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its been in planning forever-heres the final thing. someone please read it, i think its good and would like to now what others think.

The w.b. logo appears, the skys behind it blacken, it transforms into an upside down gotham city as we flip with it to see gotham city at night. Pan back to see we’re in Bruce Waynes study-Wayne is there, staring out the window. Wayne Manors completely rebuilt. “the theme plays subtly”-music will be a big part of this one. It is mentioned a lot. Bruce is waiting for something-he sees it. The bat signal illuminats the air. We follow bruce in his suit-down the elevator, into the newer looking batcave-pavement over the rocks. The creditsroll with this, this is the credit sequence. Improved computer. He suits up, and Alfred watches as the batmobile bolts out of the cave, and utters “It has begun”.
Cut to Gotham City docks-theres a major drug bust gone wrong. Cops are held hostages, while the dealers control of the docks. Cops are gathered behind a hill, watching as the drug dealers have blocked off the entrances gate. Gordon is with Loeb, Flass, and others. Suddenly, out of the night sky, theres a huge thunder. Seconds later and we seethe drug dealers at the gate look up in horror-the Batmobile ROARS off an overpass, 25 feet in the air and heading straight for them! Twin missiles shoot out from the front, blowing the empty gate houses and taking out the barrier as Batman simultaneously ejects and disappears into the night sky. The dealers dunk and scramble as He quickly takes them out while they try to shoot and hit. With the gate open and guards taken out, the cops swarm in. In a watch post above, a dealer readys a gatling gun to use on the cops-Batman quickly sneaks up behind him and takes him down. The dealers move the hostages onto a army type helicopter, and a trying to pull away while the cops round up the hostages. The chopper takes off as the cops watch, pissed that they got away. We now find out the mayor is in there! Suddenly, Batman grapple shooting up to-Batman is being dragged by the chopper in midair ala Batman forever, leaving behind a pile of knocked out thugs. Batman climbs up to the chopper, takes out the dealer, but the pilot jumps out. batman grabs the 3 gagged hostage and lowers them onto the rooftop passing below, and then tries to steer the helicopter out of Gotham. The tails don’t fit in the alley, and crashes into an alley, batman barely escaping.
After the spectacular opening scene, we got back to Wayne Manor. Alfred waiting up, in pj’s and obviously tired. Bruce arrives, a cut on his face. Its obvious from the silence between the two that alfred doesn’t want bruce to be batman. The next day at Wayne Enterprises, Bruce chats with Lucious fox that bruce has a meeting with Roman Sionis, in from LONDON to discuss Wayne Enterprises handling the construction of some Sionis cosmetics companies in Gotham.

Three sthiis MASSIVE Sionis tower then is opening in 2 weeks we learn, and bruce is being paid handsomely to prepare it. Romans an ugly and intimidating guy, and the 2 do not get along. The next meeting-with Lucious Fox in the same old basement, except now everything is reorganized, and much newer, and with lots of people working there. He shows bruce this amazing stealth fighter jet hes found. Its very small and wide, and very sleek. Bruce loves it, and “has it delivered to his house”. Fox is no idiot, but he does not let on he knows bruce is batman.

Its that night when Bruce is at dinner that he meets HARVEY DENT, aplay boyish type of district attorney.

He also meets SILVER ST. CLOUD a world famous actress in town shooting her latest blockbuster. Damn fine, too. She and bruce hit it off, so to speak, and end up back at his place. She’s asleep around 12:30, and bruce sneaks off and goes out to the batcave. Hes curious and types into the batcomputer bout wether or sionis has a crime record or not.

Meanwhile, across town, we see a very important business bruce met at dinner walking into the elevator of his apartment.

Next morning bruce wakes up and finds out he died, and the police seem to think batman did it. curious, bruce kisses silver good bye, and goes to town. Its here he meets up with Rachel dawes for lunch. We learn they usually meet once a month. Rachel good; going on a date with Harvey Dent that night. Meanwhile, brittish mob boss OSWALD COBBLEPOT arrives at the gotham city docks, and meets with SALVATORE MARONI. Apparently cobblepots got some goods ship there and is awaiting the last shipment to arrive before he can sell them.

They mention batman, and we learn its been their plan to frame him and they have hired somebody to do it. appearently this person REALLY wanted the job. Meanwhile, silver surprised Bruce during a huge business meeting. She so gorgeous and charismatic that nobody else minds, infcat they seem to ENJOY her company and bruce plays it off very well, and it scores major points for silver.

