My new fan trailer

[Jubba]

I made a new trailer - it is Harry-centric. Enjoy - constructive feedback is more than welcome. I suggest allowing the video to fully load before playing it, if possible. If you don't think this deserves its own thread, lock it up and I'll post elsewhere...just looking for some input - it's my first draft of this one.

YouTube Version: http://youtube.com/watch?v=P7zXCRXjV3Q
NEW: YouTube version 2: http://youtube.com/watch?v=qDrxbxeBk4U


MetaCafe Version: http://www.metacafe.com/watch/189563/spider_man_3_harry_teaser/

-Jubba out

 

[Wiim0te]

I'm watching it at this moment.

 

[The Infernal]

Not bad, but not perfect either.

I didn't think the music fit properly. The sound bites from Harry and Norman were too soft, it needed more impact. Plus you need to re-edit some sequences, especially where Harry screams, it cut off too abrubtly.

The scene where you added the pumpkin bomb with the symbiote Spidey didn't quite work. I see what you were going for but it didn't feel right. Plus those scenes with James Franco from another movie just felt wrong.

Good effort all round though.

 

[The Kid]

I like the part where spidey throws the pumpkin bomb.

 

[Wiim0te]

I liked it. I thought the pumpkin bomb being thrown by dark spidey could have been done better, but I liked the clip added from James franco's other movie, Tristen and Isolide I believe? I was not feeling the last scene with kristen and tobey though.

 

[lordofthenerds]

Spider-Man web-shooting a pumkin bomb?
Other than that its pretty good.

 

[Jubba]

yeah, my idea was that spidey was throwing the bomb back at harry but didn't have a scene handy to make it clear that harry had thrown it first...and i know it's a bit choppy with the pumpkin bomb animation, but it was also my first attempt at actually adding something to a video rather than just re-editing
i'll tinker and repost at some point, especially after i get more feedback
also, the text was just made up on the spot, no long thoughts put into what it would say

 

[Captain_Death]

It's pretty good. The pumpkin bomb was kinda funny.

 

[lordofthenerds]

It's pretty good. The pumpkin bomb was kinda funny.

Yeah I know it was kinda amusing, since he's bada$$ Spidey he can webshoot pumkin bombs...it looked pretty good too. I like how it bounced.

 

[Jubba]

I made some changes already and posted a second version...couple new clips and shortened a couple of others - nothing major though...and I think I may have made some of it more confusing! Sweeet.

Version 2: http://youtube.com/watch?v=qDrxbxeBk4U

-Jubba out

 

[Parquagh]

Love the pumpkin bomb sequence

 

[Christopher Nolan]

Pumpkin bomb sequence is the best part of the Trailer.

 

[Jubba]

*ahem*...


shamless bump....won't become a regular occurence

 

[Gonking]

It was ok, but I didn't like the end.