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Hey all, remmember me?
Well I said that I would post A BIT and I kept my word.
So, for today's post I'll give u guys a preview to my project Batman One Last Laugh.
If you might remmeber this project first started out as Batman THE Last Laugh and went through tons of development.
Now, the thing I find most difficult in writting is the beggining, and that's what's always stopped me.
But now, I think I've finally got it right.
So, here we go:
PANEL 1
We see a large shot of a dirty street, typical in Gotham. Although its dirty and smells like hell, its peaceful, theres no noise, no gunshots, nothing.
PANEL 2
The same shot only this time we see the BATMOBILE tearing through the small street! The car is 100% black and almost looks as if youre staring at a shadow.
PANEL 1
A side close up of THE BATMAN! He has one hand on the wheal and is wearing his usual angry face.
CAP1: 11:30, half an hour till midnight.
CAP2: Most people are in bed by now, but not me.
PANEL 2
We get a front close up as Batman gets very angry.
CAP1: Somewhere out there is a little boy, scared to death, in the hands of the most sadistic madman imaginable.
CAP2: And Im the only one who can help him.
PANEL 3
The car stops in front of a very worn out building and Batman jumps out.
CAP1: Oracle provided me with coordinates; it was just a matter of getting there.
CAP2: I know what this maniac can do and how unpredictable he can be, so I hurry like hell. As I step on the pedal, I can feel the wind through the glass.
PANEL 4
Batman enters the building, its worn out and dirty it looks like no one has lived here in decades.
CAP1: I move slowly up the stairs; dont want to be heard, yet.
CAP2: Oracle told me hes on the second floor, room 2B.
PANEL 5
The Dark Knight stands in front of the door to room 2B.
CAP1: I should check the room with my optiwand, but theres no time. Im just going to have to trust that Oracle is right.
CAP2: Now I want to be noticed.
PANEL 1
The Batman KICKS the door down with all his might and it shatters to splinters.
BATMAN1: JOKER!
PANEL2
Batman examines the room; its completely empty, save for an old couch. There is another door at the end of the hall.
CAP1: Not here. Must be in the bathroom. Oracle has never provided me with the wrong location. Lets not break the record now.
PANEL 3
The Batman heads for the bathroom.
CAP1: If he really is in there then hes already heard me, probably waiting around the corner to put a slug into me.
PANEL 4
The door BURSTS open and THE JOKER comes out firing three shots with a handgun.
JOKER1: SUUUUUUURPRISE!!
PANEL 1
One of the bullets manages to hit Batman in the arm.
CAP1: One of the bullets manages to get me in the arm, doesnt matter.
CAP2: Its barely a flesh wound, ignore it! Damn it! Ignore it!
PANEL 2
Batman rushes for the door but is stopped when he sees the Joker holding the young boy with a gun to his head.
JOKER1: Uh uh uh.
JOKER2: Dont you dare move a wing Batsy-boy. One move out of you and hes dead.
PANEL 3
The Batman puts one hand behind his back.
CAP1: Damn it. This is not good.
BATMAN1: Let him go.
JOKER1: HA! And just why would I do that? Ive got you AND him at my fingertips.
CAP2: Hes right, but I cant let him be sure.
BATMAN2: Youve got ****.
PANEL 4
Were in a close up as the backhand removes a batarang from Batmans utility belt.
JOKER1: Did I just hear you curse Batsy? You never seize to amaze.
CAP1: Thats it keep him talking.
CAP2: My backhand moves on its own, getting one of my, sharper batarangs.
CAP3: Thats still a problem; he shot me in the arm so my aim is going to be off.
CAP4: I now feel the pain shooting up my arm more than ever. Im wondering if Im gonna make this shot. Ive got one chance. Hes not going to give me another.
CAP5: I know he wouldnt hesitate to pull that trigger and blow that poor little boys brains out on the floor.
PANEL 5
A front shot of Batman using all his strength to throw the batarang.
CAP1: I aim as best I can and pray to god Im fast enough.
