"A DEVIL OF MY OWN MAKING" my debut short film...enjoy

[Godman]

thanks for taking the time to watch this and i appreciate the support

shot with a canon hv40 cinemode 24p , edited in sony vegas

http://vimeo.com/14022251

 

[C. Lee]

It was good. Glad to see a regular real looking lead.The main thing I would say to watch in the future is some of the sound levels (things like the keys being tossed down were a bit jarring). Tense, suspensful, and thought provoking without being over the top. Very professional looking.

 

[War Party]

Pretty good. I love a lot of the angles you used and the music fit very well. I really liked the ending too. I'm currently filming mine right now and I'll make sure to post it so you can check it out.

 

[Jackasscoley15]

Not bad, man. I'm actually using the same camera and editing equipment as you are, lol.

 

[Godman]

It was good. Glad to see a regular real looking lead.The main thing I would say to watch in the future is some of the sound levels (things like the keys being tossed down were a bit jarring). Tense, suspensful, and thought provoking without being over the top. Very professional looking.

thanks for watching and i really appreciate all the advice i can get. i never want to lose touch with the audience. to be honest i didnt quite master the sound as best i could as i was overwhelmed by making the visuals worth while and it was a tedious little process LOL...this is my Guinea pig project and i thank you for the advice. i learned a lot during this process...and yea felicia is the **** to work with. didnt pay her a dime and she was just a great supporter of my dream that an african guy can do better than hood, gangster, and tyler perry type films lol

 

[Godman]

Pretty good. I love a lot of the angles you used and the music fit very well. I really liked the ending too. I'm currently filming mine right now and I'll make sure to post it so you can check it out.

most definitely will. i have had some complaints on darkness...well actually two complaints from other boards and so i wanna make sure that style of mine wasnt off putting with the level of gamma choice i used?