This !!! It tried to pull a Goodfellas with a murder affecting the characters later in the series but i didn't feel it was needed. Bobby Cannavale is awesome though, so is Juno Temple and the overall feel of the series. Dialogue is pretty good if not great (although not as good as the Wolf of Wall Street) and it has the Scorsese's exuberance as a huge plus. The Pilot looked beautiful.I liked it. Scorsese's directing really elevated the lesser script at times. It could have been shorter. The sub plot with Rogers was unnecessary and the whole murder thing just felt easy and tacked on to create drama. Outside that and a few things a solid pilot.
Ratings weren't so hot for the premiere, with only 764,000 viewers.
http://www.vulture.com/2016/02/hbo-vinyl-premiere-low-ratings.html
Granted, it did go up against The Walking Dead (and will continue to do so for most of its run) but if it doesn't improve this could be a one-and-done. It doesn't help that the reviews are mostly average too.
Jesus, Cannavale was a freight train for that first half hour.