That night batman meets up with Gordon on the roof, where he tells Gordon he did not kill the businessman. Gordon knows that, but Harvey dent who was in the shadows aint so sure, and comes out accusing batman of it. it ends with batman telling off dent, and leaving. Meanwhile across town we see another murder(it has ALREADY HAPPENED) and we see the BLACKMASK fleeing the scene. Of course bystanders say its batman. Batman shows up, and tangos with blackmask for a minute before making his way to the crime scene; where loeb tells his men to arrest him, and batman is forced to flee.

Pissed, Batman flees to the docks where he meets up with TOYMAN in a dark warehouse, and demands to know who is framing him. Toyman says the joker and batman says “Joker’s been gone for years. 2 murders and up and leaves”. Batman swoops by rachel’s office, and inquires if shes heard anything on the joker being around. She says no, but shes going to arkham to find out tomorrow. Bruce says not to it’s a danger zone, but she says “I go where im needed”. Dent interrupts, and Rachel turns to see him come in, and turns around and batmans vanished.

That night at the computer, Batman searches long for the joker’s picture. He tells Alfred whoevers doing must have a reason to want batman out of the way; something big has got to be happening. Also, the computers results for roman sionis reveal several assult and battery charges.


The next day bruce meets up with Roman Sionis again, and this time plants a homing bug on him. Bruce then goes outside with Alfred, about to drive when he sees a huge newspaper-“SILVER ST. CLOUD DATING BRUCE WAYNE!” their relationship is a huge deal to the gossipers. Bruce takes notice at a side column-“BATMAN WANTE DIN BUSINESSMAN MURDER!” While going to dinner that night, they ward off a swarm of reporters. Bruce even shoves some down in a very playboyish/******* way to make room for them, and of course silver thinks its fine.

While they see Harvey and Rachel on a date as well, and bruce’s playboy image is against it, is against it, silver invites them to join them for dinner and they do. They have a long convo about Batman and such, Silver says she feels Batman’s doing more harm then good. He is the one attacting all these psychos. Dent reveals rumor has it joker has been hiding out for a while, planning something. They are onto him. Bruce is interested. Meanwhile a the gpd, Gordon is in a council where loeb briefs them batmans to be taken down.

Hes taken the law too far with the murders. Gordon says they have no evidence, and the guys considered a hero. Obviously loeb shuts him down, tells the cops to knock him out and remove his mask first and foremost, and get a picture of his face. Back to Bruce, they drop of Silver at her hotel. Later Bruce confesses to Alfred in the cave before going out, he really likes silver. He doesn’t know why, he is just drawn to her.

Meanwhile, he follows the homing bug on Roman Sionis, and follows him to the docks.


To his surprise, he spots a short, fat Brittish man, who he realizes is Oswald Cobblepot(he takes a photo via BATCAMERA and searches results-alfred tells him the results), a famous London Gangster. Batman crouches in the shadows of the docks in a stack of wooden crates high above, he opens a crates and finds BALLOONS upon BALLOONS of this gas.

He snags one. Sionis and Cobblepot go into a warehouse, and Batman moves and hangs-upside down-outside the window, positioned to hear what’s happening on the inside. He spot’s Maroni, and now he knows their up to no good. He listens in as they talk about shipments being delivered on the 12th and 14th. Cobblepot will be making sure their sent and Maroni is making sure their delivered. “him and his guy sionis will keep the problem at bay” says Maroni, referring to someone off screen. Then another voice enters. The Joker. This is his first scene. They act like hes been there all along.


Joker tells them the problems being settled as they speak, and his boy romans done a great job. Batmans got all this in his headphone, with Alfred back at the bat cave recording it. Then a light shines on batman –“you there! Who are you! Don’t move-holy **** its him-stop-“ But Batmans already off and on the ground-the men instinctively shoot down at him into the darkness. Inside, joker, maroni, sionis and cobblepot react to the gunfire. Maroni whips out a shotgun, penguin a pistol. Sionis goes off by himself, while Joker doesn’t move, as if nothings happening. Maroni and Cobblepot arrive outside, and bark orders at their men “WHERED HE GO!?”-the men mobilize outside, spot lights shine down. They don’t want him leaving, now with what he could know. Cuts between the mobilizing men and a fast moving Batman evading the man in the stacks of wooden crates.


He finds a latter and begins a climb up. Maroni and his men get in carS, while Cobblepot escapes cowardly to his office. Meanwhile, Batman reaches the rooftop of the warehouse, and “blows off” the latter before Maronis men can get to it. A foot in a purple suit leg steps into frame. “is that anyway to treat public property?”- Batman turns-the joker is there opposite on the roof.

