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Gangland ...by Sava

Sava

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Hello and welcome to my fanfic. First things first, this is not an original idea,its like a remake of an Indian movie. This is my first real fanfic. Hope you guys like it.

Gangland​

It was a cold evening, windy and raining. People walked on the sidewalk with their umbrella's up and the cars went by slowly. A man ran across the road, he looked to be in his late late 30's and didn't look like he ran very much judging by his size. The cars braked and swerved to avoid the man. People in the sidewalk stopped and looked at the sound of car horns and people yelling from inside their cars. He managed to get to the other side without being run over and stopped to look at where he just came from, his mind relaxed for a second thinking he got away with it. F**k, that was close he thought. He didn't have anymore time to think, a dark figure on the other side of the road jumped on the hood of a car that had stopped. He jumped from to another, the drivers now really angry, got out of their cars and yelled at the man. Telling him to go f**k his mother and die.

The man in his 30's turned left and ran. 50 meters down the road he saw the road split 3 ways, straight, left and right. Because he was already on the right side so he chose right. He ran at full speed around the corner and didn't have time to see the kids. He ran chest first into the first kid and tried to stay up, but stepped on the skateboard of the second kid and fell ass first. He didn't feel anything for a couple of seconds, when the pain finally came, it wasn't his ass that hurt the most, it was his lower back. He struggled to his feet, he heard the kids say something but he was too busy running for his life to care.

When he finally got to his feet he tried to stand straight, no can do, his back seemed locked and the more he tried the more it hurt. He slowly took 2 or 3 steps and then tried to run, he took one step and collapsed in pain, holding his lower back, he screamed in pain. He was on his stomach and heard footsteps behind him, he could just make it out, the rain seemed to be harder now. With every heart beat it seem to hurt more, using his left hand, rolled over on to his back and looked at the man who would take his life.

Large hands took a hold of his left leg and started dragging. He couldn't see where he was going, rain drops falling on his face were the seize of marbles now. He forgot about his back and tried to grab a hold of something, anything that was near by. Nothing there, he finally gave in and started to scream. “HELP!!!” he yelled, “Somebody PLEASE!!!” , he repeated the later once, twice and he felt his left leg drop. He looked up and a swinging boot collided right at the center of his face. He could tell the instant it connected that his Jaw was broken, nose too and for good measure , all his front teeth were missing.

He tried to scream again but only ended up swallowing half of his lose teeth and nearly choking. He gave up, he was out of energy with the running, the back was slowly killing him and he could speak, this is how its going to end, a voice inside his head told him and another asked why this was happening, this kind of thing doesn't happen to a guy like him. He stopped moving, the man was gone for a sec and he tried to role onto his stomach and take advantage, he looked around and saw that it was dark here, he couldn't see the road from where he was, the cars sounded distant and he could smell urine, I'm going to die in a f**king alleyway he thought, he smiled, Irony at its finest .

Hands grabbed a hold of his color and in one swift move, yanked him up on to his feet. His back and his face were killing him, he couldn't stand straight, bending his back was the only way to lower some of his pain but the man wouldn't let him. Now they were face to face and both had one final good look at each other and the old man recognized the attacker. “YOU!?!” he said, surprised and disappointed at the same time. This little **** is who i was running away from? he asked himself. His ego kicked in and helped him, but there was 3 of them, it told him. The man he was looking at was 25, ft 10 and muscular. What was his name?...Bobby something.

“I know what your thinking, you cant believe you ran from me, with you being the almighty Hades and me just being the waiter boy” he said, breathing normally, there pure hate in his eyes, only one of them was going to live through this night, I'm F**ked he thought. Bobby was nearly back to full strength. “Tell you what Mr Hades, I'm not going to kill you, I'm just going to break both you legs and leave you right here.” . He did just that, he found a small wooden box, it was a square box, even on all sides, about 15 inches wide, long and tall. He placed the leg over the box, side ways (the box going from his knee to around half way down his shins). He placed his right leg on Mr Hades's left knee, jumped up and brought down his left leg hard on Hades's lower shin. Hades screamed as loud as he could but the rain canceled out his screams. It took 3 attempts, 1st attempt only dislocated his ankle and the other one weakened just enough for the third strike. He repeated the same for Hades's right leg, after finishing it, dragged him further down the alleyway and left him to die.

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what do you think?
 
you should be writing HULK FIC!!

Love what you did here and I think your style would work great in the Hulk fandom.

Let me know if you've ever written anything "Hulk'ish"

.... and make sure to provide links! :)
 
Gangland
Chapter 2

Early next morning a ford sedan came to a screeching halt in front of the city hospital's entrance. Three men got out of the car, walked hurriedly through the huge doors and into the front waiting area. Two of the men were heavy set and looked like brothers. Big fat round faces with bushy beards. They flanked a tall, bald man who was in his 50's. He stood about six foot eight and had very broad shoulders. He wasnt muscular but looked very powerful, like the way a lumberjack would. He had a round face and wore glasses.

All of them walked past the waiting area and to the reception desk. The lady at the desk was only five feet tall and the bald man looked like a giant to her, a very pissed off giant. “Elevator? ” he asked the receptionist, she hesitated a bit and pointed to her left where the large room had another set of doors , “Left” she said and took a step back. On the third floor, the three men walked down a long and wide hallway. The bald man saw a figure sitting outside a room. The man sitting was very old, in his late 60's, short, wore glasses and had a cane next to his chair. Doctors, patients and nurses walked by. The old man saw the three of them walk towards him and reached for his cane. “no no, please,sit” the bald man said. The 2 brothers went inside the room to look at their associate. “You didnt need to come here Cconn” the old man said.

Cconn stood in front of the open door and looked in. Hades was attached to a lot of machines, it looked like someone had gone at him with a sledgehammer. His face was half covered in bandages and the other half was coved in tubes going from the machines to him. “Who?” asked Cconn, still looking at Hades. The old man took out a hanker chief and started to wipe his glasses , “so far all we know is that 3 guys jumped him when he went to collect our money. One of them might be a kid named Bobby Valentine. He works at the restaurant where it started.”. “How do you know?” Cconn asked, he was pacing now, from one side of the hallway to the other. “Two days ago Hades said he had some trouble there from a waiter boy but he also said he took care of it. I'm guessing the kid thought other wise”. He put his hanker chief back in his pocket and wore his glasses. “Bruce, you find this little s**t.” said Cconn, the brothers walked out of their associate's room. He started walking back to the elevator but remembered a question he wanted to ask Master Bruce, he turned around but Master Bruce knew what it was ,“Cops dont know anything, someone found him around 3 or 4 in the morning and he was out cold then.” he said while using the cane to get out of his chair. Cconn did another 180 and walked towards the elevator and left the hospital.


sorry about the long wait, moving house is a b**ch!!!
 
Excellent update,i like how this is developing:up:good to see you back Sava;)
 

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