PANEL 6
The Batarang hits Joker in the neck and he lets go of the boy in pain.
JOKER1: YAAAAAAAAAAAAGGGGGGHHHHHH!!!
PANEL 1
The Batman throws himself at the Joker, the boy moves out of the way.
BATMAN1: MOVE!
CAP1: I throw all my weight at him, cant let him get up.
PANEL 2
A close up of Batman as he lifts up one of his fists.
CAP1: Now the bastard is down.
CAP2: Hes not getting up again.
CAP3: My arms seem to work without me, punch after punch.
CAP4: I dont feel the pain anymore, only the adrenaline flowing through my veins.
PANEL3
Batman continues to punch the Joker.
CAP1: I keep punching him until Im sure that hes out cold.
CAP2: After about a minute or so I stop, my hand hurts like hell. Doesnt matter now.
PANEL 4
Batman removes the batarang from the Jokers throat. The small boy is behind him.
CAP1: Then I remember that the maniac is bleeding to death. I should just let him die here and now, but I wont.
CAP2: As I slowly remove the sharp blade I remember that Im not alone here.
BATMAN1: Whats your name?
BRANDON1: Brandon.
CAP3: I sense the fear in his voice, it makes my stomach cringe.
BATMAN2: Youll be okay Brandon; the police will be here soon.
BRANDON2: Umm ok.
PANEL 1
The Batman rips part of his cape as best as he can.
CAP1: Its hard to rip the cape; made out of Kevlar to stop bullet fire. There is however a small portion of it thats leather so I can use it to glide evenly.
CAP2: The pain in my arm starts again. I should use the cape to stop my bleeding. Instead Im stopping his.
PANEL 2
Batman looks down, his eyes covered by shadow
CAP1: Ill live.
PANEL 3
As the Batman finishes tying the cape around Jokers neck, the clown begins to speak, barley though.
JOKER1: Hehehe than . thanks Batsy.
CAP1: The maniacs not out. Well, Id better change that.
PANEL 4
The Batman brings the Joker up so theyre face to face.
JOKER1: Oww. That that hurt.
JOKER2: Do it again.
JOKER3: Hehe.
CAP1: Even as his blood is spilling across the floor, the clown can still make a joke.
PANEL5
Batman head butts the Joker in a fast and devastating motion!
CAP1: Not anymore.
PANEL6
The Joker is finally out cold.
CAP1: That should do it.
PANEL1
The Batman slowly lets the Joker fall to the ground. We can see the young boy behind him.
ORACLE1: Batman, Ive got police coming. Should be there in a minute, you might want to get out of there.
BATMAN1: Roger.
PANEL2
We see the side of Batman as he looks at the boy behind him.
BATMAN1: Brandon,
BRANDON1: Ye-yeah?
PANEL3
The Batman puts his arms on the boys shoulder in hopes of calming him down.
BATMAN1: The police will be here soon ok. Im going to go, but I want you to not move from here.
BRANDON1: What about what about,
BATMAN2: The Joker?
BRANDON2: Um, yeah.
BATMAN3: He wont be getting back up again. Dont worry Ill be watching.
BRANDON3: O, okay.
PANEL4
The Batman stands up, cape covering his body.
CAP1: I dont like leaving the boy here alone. But I know hell be all right.
PANEL5
The Batman walks to the window and turns his head around to face the small, scared boy.
BATMAN1: Youll be okay Brandon. Trust me.
CAP1: I believe what I say.
CAP2: And now I hear the sirens in the background, the night is so quiet they seem like theyre two-feet-away. Ive got to get moving.
PANEL1
We now look through the boys point of view as The Batman jumps out the window.
CAP1: I remember, there used to be a time when leaving a young boy with a cop would be like signing his death warrant.
PANEL2
The boy heads towards the window.
CAP1: The boy would get taken and would seamlessly disappear. Along with any reports filed.
PANEL3
Birds-eye-view as the boy looks out the window.
CAP1: But its not like that anymore.
PANEL1
Were looking through the night-vision goggles at the boy.