Brief words are exchanged-classic Joker-“nice suit”-good stuff. Joker whips out a Magnum pistol but Batman reaches for a Batarang-somehow JOKER HAS IT-“Whats wrong, Batman? Have you lost your Bat, Man?” as he holds up the batarang. The joker laughs and takes off. On the ground below, Maroni and his men hear the laugh. “hes on the roof!”. Joker begins running along the roof tops, leaping across the alleys. Batman follows. Joker reaches his destination-an already in motion army helicopter, his men inside. Joker climbs in.

He takes off, and Batman jumps and grabs a hold of the Bottom landing leg. He hangs on and climbs up as they pull out over Gotham. Joker barks at his men to go to Gotham Sqaure. They do. Then, Joker opens the door-Batman is there. Joker kicks him, Batman catches his leg and tries to pull him out, but a quick jolt to the side of the chopper and Batman PLUMMETS off the chopper, 100 feet in the air! Cops on the street see the chaos, and then see Batman. Joker grins at his men as the cops mobilize around the rooftop. “Fare-thee-well”.

The chopper takes off, and a bewildered Batman comes to as cops flood the rooftop-Batman gets up and runs. He comes to the back of an alley leading to gotham square. He sprints hard and leaps off the roof into the alley. In slow motion we watch as he takes out grapple-fires it-twin grapples latch onto either sides of the alley creating a human swing-Batman lunges forward. Out of slow mo, he swings down then back up, and soars over Gotham Square in a huge arc, 100s of feet above the ground. His wings catch air and he’s preparing to fly.

It appears like hes heading right for the cops. They shoot him down “mid-flight” and he spirals slow at first, then fast and faster till he hits. Hes knocked out but his wings broke his fall. A huge cargo truck SKIDS to a stop just inches from his face, and he causes a 4 car pile up and some fender benders. As a huge crowd gathers around the lit square. Cops force their way through the crowd to the unconscious hero. Back up cops arrive on horseback. The cops have a camera, ready to listen to Loeb. “what should we do”…”take off the mask”. A brave cop reaches down and tugs at the mask-it comes off. But as it does, suddenly black gas immerges.


Their blinds as bats. Choking and back away, we see through the gas that it also simultaneously revives a now unmasked Batman. His eyes have an intimidating black make up around them. Batman leaps on top of the cargo truck and runs, and jumps down, landing on an unoccupied horses back. The crowd and cops just feet away with back turns, Batman whispers “giddy up”. The horse takes off down the road, with people on side walks standing and pointing in terror. A cop turns to his horse to see its gone-spots Batman. He shouts to his men, who mobilize into their cars while other run and others chase on horse. Batman gallops away and right into Gotham park, staring up at a statue of a soldier on horseback.


Batman takes off, and heads for a stone bridge, as cops invade the park. Suddenly the batmobile zooms by the cops, who all turn and begin chasing. It cuts into the woods, swirving in and out of trees with cops cars crashing and get caught. The batmobile banks hard right, and is in the open. It comes to a stop-Batman gets in. he was controlling from the bridge via pad. The cops catch up and the batmobile off across the park, weaving around statues and sidewalks.


A couple walk their dog when the batmobile blares by and they dive for cover into the bush’s. just when they think its safe to get up 5 cops cars blare past. The batmobile pulls a hard right and heads back towards the city. One cop car cant stop and slams through a fence before flipping over. Twin cop cars get on the batmobile side and bump it until it falls sideways, tumbling over and over down a hill and crashing into the lake. It becomes a submersive and appears out the other end, and speeds through a cop barrier and into Gotham, turning hard and entering the gotham elevated expressway- an elevated highway 5 stories up, surrounded by immense skyscraper overshadowing the road.


It’s pretty crowded as the sky scrappers peer down. At this point we see that Maronis men are in 4 big black SUV’S pursuing the batmobile. 2 catch up and out of the sunroof pop out men with machine guns, raining bullets onto the batmobile. It cuts away. The men with machine guns decide to clear a path, and fire rounds at the 3 cars between the batmobile. The back car explodes while one skids out and slams through the wall, out into gotham city, smashing through a skyway before landing hard on the ground in an insane fireball. The other fishtails and is hit by another vehicle. Batman is pissed at this, and stop hard. The first suv behind slams into the back of the backpeddling batmobile, and is flipped into the air, and lands hard upside down infront of the batmobile. The batmobile then speeds away as the cops rejoin the chase. Batman turns hard and drives down a long solo lane bridge and onto the other expressway in the opposite way. He then slams off through the wall, through a building, and pops out the otherside on the other side of the highway again with maronis in pursuit and cops everywhere.


