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Ok this a treatment written for Hellboy 3 - please take time to read this and give feedback.
Hellboy 3: The Devil Awoken
"Samael - one of Gods most trusted angels, lead
a rebellion in heaven, God cast Samael to hell
and renamed him Lucifer"
"Anum - was one of Gods watcher angels, he
sided with Samael and was one of the first to
rebel, he dared to reach into the sky and steal
a handful of Gods own Power, Flamma Reconditus,
VRIL - Anum was destroyed but the secrete of
how to harness the VRIL wasa passed down to the
first men, The Hyperboreans, That power made
Hyperborea a Paradise and then it all
disappeared"
Story: 1937 - Lobster Johnson track down Nazi's
at a hotel. They are following a guy who is
heading back to his room. Lobster Johnson
interveins and speaks to the guy who has been
given a unique artifact "Anum's Folk" Soon the
Nazi's appear and Lobster Johnson fights them
off, However they came in numbers and kind of
overpower him. Suddenly a mysterious guy
appears, It's Lucifer, he's come to retrieve
Anum's Folk To harness its power and bring
about the end of the world. However Lobster
Johnson manages to break free and use the
device causing the place to be destroying
Lucifer and himself in the process... The
Goverment then obtains Anum's Folk of which
they form B.P.R.D to investigate any strange
activity. Fast Forward to 2012 - after
revealing himself to the public, Hellboy and
Liz have left the Bureau to set up life in
seclusion and to prepair for Hellboy's twins.
However unbeknown to her, Lucifer has enhanced
her powers, and with the pregnant mood swings
she is unable to control her powers, Hellboy
and Liz then return to the Bureau to seek help.
Elsewhere Roderick Zinco - adventurer discovers
the mausoleum (From Hellboy 1) during his
exploration he finds Kroenen. He is sucessful
in reviving him and what its found is during
Kroenen's slumber Lucifer came to him, and told
him of his greatist plan to do what Rasputin
could not. But to do so they need to capture
Hellboy. Back at the Bureau Liz is undergoing
experiments to help control her power but
Manning fears that they maybe at a loss. Not
long after saying that Lucifer turns up, notes
Roger and increases Liz's power so she loses
total control, and flames go everywhere, Liz's
energy force is sucked into Roger, who awakes
and in a confused dazed state wrecks the bureau
and escape. Liz now catatonic and life signs
fading Hellboy with Abe is sent to capture
Roger and retrieve Liz's energy force. They
manage to track down Roger out in the open.
After short fight they manage to talk to Roger
and realise that he is just afraid, he agree's
to go back to the bureau when Kroenen attacks,
Hellboy then fights with Kroenen however using
some of Zinco's technology he is able to
capture him, He then escapes using one of
Zinco's helicopters with Hellboy powerless and
captive. Abe helps Roger return to the bureau
where Roger gives Liz her energy force back,
making him go dorment, Abe then informs them
that Hellboy has been captured by Kroenen and
depands a powerful artifact to be returned to
him "Anum's Folk" - Manning has a meeting, and
brings in Kate Corrigen who works at there
storage warehouse where Anum's Folk is located,
also in the meeting is Abe and Krauss who
discuss Hellboy's fate. Liz interupts the
meeting still recovering from her ordeal she
can not believe what she is hearing. As they
argue a voice tells them there is more to
consider its from Lobster Johnson who appears
in the room. Nobody knows how he got there,
weather he is an apperition or living body it
is left unknown but what he tells them is that
they have to pick the lesser of two evil's, On
one hand you have Hellboy who can open the gate
between two worlds and release Ragna Rok, On
the other hand you have Anum's Folk which can
reshape the earth! He then tells them that
Lucifer is behind this and that his abilies
have grown strong and no living soul can fight
him. they need to find someone soul-less that
can fight for there cause... Roger! As Lobster
Johnson disappears, Manning calls upon Krauss
to help revive Roger, but his teleplasy cant
hold him for long, they need a stronger force,
Kate suggests that they use Anum's Folk to
revive him, They do but the folk gets lodged
into him. Roger now revived agree's to help the
Bureau. Meanwhile on Zinco's island Hellboy is
being held captive, suddenly Lucifer turns up
and speaks with Hellboy, he tries to make
Lucifer see his vision and tells him that his
real perpose is to reshape the world. Hellboy
resists but his mind is slowly being tared
away. During this time Hellboy enters a
