And I contend that Shutter Island is a story that works far better when you know the whole story about Teddy/Andrew. While it is not as good as Psycho, ESB or Memento, it is a really good one that rewards the viewer when they watch it as a trip into the broken mind victimized by violence and guilt.
I'll give you that most people were caught off guard by the twist in "Fight Club," but I don't know how how everyone pegged the plot of "Shutter Island" just because you did. I read the book first (to be fair I figured about 1/3 through most of the twist), so it didn't affect me one way or the other. However, when you can go to amazon or imdb and still see arguments/debates that Teddy wasn't crazy (that's even in this thread) it must have surprised at least some people as they refuse to accept it.
And the one thing most people don't get is that Dolores was Rachel and that the daughter in his visions at a concentration camp and then saw Rachel help him drown....was his actual daughter. That I did not see coming in the book and most people didn't realize just how ****ed up what happened to Andrew/Teddy was.
The twist was how you got into his mind. His paranoia reflected his time (the 1950s Cold War/HUAC era and comparatively the Bush era America) and getting into his tragedy was being in his head where he doesn't know if he's sane. Another similar film is A Beautiful Mind where there is a twist midway through the movie, but most people realized Ed Harris was imaginary (though a lot were surprised by Paul Bettany). In any case, the point is beyond the twist. The twist was device, not the heart of the movie. That is why it goes on for almost a half hour after the reveal. If it was just about the twist it would have ended a few minutes later. Just because it was primarily about the twist to you does not mean it was that way to the audience members....or the writer and director for that matter.
And would the anguish and pain of Andrew had been as raw and cathartic at the end of the movie if you knew he was crazy in a failing role playing game at the start who killed his children-murdering wife? Even if you figure out he is crazy it is about the journey he takes that compels the film.
I guess we'll have to agree to disagree on your first point. I'd say that as a film, it *does* work better "knowing" the whole story, but only because it fails so completely at being a mystery with a twist. But of course, "work better" really means "works at all" in this case.
It still is painfully obvious that the film was written with certain intentions that were never executed properly- both in the script and in everything afterward. I liken it to something I used to do as a kid... in elementary school. Every time we had a project I'd write some massive 2 and a half page story that was all about THE TWIST BABY. Since I thought I wasn't a total idiot, I'd work in hints and clues as to what was coming, so when someone finished reading it 2 minutes later they could go back and see how awesome I was because "I HAD IT PLANNED ALL ALONG, SEE, AND YOU NEVER SAW IT COMING! AAAAHAHAHA!"
But of course, everyone saw it coming. I was like, eight. I still kind of want to go back and punch Mr. McCrone, if he's still alive, for playing along and going "WOW Dan my mind is BLOWN!"
And I guess that's just really a long way of me saying: This movie feels like it was written by an eight year old. One that is too stupid and proud of himself to realize that the entire concept of his story is ruined by the fact that it's too obvious.
It's a tough act, because really, once you know you can't unknow it. For everyone involved with the film, I'm sure there was a sense that this would be quite the little mind**** of a film. Unfortunately, most if not all of them probably had the film explained to them in a sentence or two before signing on to it, so rather than experiencing the whole "man.. that was really obvious" they thought, "sounds like a great twist! lets make this ****!"
I will agree that there exists room for debate in this film, although nearly all of it that I've seen and heard rests on whether or not he's crazy
at the end when he decides to lobotomize himself. I thought it was extremely obvious which it was and that anyone who thought otherwise was a moron, but that's me.
Ironically enough, my favorite part of this film were those last 5 minutes or so, because the last actual scene combined with the final shot of the lighthouse were the first actually mysterious, ambiguous moments of the film.
This does not excuse the cluster**** that is the entire setup and structure of the rest of the movie.
You mention Fight Club as an example of a movie with a successful twist, but then go on to talk about A Beautiful Mind and how the twist is largely unimportant, because it happens before the end and then the movie goes on for another 40 minutes. But.... so does Fight Club. And while I'm not going to go time it, I feel like a lot more happens inbetween the twist in FC and the end than it does in A Beautiful Mind.
The twist is he's crazy, the reveal is what happened to his wife. The reveal is rather successful, the twist is not. Yet another film that's come to mind when thinking about Shutter Island is the awesome K-PAX. The films have remarkable similar plots but the storyline and execution are entirely different. People try to help a man at a mental institution who suffered a terrible tragedy involving his family, but he may or may not be crazy. There is a similar reveal in K-PAX that is treated like a vague mystery for most of the film, but ... there's no twist, not really. There's a level of ambiguity in the film that far surpasses anything in Shutter Island, and yet the entire film plays more as a character drama than an attempted bait and switch suspenseful mystery.
You say that it's not about the mystery, it's not about the twist. I say if that were the case then there would
not be one in the first place. No one structures an entire film around a twist *planning* that everyone will already know what's going on.
And thus as a mystery, as a twist, the film fails.