The 3 remaining suv’s catch up, and cut off the cop cars. Which collide and cause a 8 car pile up with a spectacular wreck flying over the cars and landing upside. Batman swerves away with the suvs stopping at nothing. Batman lays oil slick in the road, and then ignites with the backflame. One car drives the fire, the rest around it. The last one the men jump out and the car goes into the fire and explodes hugely in the middle of the freeway. 2suvs remain. Then out of nowhere, the jokers helicopter rejoins the chase, roaring up alongside batman. He rains gunfire onto the batmobile. Joker appears with a rocket launcher. He shoots. Batman pulls a swerve and the bullet explodes in the pavement right under one of the suv’s, sending it soaring into the air, flipping over and landing right side. broken, but the men ok. 1 suv left. The joker barks into a walkie talkie where batman is and soon 3 trucks appear in the chase, men firing.



The joker drives the helicopter insanely low, cars swerve to get out of the way but the chopper hits some, crushing their roofs and causing them to flip over. One hits the mid section and pulls a barrel roll while spinning back wards. The batmobile sees lots of people are getting hurt, and tries to pull away. The suv and 3 trucks pull up. The police back off and try to clean up the mess being left. An overpass comes up, and joker flys the helicopter under the overpass and bumps the batmobile, causing it fishtail in a circle before betting batman on track. The remaining suv pulls up and tries to run the batmobile off the road. Batman stops the short, and slams through the mid barrier, across the entire other side of the freeway tipping cars, and out of the war and into the gotham river. The men swim out. The freeway circles around back through the heart of gotham. The 3 trucks now try to box batman in on eachside. Batman is stuck, and they speed up, the batmobile comes to a total stop as anchors shoot out and crab lights poles-knocking down 3 each side before finally attaching and stopping the batmobile. The trucks on the left and right sides smash into eachother, and skid out, totaled. 1 truck left, and no suvs. Joker appears with another rocket and fires it down. Batman ejects as the batmobile gets blown to smithereens.
 
He injects in a sick cockpit controlled motorbike. It’s a tiny, sleek motorcycle that shoots out of the car, batman lying down on it with twin tires controlling it. He now whizzes forward, between cars at a blistering pace, outrunning everyone but the chopper. Bullet riddle behind him, as batman pulls a 180 and heads back the opposite way in the same lane going against traffic, confusing everybody and they all have to turn around AGAIN. After a minute of chasing, joker nails the back tire with bullets and batman inflates his wings and gluides onto the roof an eighteen wheeler. He is unmasked. The helicopter speeds up and batman tries to run to the front of the 18 wheeler but the chopper HITS HIM and knocks him forward.


He almost falls off but hangs onto the edge. He pulls himself up as the chopper spins back around, this time raining gunfire. Batman dives the side, landing as bullets riddle the roof and appear out through the other side right next to him. Joker runs out of ammo, when BLACKMASK appears in the chopper and leaps down onto the roof. Hair combed down and eye make up prevent sionis from realizing its bruce. There have a big fight, batman winning. Blackmask is ontop of him choking him, and batman kicks him off all the way into the street. His costume prevents serious injury. Batman now begins to make his the cabin when the chopper swoops over head and he ducks down. Meanwhile, all the cars have basically cleared the area behind them. Batman turns fires a grapple into the helicopter wings-it gets stuck. And slows down. Batman leaps into the truck cabin, and the driver out of fear jumps out.


Joker loses control of the chopper and jumps out, and he and blackmask are picked up by the SUV. The chopper slams down and hits right into the underbelly of the 18 wheelers back in a HUGE explosion as batman leaps out. The back end of the 18 wheel soars into the air and completely flips over and lands hard upsidedown, skidding of the freeway and down into gotham river, barely missing hitting the highway below. Joker gets out of the car, pissed.


Batman jumped out and he saw him, but now hes vanished and alive. They get in the car and drive away, and the cops arrive. Cut down, we see on the highway below batman is on the back of a car carrier, and is coasting towards east gotham-his home.
Word of the failed Batman-capture reaches the gpd, and dent, Gordon, and Rachel all find out. Bruce is resting in the cave(“well have to talk to fox about getting a new car”) when Rachel enters, asking if he is alright. Of course hes fine. Rachel says they didn’t get a pic of him without his mask, and that jokers officially back. Batman says he knows. Rachel says he murdered a family of 3-a father, a mother, and a young boy-who were on the way home from the movies the other night. This touches Bruce. Rachel then leaves. Bruce sits there, and we see a flashback-its bruce and his dad getting ready to go to the opera that night. Bruce asks why so many people are homeless, and his father says they’ve given up hope. He says “even at your worst low point, you have to carry on. You HAVE to”. The flashback ends, with bruce with a sad look on his face.


