Eddie Brock
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Preface
Preface
Recently, my mind has been swirling with ideas for a re-imagining of Superman. The character has such a rich history that can be drawn upon to create an extremely original story, and that is precisely what I am now setting out to do. Honestly, I don't know how well this is going to turn out. I've tried fan fictions before, and I've abandoned the projects halfway through. However, there is no other outlet for me to share this creation of mine, and I do want to share it. So without further ado, here is the first installment of my "Superman."
Part One: Falling Angel
Smallville, Kansas
1975
"Jonathan, dinner's ready!" Martha Kent calls out from the front porch of her yellow farmhouse. Martha is still very young, but her dusty farm clothes age her prematurely. In fact, the only features that confirm Martha's youth are her cool, blue eyes and her curly strands of red hair - the latter being pulled back into a messy bun on this particular evening. A dirty apron verifies that Martha has been slaving in the kitchen for hours as her new husband, Jonathan Kent, has been slaving in the fields. The two lead a less-than-glamorous life, but their mutual love prevails through all the hardships of life on the farm.
Jonathan Kent stands up straight and wipes the sweat from his brow. His shaggy locks of brown hair are damp and sticky from hours of sweating. Using the sleeve of his flannel shirt, Jonathan attempts to dry off before heading back to the relative comfort of his unassuming home. Jonathan's age, too, has been betrayed by years of hard labor. His hands are worn and beaten - resembling more the hands of an old man than the 32 year-old that he really is. Through it all, however, Jonathan does not complain. His stoic philosophy is a testament to his character.
Jonathan takes one last look at the setting sun on the horizon. The motley arrangement of brilliant colors is quickly giving way to the all-consuming blackness of the night. A lone star twinkles in the sky, providing the only other source of light besides the fading sun. Breathing in as much of the ambiance as he can, Jonathan then turns to the yellow farmhouse - whose glowing windows contrast starkly with the arriving twilight. Jonathan takes no notice, however, as - to him - this place is his home, plain and simple. Wiping his dirty boots on the old "Welcome" mat on the porch, Jonathan swings open the door to his house as he is bombarded with an influx of aromas emanating from the kitchen.
"Martha, I could live on your cooking for the rest of my life," Jonathan remarks proudly. He lumbers slowly over to the kitchen table, where a placemat has already been arranged for him. Slumping down into the chair, Jonathan begins to twirl his fork absent-mindedly.
Martha places a serving dish on the center of the table before removing her battered oven mits. Pulling out her chair slowly, Martha states softly, "I spoke to Dr. Siegel today."
Without looking up, Jonathan shovels food onto his empty plate. He calmly asks, "So?"
Martha sighs. "It's what we expected," she explains defeatedly. She looks up at her husband with unenergetic melancholy. "We're not going to be able to have a child," she adds with a sense of bitter finality.
Jonathan pauses from his eating, and he exhales loudly. "Martha," he begins with an apologetic tone.
Martha waves him off. "Oh, don't fret," she assures him waveringly. Her words are empty and meaningless, but she says them out of obligation for her husband. She looks him in the eye. "We knew it was coming."
Jonathan breaks eye contact and puts down his fork. "You don't ask for much, and I'm content to give you what you ask for if I can," Jonathan continues. His tone becomes shaky, but he remains calm. "But the fact that I can't give you the one thing you wanted the most..."
"You know I never complain," Martha interjects sincerely. She is doing her best to be a strong foundation, but neither spouse can swallow the news.
Jonathan places his calloused hand gently on top of his wife's. "I wish there was something I could do, Martha," he responds sadly.
Martha returns to eating in an attempt to appear at ease. "It's water under the bridge. We'll work something out," she promises.
Jonathan opens his mouth to protest, but his words seem too small. He thinks better of it, and he returns to eating as well. Every so often, Jonathan looks up to catch his wife's eye, but she is looking down at her plate calmly. Looking away with shame, Jonathan tries to enjoy his dinner, but his appetite now seems to escape him.