dreamlike state where he speaks with Professor
Bruttenholm who tells him that Hellboy has been
given a choice that. Something that those who
service the afterlife are rarely given. Angels
live in servituted to God, Samael tried to
rebel and was cast to hell as Lucifer, This
seems to re-assure Hellboy to stay on the side
of good. Back at the bureau, Manning leads the
team to Zinco's island, with Abe, Krauss, Liz
and Roger teamed up. They are greated by
Zinco's on private body guards who try to fight
them but they head to the temple built for
Lucifer. In the temple Lucifer senses there
presence and the presence of Anum's Folk. By
this time Lucifers powers increase and destorys
Roderick Zinco thanking him for all his service
and in Hell he will have a place... he orders
Kroenen to release the undead. Kroenens side
project was to create a side army of deceased
clones like himself brought back to life by his
technology, these Robo-Zombie like beings awake
and start to walk forth waiting for Kroenens
command. As The group reach the temple they
enter to find Hellboy chained up. He is at
breaking point when suddenly the place is
sealed with Lucifer stood upon high. He calls
for the undead to attack, and uses his powers
to cause the B.P.R.D group to be unable to
move. However Roger is uneffected, He manages
to fight Luficer who breaks his spell over the
others meaning they can fight the Undead. As
Lucifer and Roger fight, Lucifer manages to
retrieve Anum's folk from Rogers chest, Roger
is then thrown to the floor beside Hellboy. With his last ounce of life he manages to free Hellboy, Hellboy then fights Lucifer in the process Hellboy charges up Anum's fork with the power he has in his Right Hand. This oblitorates Lucifer which causes all the undead plus Kroenen to return to the dead State. They head back to the bureau with Roger, Roger awakes, Anum's folk had given him a small spark of his own, Liz gives birth to two Hellions and thus the world is safe for another day. Manning asks if Hellboy will return but he looks at Roger and says they have a new brute fighting for there cause, Liz and Hellboy leave for Family Life...
Theeeee End!
So tell me what you think,
Hellboy 3: The Devil Awoken
"Samael - one of Gods most trusted angels, lead
a rebellion in heaven, God cast Samael to hell
and renamed him Lucifer"
"Anum - was one of Gods watcher angels, he
sided with Samael and was one of the first to
rebel, he dared to reach into the sky and steal
a handful of Gods own Power, Flamma Reconditus,
VRIL - Anum was destroyed but the secrete of
how to harness the VRIL wasa passed down to the
first men, The Hyperboreans, That power made
Hyperborea a Paradise and then it all
disappeared"
Story: 1937 - Lobster Johnson track down Nazi's
at a hotel. They are following a guy who is
heading back to his room. Lobster Johnson
interveins and speaks to the guy who has been
given a unique artifact "Anum's Folk" Soon the
Nazi's appear and Lobster Johnson fights them
off, However they came in numbers and kind of
overpower him. Suddenly a mysterious guy
appears, It's Lucifer, he's come to retrieve
Anum's Folk To harness its power and bring
about the end of the world. However Lobster
Johnson manages to break free and use the
device causing the place to be destroying
Lucifer and himself in the process... The
Goverment then obtains Anum's Folk of which
they form B.P.R.D to investigate any strange
activity. Fast Forward to 2012 - after
revealing himself to the public, Hellboy and
Liz have left the Bureau to set up life in
seclusion and to prepair for Hellboy's twins.
However unbeknown to her, Lucifer has enhanced
her powers, and with the pregnant mood swings
she is unable to control her powers, Hellboy
and Liz then return to the Bureau to seek help.
Elsewhere Roderick Zinco - adventurer discovers
the mausoleum (From Hellboy 1) during his
exploration he finds Kroenen. He is sucessful
in reviving him and what its found is during
Kroenen's slumber Lucifer came to him, and told
him of his greatist plan to do what Rasputin
could not. But to do so they need to capture
Hellboy. Back at the Bureau Liz is undergoing
experiments to help control her power but
Manning fears that they maybe at a loss. Not
long after saying that Lucifer turns up, notes
Roger and increases Liz's power so she loses
total control, and flames go everywhere, Liz's
energy force is sucked into Roger, who awakes
and in a confused dazed state wrecks the bureau
and escape. Liz now catatonic and life signs
fading Hellboy with Abe is sent to capture
Roger and retrieve Liz's energy force. They
manage to track down Roger out in the open.
