*For the first story, I actually understand what Van Lente was attempting here with the way he portrays Mary Jane. He presents us a woman who is frustrated with being taken for granted, whether it comes to her career or her relationships, especially her past relationship with Peter. And as a result of having to save her then boyfriend Bobby Carr from the White Rabbit, not only does she realize that she was running away from her own regrets over her break-up with Peter, but came face-to-face with what putting ones self-interests before others actually means, and I have feeling that she knows now she was the one who was truly guilty of this in her relationship with Peter.
*That being said, in order to show the scenes of Peter and MJs argument that hints towards their possible break-up, its clear theres been a lot of character regression going on. MJ feeling that shes always second-best compared to Peters need to be Spider-Man was already addressed and resolved years ago, and her comments about Peters blaming himself for Uncle Bens death and let that define his whole life really presents her as the bad partner in the relationship. Although the way Peter described it, he did come across like a addict who needs a fix when describing having to be Spider-Man, so it certainly makes him appear pretty pathetic. Still, at least Van Lente used this as a means for Peters code about power and responsibility as a means for MJ not to stand by and do nothing.
*Likewise, I had a problem with the catalyst for her eventual return to New York, her then boyfriend Bobby Carr. I realize Van Lente was using him to contrast Peter and showing that his need for secrecy was merely to protect himself compare to Peters need for secrecy to protect those he cares about, but I really have to wonder what in the world did MJ see in this guy in the first place? I pretty much pegged him as a *****e before in Slotts Peter Parker: Papparazzi story but this story took that to a whole new level. Not only is this guy a self-absorbed drug addict who cares only about his image, but then tells MJ her window is closing on her career? Good thing she dumped this guys ass and that hes being sent off to character limbo. But then again, I have a feeling hes going to re-enter the picture to try and win MJ back as an obsessive ex-boyfriend.
*I did enjoy the shenanigans with the White Rabbit with her whole psychotic Alice in Wonderland theme style gimmick (although the Mad Hatter called dibs on that one) and I liked the style Javier Pulido brought to the story, giving a kind of quirkiness to sometimes emotional tale.
*For the second story of Van Lentes it wasnt more than filler, hinting the upcoming Back in Black Cat and the Who was Ben Reilly stories. Not to mention just what MJs new gig as the host of Sewn Up involves and Harrys secret relationship with Peters cousin, Amy Reilly.
*But what REALLY makes it disappointing was the way the whole relationship between Peter and Michelle gets resolved. This entire subplot since the start of Red-Headed Stranger has just been a disaster from beginning to end, misguided not just from having Peter wind up in a drunken hook-up with Michelle, but from the fact that Michelle unknowingly making out with the Chameleon that carried heavy sexual overtones was played entirely for laughs over how Peter was saddled with an annoying, obsessive, control-freak for a girlfriend. Plus, at this point, I am completely turned off by the character of Michelle Gonzales as I believe this arc ended up making her one of the worst new additions to the supporting cast. And the sad thing is, even though theres logically every reason why she wouldnt want Peter in her apartment any more, or why Peter should stay there, the fact that the brain trust has them keep living together after all thats happened is just pure contrivance.
*As for the third story by Brain Reed, it was amusing for what it was. Peter and Harrys friendship was well portrayed here, although it comes off a little bit too much like an episode of Two and a Half Men with Peter as Jon Cryer to Harrys Charlie Sheen. Although the voice messages from the prospective dates on the website were a bit of hoot.
*And while it was trying a bit too hard to be cute with Spideys crush on Danielle the jewelry store owner, it does serve as an example of the problems he would he have trying to get a date strictly as a superhero without revealing his true identity. Then again, you would think that would be an asset considering how Superman got away with it with Lois for so long.