codename:zack - An Original Superhero (Origin Script)

[CJ]

This is an origin story i've been writing for an original superhero concept of mine, titled codename:zack. Here's a brief sypnosis of the story.

Following a series of terrorist attacks on US Soil, the Government recruits a man named Ray, a washed-up loser, to create a living breathing weapon.

The weapon, dubbed "Zack" often spends his days alone, until he learns the awful truth about why he was created. Fleeing his creators, he finds himself in New York City, where he befriends a gang of youths and is enrolled in elementary school.

Little does he know, he is being hunted by his creators. Meanwhile, a rival gang named 'The Smiling Skulls' led by a sadistic young boy, are about to send New York into chaos..

Edit Nov 27, 2010: I redid the story. It's now it a standard novel format, with extra scenes, and fixed dialogue. It's not finished yet, though. You can read it here:

http://www.fictionpress.com/u/673356/CJ1985
http://codenamezack.8k.com/zackorigins.html

 

[CJ]

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[CJ]

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[CJ]

I've been making revisions to the script. I think it's a bit better now, but still needs some work. Comments would be much appreciated.

 

[CJ]

This is not related to the script, but is related to the concept.

I added a Witch villain to the concept. I was wondering what everyone
thinks about her origin. I think it needs some work.

http://codenamezack.8k.com/thewitch.html

 

[CJ]

I guess it's kinda silly for me to bump a thread nobody has shown interest in yet again, but I made a lot of changes to the story.

For one, it's not in script format anymore, it's in a standard novel format. Secondly, there's extra scenes and touched-up dialogue. Lastly, it's now hosted on FictionPress, so you don't have to worry about pop-ups anymore. It's not finished yet though. Any comments would be greatly appreciated.

http://www.fictionpress.com/u/673356/CJ1985

 

[red hood 4]

loved it

 

[CJ]

Thank you! I'm glad you liked it.

Keep checking back to see if new chapters are added.

 

[CJ]

Added two more chapters

 

[CJ]

...Aaand a few more.

http://www.fictionpress.com/u/673356/CJ1985

 

[CJ]

Finally finished...

http://www.fictionpress.com/u/673356/