The next day, Bruce calls up with Lucious fox (on vacation in the Bahamas no less) and discusses where bruce could get his hands on a new tumbler. Also, bruce sends hima chemical break bruce did of the gas in the balloon batman took a sample of. He wants fox to determine the possible side effects. Quick phonecall, and everything is going smooth for the opening gala at Sionis Tower in a few nights. He visits silver whose done shooting her movie, and brings her on a walk. Bruce tells her about his troubled past, and of course she had a dream-like childhood. These people are-at their core-complete opposites yet bruce really likes her. She has a spark.


Meanwhile, Cobblepot and Maroni wanna know how Batmans alive and how come Joker man(Blackmask) couldn’t take him. Jokers at a loss for words, but it becomes clear he wont be threatened, as he shoves maroni down into his seat(“he don’t touch me!”) and barks at them “you don’t call the shots with Batman, got it!?”. It’s that night Bruce meets up with Gordon in his office. The big story isn’t joker, its batman. Batman tells him roman sionis is the blackmask, the man Batman fought. Gordon says “we know. A little group of us-me and Rachel-think he’s the one who framed you”. You might be right, but why?” batman says. He leaves, AND RETURNS TO THE BATCAVE. Bruce is now having bat doubts. He confesses to Alfred “hes never felt the way about a girl before that he feels with Silver”. He says he thinking Batman might do more harm then good.


All those people died yesterday during the chase because Joker and Blackmask wanted him dead. No Batman, those people are still alive. Of course Alfred reminds him, “Maybe so, but how many other families would be joker victims without you? How many other bruce waynes would that create? Food for thought master wayne, food for thought.”. Bruce then takes a picture of the joker gordon gave him, and runs it through his computer. He finds out the results and 1 catches his eye-JOHN BLAIN. He was an ex Sionis Cosmetics employee who was a head chemist searching for new potions and mixtures, who died in a freak accident with acid in perfume drenching his face. The pic of blain looks VERY similar to the joker.


It says John Blain has a history of where is he now, criminal record, and what really happened to him. At the “gotham city files department” is wher eit is. Bruce has no idea where it is, but Alfred points out its right outside town.
Batman flys the “bat chopper” to the government facility on the outskirts of Gotham(disguised a cookie company no less) and breaks in, and finds the governments file on John Blain. He worked for Sionis and Sionis is what got him killed-he fell into WAYNE ENTERPRISES chemicals. He takes the file, and battles of guards with a smoke bomb and karate kicks, and then swings away and escapes all the men in the chopper.


It’s a neat little scene. Batman arrives at Gordon office where they talk. Batman hands John Blain’s file. He worked for Sionis’s company, but was due to be fired for tampering with chemicals, when one of his experiments went haywire and transformed him into the joker. Now he has it out for Bruce Wayne and Roman Sionis, which is weird because Joker ha shired Sionis-Roman must not know who the Joker really is. He also says it is the same type chemical that Batman found so much of at the docks. He ends the conversation with” you have everything YOU need to take him down”.


After he leaves, we see Batman kept one file-the actual gas Blain created. We catch up with LUCIOUS FOX, on a plane home, reading the gad effects. “ohhh boy”.
-meanwhile, joker, Maroni, Cobblepot, and Sionis are having a meeting. Joker says he taking over all dealings. Maroni laughs and cobblepot gets pissed but out of nowhere joker SHOOTS maroni. Jokers thugs take out maronis thugs, and Sionis puts on his blackmask but joker brutally murders him by a shot to the head. Penguin flees. Joker orders his men t do a few things. Meanwhile, at rachels office, Lucious Fox gives her a ring. Fox says bruce wont answer his phone but this is urgent, and fox knows Rachel knows bruce.


he says he needs her to give bruce something.
We see bruce locking up the batcave(with Alfred’s over anxious help). Silver’s helped him realize hes doing more bad then good as batman, even if rachels disappointed, shes there in the cave with them, trying to get him to turn back, but bruce just tells her he has no choice, if he wants gotham to live on after him he has to stop. Before she leaves, she gives him a piece of paper. “Lucious Fox thought you might need it”. Rachel arrives at her office to fine Dent and Gordon waiting. Dent says Maroni was found shot in the chest, in critical condiction, and roman sionis, who Gordon says is blackmask, is missing with gala just hours away.(its 6 ocklock, gala begins at 8:30) “I doesn’t know if they will be seeing him around any time soon” She says of Batman to their confusion .Meanwhile, bruce picks up Silver, whose on her cell phone. Silver and Bruce are at dinner, where they have an intimate conversation.