ORACLE1: Well, that went ok.
PANEL2
The Batman is looking through night-vision goggles off a rooftop. His arm is steel bleeding.
BATMAN1: Not really. I was sloppy; the boy could have been killed.
ORACLE1: Yeah, well hows your arm.
BATMAN2: Ive been hit by worse.
ORACLE2: Heh, Im quite certain you have. Still, you shouldnt leave it like that.
PANEL3
The Batman takes down the goggles and looks at his arm.
BATMAN1: Alfred will stitch it up when I get home. For now, Ive got to make sure the boys safe.
ORACLE1: Why not just stay there then.
BATMAN2: You know I dont like talking with the police.
PANEL4
The Batman stands up and we watch down as the police cars gather in front of the building.
ORACLE1: Ive noticed.
BATMAN1: Here we go.
ORACLE2: Yeah, you going to follow them now, Mr. Over-Protective?
BATMAN2: Yes.
ORACLE3: Oh
PANEL5
An extreme close-up of the Batman symbol,
BATMAN1: Dont worry,
BATMAN2: Ill be home soon.
PANEL1
An ambulance driving towards us in the dark night.
DRIVER1: GODDAMN IT! KEEP IT DOWN BACK THERE!
PANEL 2
A close up of the driver, a young man, maybe in his late 20s.
DRIVER1: WHAT THE HELL IS GOING ON BACK THERE?
PANEL 3
The back of the ambulance, the Joker is chained down on a table. Two doctors sit beside him. The Joker is laughing.
DOCTOR,A1: You try to settle this maniac down! I swear, hes like a freaking animal.
DOCTOR,B1: He is.
PANEL4
A close up of the Joker laughing his head off.
DOCTOR,A1: For god sakes just put the bastard to sleep.
PANEL5
A close up of a needle.
DOCTOR,B1: Right.
PANEL6
A back shot of the ambulance speeding away while the Joker is laughing.
So, what did u guys thing.
Hope you liked it.
See you soon ( I hope)
Well I said that I would post A BIT and I kept my word.
So, for today's post I'll give u guys a preview to my project Batman One Last Laugh.
If you might remmeber this project first started out as Batman THE Last Laugh and went through tons of development.
Now, the thing I find most difficult in writting is the beggining, and that's what's always stopped me.
But now, I think I've finally got it right.
So, here we go:
BATMAN
ONE LAST LAUGH
PAGE 1
PANEL 1
We see a large shot of a dirty street, typical in Gotham. Although its dirty and smells like hell, its peaceful, theres no noise, no gunshots, nothing.
PANEL 2
The same shot only this time we see the BATMOBILE tearing through the small street! The car is 100% black and almost looks as if youre staring at a shadow.
PAGE 2
A side close up of THE BATMAN! He has one hand on the wheal and is wearing his usual angry face.
CAP1: 11:30, half an hour till midnight.
CAP2: Most people are in bed by now, but not me.
PANEL 2
We get a front close up as Batman gets very angry.
CAP1: Somewhere out there is a little boy, scared to death, in the hands of the most sadistic madman imaginable.
CAP2: And Im the only one who can help him.
PANEL 3
The car stops in front of a very worn out building and Batman jumps out.
CAP1: Oracle provided me with coordinates; it was just a matter of getting there.
CAP2: I know what this maniac can do and how unpredictable he can be, so I hurry like hell. As I step on the pedal, I can feel the wind through the glass.
PANEL 4
Batman enters the building, its worn out and dirty it looks like no one has lived here in decades.
CAP1: I move slowly up the stairs; dont want to be heard, yet.
CAP2: Oracle told me hes on the second floor, room 2B.
PANEL 5
The Dark Knight stands in front of the door to room 2B.
CAP1: I should check the room with my optiwand, but theres no time. Im just going to have to trust that Oracle is right.
CAP2: Now I want to be noticed.
PAGE 3
The Batman KICKS the door down with all his might and it shatters to splinters.
BATMAN1: JOKER!