1975
"Jonathan, dinner's ready!" Martha Kent calls out from the front porch of her yellow farmhouse. Martha is still very young, but her dusty farm clothes age her prematurely. In fact, the only features that confirm Martha's youth are her cool, blue eyes and her curly strands of red hair - the latter being pulled back into a messy bun on this particular evening. A dirty apron verifies that Martha has been slaving in the kitchen for hours as her new husband, Jonathan Kent, has been slaving in the fields. The two lead a less-than-glamorous life, but their mutual love prevails through all the hardships of life on the farm.
Jonathan Kent stands up straight and wipes the sweat from his brow. His shaggy locks of brown hair are damp and sticky from hours of sweating. Using the sleeve of his flannel shirt, Jonathan attempts to dry off before heading back to the relative comfort of his unassuming home. Jonathan's age, too, has been betrayed by years of hard labor. His hands are worn and beaten - resembling more the hands of an old man than the 32 year-old that he really is. Through it all, however, Jonathan does not complain. His stoic philosophy is a testament to his character.
Jonathan takes one last look at the setting sun on the horizon. The motley arrangement of brilliant colors is quickly giving way to the all-consuming blackness of the night. A lone star twinkles in the sky, providing the only other source of light besides the fading sun. Breathing in as much of the ambiance as he can, Jonathan then turns to the yellow farmhouse - whose glowing windows contrast starkly with the arriving twilight. Jonathan takes no notice, however, as - to him - this place is his home, plain and simple. Wiping his dirty boots on the old "Welcome" mat on the porch, Jonathan swings open the door to his house as he is bombarded with an influx of aromas emanating from the kitchen.
"Martha, I could live on your cooking for the rest of my life," Jonathan remarks proudly. He lumbers slowly over to the kitchen table, where a placemat has already been arranged for him. Slumping down into the chair, Jonathan begins to twirl his fork absent-mindedly.
Martha places a serving dish on the center of the table before removing her battered oven mits. Pulling out her chair slowly, Martha states softly, "I spoke to Dr. Siegel today."
Without looking up, Jonathan shovels food onto his empty plate. He calmly asks, "So?"
Martha sighs. "It's what we expected," she explains defeatedly. She looks up at her husband with unenergetic melancholy. "We're not going to be able to have a child," she adds with a sense of bitter finality.
Jonathan pauses from his eating, and he exhales loudly. "Martha," he begins with an apologetic tone.
Martha waves him off. "Oh, don't fret," she assures him waveringly. Her words are empty and meaningless, but she says them out of obligation for her husband. She looks him in the eye. "We knew it was coming."
Jonathan breaks eye contact and puts down his fork. "You don't ask for much, and I'm content to give you what you ask for if I can," Jonathan continues. His tone becomes shaky, but he remains calm. "But the fact that I can't give you the one thing you wanted the most..."
"You know I never complain," Martha interjects sincerely. She is doing her best to be a strong foundation, but neither spouse can swallow the news.
Jonathan places his calloused hand gently on top of his wife's. "I wish there was something I could do, Martha," he responds sadly.
Martha returns to eating in an attempt to appear at ease. "It's water under the bridge. We'll work something out," she promises.
Jonathan opens his mouth to protest, but his words seem too small. He thinks better of it, and he returns to eating as well. Every so often, Jonathan looks up to catch his wife's eye, but she is looking down at her plate calmly. Looking away with shame, Jonathan tries to enjoy his dinner, but his appetite now seems to escape him.
***
Jonathan and Martha gather in the living room to watch television after dinner. Neither of them has spoken of the incident at dinner. In fact, neither of them has spoken much at all. Jonathan attempted to bring up some tools that he needed to buy, but Martha simply nodded and didn't say anything more. Jonathan knew that she was keeping her disappointment bottled inside, and it worried him. Martha wanted nothing more than to be a mother, and now the doctor was telling her that it was never going to happen.
Jonathan swore to himself that he'd find a way. He didn't quite know how just yet, but he would not rest until Martha could carry a baby in her arms. It was the one thing he wanted more than anything else for her, and he was determined to get it. Despite his determination, Jonathan couldn't help but look to the skies for a little help.
The only sound in the living room comes from The Mary Tyler Moore Show as Jonathan sits uncomfortably in his armchair, pondering the course of events that has just transpired. Then, during a commercial break, something strange happens. The television set blinks off without warning.