Silver says how she despises Batman, and bruce says hes heard hes gone-police took him down-silver shoots him a very surprised look-does she KNOW something more? She gives bruce a very nice, brand new watch. He drops her off, and sits in his car, feeling like crap. A quick flash of Joker smiling and shooting an innocent boy off screen. Suddenly, we see 2 of Jokers men knock out Silver out-bruce gets out and do the same to him. It’s 7:45, dark out in a side street by gotham hotel.Bruce looks up and hears JOKER LUAGH as we fade out. Fade in-gotham city docks- by the river. Bruce knows what happens here. He demands to know where Silver is, but joker laughs-hes tied up. They bring out a tied up Silver, and joker KICKS him into the river. Bruce breaks out of it from sheer strength, and silver plunges down below him, and he swims down to take Siver.


MEANWHILE, jokers going forwards with his own plan with ALL OF the gas cobblepot was smuggling into maroni ands going to sell on the black market, hes going to do something with it at the innuaguration festival for Sionis Tower. Underwater, bruce grabs Silver-but then he sees it. blood is in the water. She’s been shot in the chest, she stares at him, lifelessly. Bruce floats to the surface, takes out jokers 3 men watching them. He is PISSED. He cries out very loudly. Meanwhile, Gordon, Dent, and Rachel look at the huge night time festival. They learn Sionis ordered a blimp at the last minute for the celebration-rachel gets it with an “uh-oh” she tells Gordon and dent –“Sionis is with Maroni-Maroni had all that gas that Jokers cleared out”-dent says “;what gas?” and Rachel explains luscious fox told her. Rachel says “Batman said they were transporting it in as BALLOONS”-“Disguising it as helium” says Gordon. “the kind of Hellium inside a blimp” dent says.



Meanwhile, Bruce stumbles in the front door of Wayne Manor. Alfred rushes to him saying “Evidently your taking the playboy thing a bit too far”- bruce tells him whats happened. Alfred cant believe it, then he rushes into the batcave, only to find Rachel Already there. She came in the OTHER way. Bruce tells her hes going to get the joker, and that Talia’s dead. Rachel yells at him “Killing Joker isn’t justice. Bring him down” bruce asks her why shes there- Rachel tells him Joker has a laughing gas filled blimp on the way to the party. Back at the festival, people dance and have fun, it’s a huge celebration.


Gordon urges Loeb to let Gordon go to the site and get people to leave. Loeb says no and if he doe she loses his job. With that, Gordon FLINGS loeb out of his car, and steals it, speeding away to the scene. Meanwhile, the blimp appears down the alley, en route the square. People point and look up in awe as joker voiceovers from the blimp “Ladies and Gentle boys and girls! Look up in the sky to see the greatest show on earth!”.

In the cave, Bruce rages. “Im going to kill him”. Alfred stares at him.” And then what, master bruce? You will become one of them. You and JOE CHILL will be one in the same.” Bruce turns, pissed. Alferd coldly states” When I was 20, and your grandfather-my seargent-told me to look after his little 5 year old so Thomas, I never imagined I’d be there to watch him his whle life tilll he passed. When your father died I made a promise to you and to him to look after you. I cannot let you kill him.” Bruce stares. “Innocent people will die if I don’t go”. Alfred stares him down, hard. “It’s the saving of the innocent that is more important then the punishing of the guilty, sir”. Bruce is defeated.

Back to the Tower- the blimp is nearly there-the crowd’s going nuts and cops woinder “who ordered this”. Back at the cave, Batman and Alfred walk out. Alfred says “How will you get there if cars in the shop, and the chopper out of gas?”. Batman says “Ill take the plane.”-alfred says “I don’t remember getting a plane master wayne” but the BATWING is already hovering before them from out the cave depths. Batman gets in, and takes off.