PANEL2
Batman examines the room; its completely empty, save for an old couch. There is another door at the end of the hall.
CAP1: Not here. Must be in the bathroom. Oracle has never provided me with the wrong location. Lets not break the record now.
PANEL 3
The Batman heads for the bathroom.
CAP1: If he really is in there then hes already heard me, probably waiting around the corner to put a slug into me.
PANEL 4
The door BURSTS open and THE JOKER comes out firing three shots with a handgun.
JOKER1: SUUUUUUURPRISE!!
PAGE 4
One of the bullets manages to hit Batman in the arm.
CAP1: One of the bullets manages to get me in the arm, doesnt matter.
CAP2: Its barely a flesh wound, ignore it! Damn it! Ignore it!
PANEL 2
Batman rushes for the door but is stopped when he sees the Joker holding the young boy with a gun to his head.
JOKER1: Uh uh uh.
JOKER2: Dont you dare move a wing Batsy-boy. One move out of you and hes dead.
PANEL 3
The Batman puts one hand behind his back.
CAP1: Damn it. This is not good.
BATMAN1: Let him go.
JOKER1: HA! And just why would I do that? Ive got you AND him at my fingertips.
CAP2: Hes right, but I cant let him be sure.
BATMAN2: Youve got ****.
PANEL 4
Were in a close up as the backhand removes a batarang from Batmans utility belt.
JOKER1: Did I just hear you curse Batsy? You never seize to amaze.
CAP1: Thats it keep him talking.
CAP2: My backhand moves on its own, getting one of my, sharper batarangs.
CAP3: Thats still a problem; he shot me in the arm so my aim is going to be off.
CAP4: I now feel the pain shooting up my arm more than ever. Im wondering if Im gonna make this shot. Ive got one chance. Hes not going to give me another.
CAP5: I know he wouldnt hesitate to pull that trigger and blow that poor little boys brains out on the floor.
PANEL 5
A front shot of Batman using all his strength to throw the batarang.
CAP1: I aim as best I can and pray to god Im fast enough.
PANEL 6
The Batarang hits Joker in the neck and he lets go of the boy in pain.
JOKER1: YAAAAAAAAAAAAGGGGGGHHHHHH!!!
PAGE 5
The Batman throws himself at the Joker, the boy moves out of the way.
BATMAN1: MOVE!
CAP1: I throw all my weight at him, cant let him get up.
PANEL 2
A close up of Batman as he lifts up one of his fists.
CAP1: Now the bastard is down.
CAP2: Hes not getting up again.
CAP3: My arms seem to work without me, punch after punch.
CAP4: I dont feel the pain anymore, only the adrenaline flowing through my veins.
PANEL3
Batman continues to punch the Joker.
CAP1: I keep punching him until Im sure that hes out cold.
CAP2: After about a minute or so I stop, my hand hurts like hell. Doesnt matter now.
PANEL 4
Batman removes the batarang from the Jokers throat. The small boy is behind him.
CAP1: Then I remember that the maniac is bleeding to death. I should just let him die here and now, but I wont.
CAP2: As I slowly remove the sharp blade I remember that Im not alone here.
BATMAN1: Whats your name?
BRANDON1: Brandon.
CAP3: I sense the fear in his voice, it makes my stomach cringe.
BATMAN2: Youll be okay Brandon; the police will be here soon.
BRANDON2: Umm ok.
PAGE 6
The Batman rips part of his cape as best as he can.
CAP1: Its hard to rip the cape; made out of Kevlar to stop bullet fire. There is however a small portion of it thats leather so I can use it to glide evenly.
CAP2: The pain in my arm starts again. I should use the cape to stop my bleeding. Instead Im stopping his.
PANEL 2
Batman looks down, his eyes covered by shadow
CAP1: Ill live.
PANEL 3
As the Batman finishes tying the cape around Jokers neck, the clown begins to speak, barley though.
JOKER1: Hehehe than . thanks Batsy.
CAP1: The maniacs not out. Well, Id better change that.
PANEL 4
The Batman brings the Joker up so theyre face to face.
