noticed! Hahaha jk

Thank you so much for looking anything over, we really appreciate it. No one has touched it ever since we started hahaha
 
BATMAN: BY NIGHT

ISSUE #2

Bruce Wayne is on a pursuit of rage towards recent murderer, Edward Nigma. The closest suspect to his parents murder, Wayne must dawn the Batman persona to find the madman before he strikes again. But where the hell could he be? Find out in

"THAT IS THE QUESTION"
 
Def. an interesting take on the characters, I'm interested in seeing what you do with Fries. I haven't read the script portion yet but i'll give you my thoughts on it once I've finished it.
 
I like how Bruce Wayne has a different voice than he usually does in the comics. It reminds me of Sin City but with a American Gangster/ Public Enemies feel to it.
Have you read The Screenwriter's Bible by David Trottier? I highly recommend it to any aspiring writer. Every screenwriter in developed world has this on their coffee table. It's part reference book, part work book, all awesome book.

Also, have you thought about writing it on Celtx? It's the best script writer program to use, even better than final cut pro and it's free. They have formatting for comics too.
 
cant say i have. ive been at work on this project for a few weeks and i porbably have no clue what im talking about when it comes to anything other than the story lol but thanks for the tip!
 

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