Rachel arrives at the square, and meets up with Dent and Gordon. They begin to try to evacuate people when the blimp nears and Joker voiceovers continue. Theres a supposed “countdown” till the blimp will light up and unleash “presents”. Joker counts down and everybody begins counting till one and blimp BLOWS up. People begin to choke on the gas, and flee, until the batwing shows up. It drops bombs into the air which explode-little gas in them REACT with Joker gas to make it disappear. Batman tells alfred in the mic-“remind me to thank luscious for that”. It’s now we realize JOKER is actually on the very top of the roof of sionis tower. He was speaking and controlling it from below. Rachel catches on, and rushes inside the building and up the elevator. Dent doesn’t know where she went-


On the roof, Pissed, joker pulls out the same heat seeking rocket launcher from the car chase, and fires it at the batwing. The wing’s blown off, and it crashes into the streets. Dent and Gordon cannot believe it-they think hes dead!. They are the only 2 people who remain as the street is now disserted and a disaster zone. Batman jumps out of the wreckage, alive. Joker men then attack him-nbatman fight them through the park where crash landed, before gluiding down to the towers base. He fires his grapple to the roof and flys upwards. Dent sees this, and realizes that’s where joker is. He rushes inside. On the roof, batman stands up. He looks off it-it’s not a typical flat roof. Theres a huge glass dome and catwalks, and a one story tall building beneath the dome with the viewing area where batman is surrounding it. about 800 feet up. Joker taunts Batman on the loudspeaker, before finally revealing himself.


Batman marches towards him, pissed off, and then what will go downs the single greatest moment in comic film history happens. Joker is infuriating batman-“was Silver the first person outside of your childhood you ever loved???”-Batmans getting so pissed, Joker rants, “for such a legend your awefuly dumb. You seem to think I picked you at arandom……Bruce.” Bruce gets it-Joker knows his identity. Batman is startled, but continues walking towards him. “That’s how I knew you’d love silver.” Batmans STOPS-“what did you say?” Batman says. “Killing her was just the easy part”. Batman looks him in the eye-. “Creating her-now that was much, much harder”.

Batman tries not to listen, but basically joker lays it out for him-Silver didn’t love bruce. She was working for Joker to help Joker get to bruce wayne. Joker found out Bruce Wayne was Batman when he found an order of gases being delivered to Wayne Manor directly, gases that batman would use. “It was my. Little. Secret. Until the day your products changed my life forever. That’s when I met Silver. A sad little woman, whose was unsatisfied with her life and wanted me to give her fullfillment. And I thought, babe, I have a plan”. Flashbacks reveal its true-, Silver talking to an unknown caller on her cell phone prior to dinner that night. He stops walking, and joker smiles. “why don’t you take a look at your watch, bruce”. He looks at it. joker smiles are engraved all inside. he falls to his knees. Broken. He cant believe it. we see joker take out an AXE from behind him. Batman sits there, silent. Joker’s marching up to him, taunting him. “and now Joker kills Batman, and when I do Batman will beg for it to come”. Ready to chop his head off.


When RACHEL arrives. She talks a non reactive Batman –“Batman-batman-BRUCE!” Batman looks at her. “Don’t do it! you have to bring him in!”-she talks him out of letting joker kill him. Batman stops the blade with his fist and kicks out jokers knee. Then joker men converge from everywhere, and Batman tries to fight them off. 2 carry Rachel away somewhere-batman manages to get them in a net, and hangs them off the side of the building after 3 pages of fighting. He goes after joker inside the dome. Meanwhile, dent arrives out on the roof. He spots Batman and Joker fighting on the catwalks in the dome and rushes in. batman gets joker in a choke hold, and is KILLING him in rage. Dent walks in. he STOPS him verbally. “And what if you kill him? Go ahead. Just know you doing it disappoints everyone you love. Or loved. Just know your proving all of us wrong, and him right. Know your no longer part of doing justice”. Batman backs off. And is bringing joker away when suddenly joker got one of his bouncy balls from his bocket and jams it between batman and joker-joker kicks free kicks batman off the catwalk- he rushes out of the dome as dent chases after him.


Dent corners him on the roof, when suddenly the dome EXPLODES-batman still inside-we see batman trapped between tons and tons of concrete and rock. Joker suddenly yanks Rachel from two of his thugs, and holds her at gunpoint on the ledge. Batman manages to click a button on his belt and the suit retract-BRUCE jumps out in a second, free, in a grey jumpsuit something in his hand visible. Joker SHOOTS dent in the shoulder when dent lunges for joker-rachel squirms at it and FALLS OF THE LEDGE-grabs on with one hand. Joker goes to step on her hand, when out NOWHERE bruce wayne tackles joker OFF THE BUILDING-they plummet, bruce contemplating not using the grapple. His fathers words “even at your worst low point, you have to carry on. You HAVE to”. Echo in his head. He saves himself and joker, by using the grapple. Meanwhile, Rachel FALLS by is grabbed by dent, shot shoulder and everything. He helps his new love up, and the two share a passionate kiss and Gordon and co. arrive at the rooftop.
 