JOKER1: Oww. That that hurt.
JOKER2: Do it again.
JOKER3: Hehe.
CAP1: Even as his blood is spilling across the floor, the clown can still make a joke.
PANEL5
Batman head butts the Joker in a fast and devastating motion!
CAP1: Not anymore.
PANEL6
The Joker is finally out cold.
CAP1: That should do it.
PAGE 7
The Batman slowly lets the Joker fall to the ground. We can see the young boy behind him.
ORACLE1: Batman, Ive got police coming. Should be there in a minute, you might want to get out of there.
BATMAN1: Roger.
PANEL2
We see the side of Batman as he looks at the boy behind him.
BATMAN1: Brandon,
BRANDON1: Ye-yeah?
PANEL3
The Batman puts his arms on the boys shoulder in hopes of calming him down.
BATMAN1: The police will be here soon ok. Im going to go, but I want you to not move from here.
BRANDON1: What about what about,
BATMAN2: The Joker?
BRANDON2: Um, yeah.
BATMAN3: He wont be getting back up again. Dont worry Ill be watching.
BRANDON3: O, okay.
PANEL4
The Batman stands up, cape covering his body.
CAP1: I dont like leaving the boy here alone. But I know hell be all right.
PANEL5
The Batman walks to the window and turns his head around to face the small, scared boy.
BATMAN1: Youll be okay Brandon. Trust me.
CAP1: I believe what I say.
CAP2: And now I hear the sirens in the background, the night is so quiet they seem like theyre two-feet-away. Ive got to get moving.
PAGE 8
We now look through the boys point of view as The Batman jumps out the window.
CAP1: I remember, there used to be a time when leaving a young boy with a cop would be like signing his death warrant.
PANEL2
The boy heads towards the window.
CAP1: The boy would get taken and would seamlessly disappear. Along with any reports filed.
PANEL3
Birds-eye-view as the boy looks out the window.
CAP1: But its not like that anymore.
PAGE 9
Were looking through the night-vision goggles at the boy.
ORACLE1: Well, that went ok.
PANEL2
The Batman is looking through night-vision goggles off a rooftop. His arm is steel bleeding.
BATMAN1: Not really. I was sloppy; the boy could have been killed.
ORACLE1: Yeah, well hows your arm.
BATMAN2: Ive been hit by worse.
ORACLE2: Heh, Im quite certain you have. Still, you shouldnt leave it like that.
PANEL3
The Batman takes down the goggles and looks at his arm.
BATMAN1: Alfred will stitch it up when I get home. For now, Ive got to make sure the boys safe.
ORACLE1: Why not just stay there then.
BATMAN2: You know I dont like talking with the police.
PANEL4
The Batman stands up and we watch down as the police cars gather in front of the building.
ORACLE1: Ive noticed.
BATMAN1: Here we go.
ORACLE2: Yeah, you going to follow them now, Mr. Over-Protective?
BATMAN2: Yes.
ORACLE3: Oh
PANEL5
An extreme close-up of the Batman symbol,
BATMAN1: Dont worry,
BATMAN2: Ill be home soon.
PAGE 10
An ambulance driving towards us in the dark night.
DRIVER1: GODDAMN IT! KEEP IT DOWN BACK THERE!
PANEL 2
A close up of the driver, a young man, maybe in his late 20s.
DRIVER1: WHAT THE HELL IS GOING ON BACK THERE?
PANEL 3
The back of the ambulance, the Joker is chained down on a table. Two doctors sit beside him. The Joker is laughing.
DOCTOR,A1: You try to settle this maniac down! I swear, hes like a freaking animal.
DOCTOR,B1: He is.
PANEL4
A close up of the Joker laughing his head off.
DOCTOR,A1: For god sakes just put the bastard to sleep.
PANEL5
A close up of a needle.
DOCTOR,B1: Right.
PANEL6
A back shot of the ambulance speeding away while the Joker is laughing.
So, what did u guys thing.
Hope you liked it.
See you soon ( I hope)
