MaskedMan's Drawing Emporium

[MaskedManJRK]

Latest sketch I did--scanned it to see if any of the other (i.e. better) artists here can tell me if there's any big anatomy problems before I ink it. Let me know what you think--SHOW NO MERCY!

 

[StrainedEyes]

I did this real quick to try and give you a better jumping off point.

Google anatomy, or bodybuilders, and work off of real images. It will help you out immensely.

 

[lixdexia]

if he's swinging from a line, when the line is perpindicular to the connection point he cannot physicaly be perpindicular to the line. thus, he should swing his legs and back forward, not backward

 

[MaskedManJRK]

I did this real quick to try and give you a better jumping off point.

Google anatomy, or bodybuilders, and work off of real images. It will help you out immensely.

Wow.

I was just holding up for tips on what to improve. Thanks a hell of a bunch, sir, I'll definately use that as a guideline. t:

if he's swinging from a line, when the line is perpindicular to the connection point he cannot physicaly be perpindicular to the line. thus, he should swing his legs and back forward, not backward

So you mean that both of his legs would be ahead of him?

 

[StrainedEyes]

Wow.

I was just holding up for tips on what to improve. Thanks a hell of a bunch, sir, I'll definately use that as a guideline. t:



So you mean that both of his legs would be ahead of him?

He means that, his whole body would be almost parallel with the rope when the rope is at that angle.



Watch for whenever the web line is parallel with the street, like the rope in your picture.

 

[lixdexia]

Wow.

I was just holding up for tips on what to improve. Thanks a hell of a bunch, sir, I'll definately use that as a guideline. t:

how long have you been drawing?

So you mean that both of his legs would be ahead of him?

yeah, but most of his body wold be in line with the rope

 

[MaskedManJRK]

Mix of old and new.

Old

New

Thoughts?

 

[BubbaGump]

Anatomy and life drawing, dude. Before you draw a woman clothed, you gotta draw her nekkiddddd.

Nudity (but for artistic purposes!!!):

Spoiler

A woman's hips and arms aren't straight like in your Nazi lady. You've also got hairy line syndrome. Try to be more in control of your lines. And work on the faces! Pick up How to Draw Comics the Marvel Way. It's the perfect stepping stone for a beginner.

The Hype isn't really the best place for fan-art critique. Go to conceptart.org, start a sketchbook, and people will feed you some nice critiques (seriously, they're nice!).

Draw everyday, study anatomy, and you'll see some improvement. Good luck!

 

[MaskedManJRK]

Anatomy and life drawing, dude. Before you draw a woman clothed, you gotta draw her nekkiddddd.

Nudity (but for artistic purposes!!!):

Spoiler

A woman's hips and arms aren't straight like in your Nazi lady. You've also got hairy line syndrome. Try to be more in control of your lines. And work on the faces! Pick up How to Draw Comics the Marvel Way. It's the perfect stepping stone for a beginner.

The Hype isn't really the best place for fan-art critique. Go to conceptart.org, start a sketchbook, and people will feed you some nice critiques (seriously, they're nice!).

Draw everyday, study anatomy, and you'll see some improvement. Good luck!

Thanks for the critique. Never heard of that site, I'll definately check it out.

And I'm more than willing to do anatomy/life drawing with women nekkid. Any willing vollunteers?

Now I feel guilty of posting my newest piece, but oh well. Here it is:

 

[MaskedManJRK]

Here's my newest drawing:

Here's my reference pic, taking from a poster from the movie version, played by Rosario Dawson.

Thoughts?