After short fight they manage to talk to Roger
and realise that he is just afraid, he agree's
to go back to the bureau when Kroenen attacks,
Hellboy then fights with Kroenen however using
some of Zinco's technology he is able to
capture him, He then escapes using one of
Zinco's helicopters with Hellboy powerless and
captive. Abe helps Roger return to the bureau
where Roger gives Liz her energy force back,
making him go dorment, Abe then informs them
that Hellboy has been captured by Kroenen and
depands a powerful artifact to be returned to
him "Anum's Folk" - Manning has a meeting, and
brings in Kate Corrigen who works at there
storage warehouse where Anum's Folk is located,
also in the meeting is Abe and Krauss who
discuss Hellboy's fate. Liz interupts the
meeting still recovering from her ordeal she
can not believe what she is hearing. As they
argue a voice tells them there is more to
consider its from Lobster Johnson who appears
in the room. Nobody knows how he got there,
weather he is an apperition or living body it
is left unknown but what he tells them is that
they have to pick the lesser of two evil's, On
one hand you have Hellboy who can open the gate
between two worlds and release Ragna Rok, On
the other hand you have Anum's Folk which can
reshape the earth! He then tells them that
Lucifer is behind this and that his abilies
have grown strong and no living soul can fight
him. they need to find someone soul-less that
can fight for there cause... Roger! As Lobster
Johnson disappears, Manning calls upon Krauss
to help revive Roger, but his teleplasy cant
hold him for long, they need a stronger force,
Kate suggests that they use Anum's Folk to
revive him, They do but the folk gets lodged
into him. Roger now revived agree's to help the
Bureau. Meanwhile on Zinco's island Hellboy is
being held captive, suddenly Lucifer turns up
and speaks with Hellboy, he tries to make
Lucifer see his vision and tells him that his
real perpose is to reshape the world. Hellboy
resists but his mind is slowly being tared
away. During this time Hellboy enters a
dreamlike state where he speaks with Professor
Bruttenholm who tells him that Hellboy has been
given a choice that. Something that those who
service the afterlife are rarely given. Angels
live in servituted to God, Samael tried to
rebel and was cast to hell as Lucifer, This
seems to re-assure Hellboy to stay on the side
of good. Back at the bureau, Manning leads the
team to Zinco's island, with Abe, Krauss, Liz
and Roger teamed up. They are greated by
Zinco's on private body guards who try to fight
them but they head to the temple built for
Lucifer. In the temple Lucifer senses there
presence and the presence of Anum's Folk. By
this time Lucifers powers increase and destorys
Roderick Zinco thanking him for all his service
and in Hell he will have a place... he orders
Kroenen to release the undead. Kroenens side
project was to create a side army of deceased
clones like himself brought back to life by his
technology, these Robo-Zombie like beings awake
and start to walk forth waiting for Kroenens
command. As The group reach the temple they
enter to find Hellboy chained up. He is at
breaking point when suddenly the place is
sealed with Lucifer stood upon high. He calls
for the undead to attack, and uses his powers
to cause the B.P.R.D group to be unable to
move. However Roger is uneffected, He manages
to fight Luficer who breaks his spell over the
others meaning they can fight the Undead. As
Lucifer and Roger fight, Lucifer manages to
retrieve Anum's folk from Rogers chest, Roger
is then thrown to the floor beside Hellboy. With his last ounce of life he manages to free Hellboy, Hellboy then fights Lucifer in the process Hellboy charges up Anum's fork with the power he has in his Right Hand. This oblitorates Lucifer which causes all the undead plus Kroenen to return to the dead State. They head back to the bureau with Roger, Roger awakes, Anum's folk had given him a small spark of his own, Liz gives birth to two Hellions and thus the world is safe for another day. Manning asks if Hellboy will return but he looks at Roger and says they have a new brute fighting for there cause, Liz and Hellboy leave for Family Life...
Theeeee End!
So tell me what you think,
