Any Intrest?

[Stupify_me]

I have been doing my own comic story for awhile now it's just a story because I don't know any artists but it is about an orginal charecter. It's kind of a superhero comic. I was just wondering if I started posting the stories in here if there would be any intrest in reading it.

It would just suck to type up all the stories and have no one reading them.

The actual fighting and saveing of the world or innocents takes a huge back seat to the charecters but it's still there. Any way if you have any questions feel free to ask them and let me know if you are interested. Sorry if this post bothers any one.

 

[Kevin Roegele]

What is the story about? Your description was very vague.

 

[Stupify_me]

What is the story about? Your description was very vague.

Yea Im sorry about that I was tired and trying not to give out to much information. It's really hard to describe what it's about with out giving alot away but what I will do is im going to go grab my first "Comic" and ill sort of type out the introduction that should help a little bit. It's hard for me to think of a way to explain what it is about because there is a lot of mystery involved and devolpment. So ill just post the introduction a little bit later when my wife gets back with the car I left the comics in there. Thanks for replying.

 

[Stupify_me]

This is the introduction to the first story. I know it doesn't reveal much but like I said the entire story has alot of twists and turns and mystery and action lol so I am trying not to give it away. What I can tell you is that it is about a hero of sort but like I said the main focus is the story the development I try to put the action in the back seat but it's there. The main Charecter is Daniel and what I can tell you is that he has a wife he is currently in a lab some where. They are trying to make a super soldier sort of but beyond that more than just a super soldier. The story will start with Daniel in the lab.


"Potential... What does it really mean? Is it what you can be or what you will be? Is it possible or inevitable? Destiny or up to chance? These are all things running through Daniel's mind, as he lay strapped to this cold table. Did every thing in his life lead him to this one moment? He cannot move he has no control all that belongs to the man holding the remote. All he can do is think and see. Sure, from time to time, his arm will move but he didn't do it. It's the doing of the short man in the white coat. So all he does, all he can do is think, ponder about the things this little man says. Potential, that is one thing he said, potential but what does it mean? Do you know what maximum human potential is? Daniel is about to find out."


Sorry for the errors I typed all this hope pretty fast I usually do my writing by hand. The final drafts will look much better. Please let me know if there is any intrest in this and feel free to ask any questions i will answear in the best way I can. Thanks for being polite.

 

[Stupify_me]

bump

 

[Colossus24]

hmm that sounds like it could be interesting, I, for one, would ike to see more. Thanks for posting.

 

[Kevin Roegele]

This is the introduction to the first story. I know it doesn't reveal much but like I said the entire story has alot of twists and turns and mystery and action lol so I am trying not to give it away. What I can tell you is that it is about a hero of sort but like I said the main focus is the story the development I try to put the action in the back seat but it's there. The main Charecter is Daniel and what I can tell you is that he has a wife he is currently in a lab some where. They are trying to make a super soldier sort of but beyond that more than just a super soldier. The story will start with Daniel in the lab.


"Potential... What does it really mean? Is it what you can be or what you will be? Is it possible or inevitable? Destiny or up to chance? These are all things running through Daniel's mind, as he lay strapped to this cold table. Did every thing in his life lead him to this one moment? He cannot move he has no control all that belongs to the man holding the remote. All he can do is think and see. Sure, from time to time, his arm will move but he didn't do it. It's the doing of the short man in the white coat. So all he does, all he can do is think, ponder about the things this little man says. Potential, that is one thing he said, potential but what does it mean? Do you know what maximum human potential is? Daniel is about to find out."


Sorry for the errors I typed all this hope pretty fast I usually do my writing by hand. The final drafts will look much better. Please let me know if there is any intrest in this and feel free to ask any questions i will answear in the best way I can. Thanks for being polite.

Intresting.

You've actually pretty much sold me on the mystery, because it makes me want to read it to try and guess what the mysterious stuff is.

I also like the idea of a Captain America type actually just lying there during the super soldier experiment, and hearing his thoughts.

One thing I absolutely implore you to do is make sure you punctuation, grammar and spelling is immaculate. Make sure your paragraphs are not to long. Big paragraphs put off people reading immedietly.

Anyway, bring it on-!

 

[Stupify_me]

hmm that sounds like it could be interesting, I, for one, would ike to see more. Thanks for posting.

Thank you I will post the first story tommorrow then. If you want I can send you a PM to let you know it is up.

 

[Stupify_me]

Intresting.

You've actually pretty much sold me on the mystery, because it makes me want to read it to try and guess what the mysterious stuff is.

I also like the idea of a Captain America type actually just lying there during the super soldier experiment, and hearing his thoughts.

One thing I absolutely implore you to do is make sure you punctuation, grammar and spelling is immaculate. Make sure your paragraphs are not to long. Big paragraphs put off people reading immedietly.

Anyway, bring it on-!

Yea it's like Cap mixed with Batman and a little punsiher. The first one are two are an introduction so it will be a little slow but the story will start to pick up and the charecters will all start to develop.

 

[Colossus24]

Yea it's like Cap mixed with Batman and a little punsiher.

I'm sold

 

[Kevin Roegele]

Yea it's like Cap mixed with Batman and a little punsiher. The first one are two are an introduction so it will be a little slow but the story will start to pick up and the charecters will all start to develop.

If you give me some detailed descriptions I can draw some of the characters for you.

 

[Stupify_me]

If you give me some detailed descriptions I can draw some of the characters for you.

Really that would be awsome. Can I get your email? The charecter looks will be based off real life people with some changes.

 

[Stupify_me]

Sorry for the delay guys but I found a couple of people who might be interested in actually doing the art for my comic I am talking with them at the momment and will update you.