Sequels My X3 Tottaly Different

[MaleRogue]

glad ya like it Phoenix.....
And what do you all think ( the rest ) LOL

 

[PhoenixRisen]

WOW I just finished Chapter 6 and it is really good!! The parts where

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Rogue reunites with her mother and learns she is adopted

and then the

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flashbacks about her adventures with the X-Men

are very emotional and well-written. Plus, when

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Phoenix demonstrates her power to the Brotherhood

was a nice touch!! I can't wait to get to Chapter 7!!

 

[Sentinel X]

Cool, Rogue has a baby!...Thats I kind of weird but still cool.I like the forshadowing the story kind of leaves off

 

[PhoenixRisen]

Okay now I finished up to chapter 9!! Good job!! Can't wait for final battle!!

 

[PhoenixRisen]

Okay now I finished the whole thing!!! GOOD JOB!!
I like the twists you put on the basic X3 story, especially concerning

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Rogue, Bobby and their baby.

It was cool how

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the baby protected her mother during Rogue's battle with Phoenix.

I also liked how

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Rogue used a combination Emma and Logan's powers to battle Phoenix.

Your writing style is very easy to read. At first I was shocked that

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Rogue and Bobby were having sex so casually

but I see where you were going with

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Rogue having their baby.

I might like to see more

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non-sex

stuff between Rogue and Bobby, leading up to

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them having sex

to add depth to their relationship. I also liked

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Mystique and Destiny

but think Magneto's role at the end

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might be a little more stressful/conflict-generating for the X-Men.

Overall a very enjoyable read and am excited to see where you take it!!

 

[PhoenixRisen]

One way I know I liked your story was I kept thinking about it after I was done...esp.

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the baby protecting rogue in phoenix battle and the mystique/destiny/allusions to your x4

...so since it's been a couple days i can say even more GOOD JOB!!

 

[MaleRogue]

Thank you so much PhoenixRisen..
I am glad you enjoyed it
Yeah X4 is in the making... but first I write it.... I am working on it for 2 months and I am still at chapter 4 ( almost)
But my ****ing brother deleted Word from our computer that little piece of ****

 

[RogueSB]

Thanks
Yeah true I used it a bit to much LOL
I don't know why.... But I just did...
It could be worded strangely yeah... I am Dutch so I don't know everything about this language

Great work MaleRogue! I'm over to read X4 now lol.
Hey, if you want to I can help you with the language. Before you
post it here you can send them to me. But only if you want to.

 

[MaleRogue]

Great work MaleRogue! I'm over to read X4 now lol.
Hey, if you want to I can help you with the language. Before you
post it here you can send them to me. But only if you want to.

OMG thanks for the nice comment
I am glad you like it
I hope you like X4 just as much...
And then there is my X5 lol

Well the writing is going better now lol I have word again so I can set it to english and make my mistakes normal.... there might be some but I think I will send you some later

 

[RogueSB]

That would be cool! I'm looking forward to it

 

[MaleRogue]

And I am looking forward to see your comments on my X4