Please view/rate my first short film!

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction & Films' started by The Nose Goblin, Sep 1, 2012.

  1. The Nose Goblin

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    Hey Hype,

    I've recently completed my first short film called 'The Spell Book' and I wanted some honest feedback from the community.

    Logline/Synopsis: Three friends confront evil in the form of a demon possessed teddy bear after opening an ancient spell book.

    I have hopefully embedded the video correctly, but if not I'm also providing direct links to the YouTube and Vimeo versions.

    [YT]http://youtu.be/IUzD162l4uw?hd=1[/YT]

    YouTube HD Link: http://youtu.be/IUzD162l4uw?hd=1

    Vimeo link: http://vimeo.com/46170834

    So, let me know what you think!

    Thanks!
     
    #1 The Nose Goblin, Sep 1, 2012
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    It's extremely well shot, lit, edited, mixed, etc. It looks and sounds like a professionally edited video.

    Your actors, and the story leave a lot to be desired though. It plays out like a sitcom episode more than anything particularly expressive and artistic.

    So yeah, on the technical side, it's phenomenal, on the artistic side, it could use some work.
     
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    And this is why I love the Hype. Unfiltered constructive criticism. I'm just pleased as all get out that you thought it looked and sounded professional.

    Thanks for taking the time to watch and comment.
     
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    I'm very academic when it comes to these things. :o

    And truthfully, the technical side of it is usually the harder and more rarely done correctly of the two anyway, so you have that going for you.
     
    #4 CConn, Sep 1, 2012
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    I know nothing about filmmaking but that was a good movie. I ":up:ed" it :D
     
    #6 Ipodman, Sep 2, 2012
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    Wow, thanks for taking the time to write out such a long and detailed response.

    Glad you thought it was funny!

    And you should have seen the first edit! ;-p
     
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    Thanks!!
     
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