Naturally, everyone wonders where bruce got the grapple. Dent and Rachel quickly say-as people of the law they are trusted-that bruce AND batman were both present on the rooftop. Joker gets put in arkham, everybody feel bad the joker killed his girlfriend and we see news ckips of this massive, princess Diana esque funeral for Silver, with Bruce acting in attendance. The final line from the news caster “just another sad chapter of bruce waynes life, and another coffin to put to rest”. Alfred shuts the tv off-bruce is going out. Alfred gives Bruce a hug, and bruce says “I dunno whatd Id do without you”. And Alfred smiies, “after 33 years you still haven’t learned?” . we see LUCIOUS FOX in his office, bruce stops really fast, utters thanks. Fox says “ Ya know bruce, don’t think you have me fooled”. Bruce says “I know I don’t. that’s why you’re my ceo. Now I have to go, theres some kind of announcement on bat-ill see you soon”...fox smiles and stares at the paper. “laughing gas. Hmph. Youngster and their drugs”.
The final scene is bruce and a crowd infront of gotham city hall. Bruce is there, they are awaiting some kind of announcement. where the mayor is inaugurating GORDON as the new police commissioner, and Gordon announces his first act is ending the hunt for batman. Rachel and dent-arm in a sling-are there. Rachel goes up him, and kisses him with a THANK you-they talk briefly. Rachel asks if batman will ever be around again. Just then, Gordon says “batman is needed, and the hunt is officially over”. Bruce smiles. “I go where Im needed”. Rachel smiles. Bruce walks off down the empty road, alone. WE CUT TO Gordon getting his car on the backroad, batman shows up. There’s a conversation very similar to the one at the end of BEGINS. The final two lines are “I just need to start thinking of ways to improve this town”. Batman peers down the alley at flass. “I can think of a few”. The final shot is same one as the opening one-the first shot we saw took place at the end of the movie, and the entire films been a flashback. bruce staring out the window into the rain. The batsignal predictably illuminates the sky. We close up, fade out and a rooftop slips into the bottom of the frame, The Batman sprints towards us and through, and dives the edge into the blackness, disappearing into blackness. Overall great treatment.

It sets things up beautifully for Batman 3, cause he is already dealing with the issue that he creates more bad then he gets rid of, and that’ll be put to the ultimate test as him not killing joker ultimately will lead to the creation of two-face and loss of a good friend and alley and will also challenge rachels morals.
 
I read it earllier this morning whats up with Silver not many kids no who she is but I wonder if Nolan will give Bruce Wayne a Love in The Dark Knight. But, I also think you should be part of Nolan's team on The Dark Knight because your plot was that good.
 
i liked the action scenes but overall it seemed too familiar like Batman 89' with the gas filled baloons, and joker shooting down the batwing, plusi felt the joker dident really get a chance to shine, but with a bit of work it could be much better. really good effort though (i really liked the opening action sequence with the helicopter):up:
 
yeah i see what you mean
 
IamtheBatman said:
But, I also think you should be part of Nolan's team on The Dark Knight because your plot was that good.

:D:up:
 
Nice to see fan's posting their own ideas but shouldn't this thread be in the Fan Fiction forum?

I thought the movie forums were for news, rumors, casting choices and other information.
 
I dont like this plot for TDK but I enjoyed reading it nonetheless. Job well done.
 
Well, I only read the words in all caps, but from what I've read it doesn't seem to bad!
 
Why does Alfreds opening line remind me of Mortal Kombat...
 
and do you think I will spend hours of my life reading all that? are you crazy?
 
cause its maaaaaaad good :D
 
Meh. I skimmed it. It's alright.

Put in in paragraphs or something, cause it's just a big mess right now.
 
Can you summarize it Excel. But what I've read so far its pretty good. Are you a wirter by any chance because when reading that I visualized whats going on so clearly. Nice dude just nice.:up:
 
-Bruce Waynes having an identity crisis when his new girlfriend silvers. cloud begins to convince batmans doing more harm then good.
-sionis is working with wayne enterprises to open a new building in gotham.
-pengy n maroni are smuggling in drugs for secrets plans
-they hired joker to take ut the batman as they d knew hed thwart them
-big bad twist at the end
-enormous chase scene in the da middle.
 
theShape said:
Put in in paragraphs or something, cause it's just a big mess right now.
Agree, put in paragraphs and ill be more than happy to read it!!
 
bumpidy bump bump bump!
 
That a.ss in your avatar is the only thing i looked at in that long ass post...

PS: I'll read it later...
 

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