Batgirl: The Night Before Christmas

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Just over a year ago, I told a few people I was working on a Christmas story about Cassandra Cain (this was back when she was still a "good girl," of course). I didn't get it finished up before Xmas came and went in 2005, so I put it on hold until it would be timely again. Just now, I finished it up and posted it at

Batgirl: The Night Before Christmas

Happy holidays, everybody!
 
*Smiles*
That is a really well written short story. I love the interaction near the end between Sasha and Bruce, its so...perfect. You really have the characters speech patterns and just the general feel for them all in there. I like it alot!
I laughed out loud at the part about some punk kid making advances in a parking lot. You choice of words was no less than...stellar.
Merry Christmas!
 
Dark Guardian said:
*Smiles*
That is a really well written short story. I love the interaction near the end between Sasha and Bruce, its so...perfect. You really have the characters speech patterns and just the general feel for them all in there. I like it alot!
I laughed out loud at the part about some punk kid making advances in a parking lot. You choice of words was no less than...stellar.
Merry Christmas!

Thanks! I was fairly happy myself with the dialogue in the Sasha/Bruce bit at the end. On the other hand, in the spirit of full disclosure, I should mention that I was not satisfied with my attempts to put dialogue in Santa's mouth. When I looked back over the rough draft before posting, some of his lines (not that he got very many) just didn't have the right feel to me. I don't believe I'd ever really tried to write Santa dialogue before, come to think of it. But I was up against a self-imposed deadline -- I was finishing the story on Christmas Eve, and it was set on Christmas Eve, and I wanted to post it before I went offline -- so I made a few last-minute modifications and additions on the spur of the moment, and then took the plunge and posted it, and then started a few threads such as this one to share the link with my fellow fans :).
 
Just over a year ago, I told a few people I was working on a Christmas story about Cassandra Cain (this was back when she was still a "good girl," of course). I didn't get it finished up before Xmas came and went in 2005, so I put it on hold until it would be timely again. Just now, I finished it up and posted it at

Batgirl: The Night Before Christmas

Happy holidays, everybody!

You should send it in to DC and see if you get some feedback.

Might consider copy writing it first though.
 
DC don't accept submissions for that very reason, actually.
 
Yeah.

Actually, I'm pretty sure DC isn't even interested in writers who haven't been published yet. Sorta sucks.
 
Yeah, guess you gotta start at the bottom, and work your way up.
 
You should send it in to DC and see if you get some feedback.

Might consider copy writing it first though.

Somehow I didn't notice these responses in this thread until just now.

As I understand it: Once I write down a new story, one that I wrote myself, I automatically own "copyright" on it under modern law. I don't need to put a copy in an envelope and send it to a government office or anything like that. I don't need to write "Copyright by So-and-so on such-and-such a date" anywhere in the text.

On the other hand, about your suggestion to send it to DC . . .

Several months ago I spent some time checking out the online "Submissions Guidelines" of various well-established comic book publishers, particularly as they apply to aspiring writers (since I don't have the training to try to get a gig as an artist on a Batman comic book or whatever).

Here's what it boiled down to.

DC says on their website that they don't want to see any unsolicited art samples or writing samples. The implication is that if you send such material anyway, they'll trash it as soon as they realize what it is.

Image says on their website that they don't want to see any unsolicited writing samples. However, if you already have an art team that's illustrated your script, then you can send them sample pages of your project after those pages have already been pencilled, inked, and lettered. But they make it very clear that if I send them a script they hadn't asked me for, they'll trash it immediately.

Marvel puts it a bit more gently, but it amounts to the same thing. As with DC and Image, if I send them an unsolicited writing sample, they will destroy it. However: I am allowed to send them an inquiry letter talking about my previous experience as a writer. If they are interested, then they may (someday, when they have nothing better to do) send me a reply asking for a writing sample. (I strongly suspect that my chances there would be a lot better if I could say, "I am Lorendiac, writer of twelve produced television scripts, as well as the recent best-selling novel King Cannibal.")

So basically DC, Marvel, and Image are all saying: "If we never heard of you before, and you just want to break into the field as a writer, go pester somebody else! We're not really interested!"

Dark Horse, on the other hand, says it will actually look at unsolicited writing samples; scripts for new projects, that sort of thing. If I ever break in, that will probably be the place.
 

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