Jonathan and Martha sit silently for a few moments before they lean forward in their respective seats. "What in the name of--?" Jonathan begins, but the television is restored before he can finish. Jonathan sits back in his seat, but he is still puzzled by the unusual occurrence.
Just as everything appears normal again, all the power flicks off. Martha gasps at the Kent farmhouse is overtaken by total darkness. "Jonathan?" she calls out feebly while her eyes adjust to the new level of light. The succeeding silence is then interrupted by the vigorous rattling of the Kent home.
Jonathan's mind races as the furniture shakes around the room. Picture frames come off the walls and crash on the floor noisily. Both Kents grip tightly to their chairs as they try to wait the tremors out. Jonathan finds himself wondering how there could possibly be an earthquake in the middle of Kansas.
Then, as quickly as it had came, the shaking stopped. Power returned, and The Mary Tyler Moore Show continued as if nothing strange had happened. Jonathan and Martha stared at each other in bewilderment - both wanting answers that neither could provide. Jonathan got up from his chair and waddled out to the front porch. Martha followed closely behind.
Jonathan's eyes scanned the dark outdoors as he looked for a possible cause of the disruption. Finally, Jonathan saw something bright and glowing in the fields. The red and orange made it stand out from the pitch black of the night. "Stay here," Jonathan whispered, and Martha obeyed.
Approaching the disturbance apprehensively, a million thoughts raced through Jonathan Kent's mind. He had no clue what he was dealing with, but there were little fires in the surrounding field. There appeared to be a crater, which made Jonathan think it was a piece of space rock or a fallen satellite. When Jonathan reached the tiny summit and peered down into the crater, he realized that he was dealing with a strange combination of the two.
"What on Earth--?" Jonathan asked himself. Inwardly, he thought, No - NOT on Earth.
Jonathan swore to himself that he'd find a way. He didn't quite know how just yet, but he would not rest until Martha could carry a baby in her arms. It was the one thing he wanted more than anything else for her, and he was determined to get it. Despite his determination, Jonathan couldn't help but look to the skies for a little help.
The only sound in the living room comes from The Mary Tyler Moore Show as Jonathan sits uncomfortably in his armchair, pondering the course of events that has just transpired. Then, during a commercial break, something strange happens. The television set blinks off without warning.
Jonathan and Martha sit silently for a few moments before they lean forward in their respective seats. "What in the name of--?" Jonathan begins, but the television is restored before he can finish. Jonathan sits back in his seat, but he is still puzzled by the unusual occurrence.
Just as everything appears normal again, all the power flicks off. Martha gasps at the Kent farmhouse is overtaken by total darkness. "Jonathan?" she calls out feebly while her eyes adjust to the new level of light. The succeeding silence is then interrupted by the vigorous rattling of the Kent home.
Jonathan's mind races as the furniture shakes around the room. Picture frames come off the walls and crash on the floor noisily. Both Kents grip tightly to their chairs as they try to wait the tremors out. Jonathan finds himself wondering how there could possibly be an earthquake in the middle of Kansas.
Then, as quickly as it had came, the shaking stopped. Power returned, and The Mary Tyler Moore Show continued as if nothing strange had happened. Jonathan and Martha stared at each other in bewilderment - both wanting answers that neither could provide. Jonathan got up from his chair and waddled out to the front porch. Martha followed closely behind.
Jonathan's eyes scanned the dark outdoors as he looked for a possible cause of the disruption. Finally, Jonathan saw something bright and glowing in the fields. The red and orange made it stand out from the pitch black of the night. "Stay here," Jonathan whispered, and Martha obeyed.
Approaching the disturbance apprehensively, a million thoughts raced through Jonathan Kent's mind. He had no clue what he was dealing with, but there were little fires in the surrounding field. There appeared to be a crater, which made Jonathan think it was a piece of space rock or a fallen satellite. When Jonathan reached the tiny summit and peered down into the crater, he realized that he was dealing with a strange combination of the two.
"What on Earth--?" Jonathan asked himself. Inwardly, he thought, No - NOT on Earth.