beast quest

[spidergrant]

prolouge

This is a story of a world much different than ours called midgar. Only few wise men know why, but there world once consisted of humans but now only consists of beasts that are half human, half animal.

The world of midgar has four main beast classes ; the Leos, great swords men with good strenght and speed making them great warriors its too bad there very hard headed and almost have to be leaders because they hate taking orders from anyone, the Tigras, a race that uses only women as wariors who relie almost completely on archery along with great speed makes them the best archers in all of midgar if they lack one ability it would be there strength which is the cause of not having men in there army, the Rhinons, slow moving brutes with great strength along with skill with a war hammer or battle axe, the rhinons lack wisdom because they take orders from anyone with a higher rank which causes them to have horrible stategy in battle, the last main race is the pantheons, a race of that relies completly on their natural speed and agility making them great assasins and spys, if theire empire where ever to come under attack by another empire instead of making an army to fight back they would send there assasins to kill there political leaders and than become the new leaders of that race.

Recently Tyrus, The dictator of the drageons, a race of dragon beasts, found out that through alchemy he could have the skills of other races, but he would have to kill one beast from each race to get its traits. The first time he tried it he killed a scavenger (a rat beast) a cheeton (a cheata beast) and a were wolf. The result of the alchemy gave him the great senses of a scavenger, the speed of a cheeton, and the strength of a a were wolf, but the result also made him a very ugly creature with the body of a dragon, nose of a rat, fur like a wolf, and black spots on his fur like a cheeta. Tyrus felt like he was too good to be a drageon so he abandon his own class and left them to die while he used more alchemy to make a new class of beast that would change as he did. Tyrus has caused the three races he stole traits from to go into hiding along with other races he has stolen traits from that no one knows of yet. Now Tryrus has taken the next step and started attacking the four main classes which is where our story picks up.

 

[spidergrant]

Amar, king of the leos, was out hunting in the night to take his mind away from the duties of being a king. Amar had been tracking a deer through the woods and followed it to a clearing. Amar decided not to use a sword, for that would be to easy so he got on his hands and feet, like one of his lion ansesters, and ran into the clearing and leaped at deer when all of a suden he heard a sound from the trees to his left and saw an arrow coming toward him. Amar landed on the deer and the arrow was inches away from his head when sudenly a black figure apeared out of know where infront of him and stoped to reveal himself to be a pantheon. The pantheon turned around with an arrow caught in his hand and revealed himself to be shadow, king of the pantheons, "Whats going on here, and whos trying to kill me" said amar, frightened at what just happened. "Lets just see how dangerous this threat really is" said shadow as he headed toward the trees. Shadow walked into the woods and said "reveal your self, archer" but the only reply was the sound of someone running through the woods "coward" said shadow to himself as he ran through woods and disapeared and used his special power of invisibility, given to all pantheons, for the second time that night. Shadow had the archer in his sight, the archer turned out to be a tigra. 'I thought you tigras were brave enough to admit there mistakes" said Shadow as caught up with the tigra. Shadow triped the tigra and as she fell to the ground he grabed the back of her cloak and yanked her back up to her feet. "Who do you think you are grabing me" said the tigra as she revealed herself to be streak, queen of the tigras, "Whos do you think you are, shooting at a king" replied shadow.

Streak was explaining herself to Shadow when Amar came up to the two. "Of course only a tigra would run away from he mistakes" said Amar "Well maybe I wouldnt have almost shot you if you leos werent such hard headed savages who have to attack everything like animals" replied Streak. The three continued arguing until all of a suden the three heard a crash and some trees fell down only to reveal a rhinon axe in hand and trees at his feet. "Whats all the comotion" said the rhinon revelaing himself to be Grunt, king of the rhinons, "I was exploring the woods and i heard yelling, so i thought id check it out" explained Grunt.

The four had talked about how their kingdoms were holding up when they were interupted by the screach in the sky like nothing they had ever heard. The four looked up only to see a monster with the body drageon, nose of a rat, fur like a wolf, and black spots on his fur like a cheeta. The monter dove toward Amar and picked him up and flew into the air and started flying away. Streak pulled out her bow and an arrow and pointed it at the monster. The monster was too far away so Streak used her special power of sight, which is given to the tigras, to see the monster bettar than released her arrow. The arrow ziped through the air and dug into the monsters wing causing it to drop Amar and crash toward the ground. Tigra ran to where Amar was going to crash. Tigra jumped high into the air and grabed Amar and landed saftly on the ground. The monster landed right next to where Amar did and slowly got up and strangely the whole in his wing where the arrow came through healed itself. Shadow apeared infront of the monster and pulled out two daggers and chalenged the monster. The monster flew at shadow But right when he was inches infront of Shadow he stoped. The monster looked back and saw Grunt was holding him by his feet. Grunt used his power of strength, given to the rhinons, and threw him into a tree. Amar walked up to monster as it got up. The monster stared at Amar and screached into the air. Amar roared back at the monster which was the leos way of showing there aponent they were going to use their fury, which was the leos special power that made them faster and stronger and made them as wild as a lion. Amar tackled the monster and started tearing open his stomach. The monster kicked Amar off of him and jumped toward Amar. Once the monster got close to Amar he ducked and while the monster was over him he grabed the monster and threw him away from him. The monster got on his hands and knees but before he could get up Amar ran toward him and unsheathed his sword and cut off the monsters head.

The four met after the battle and talked about what to do. In the end they decided to tell their people what happened and to prepare them for battle and in one week the group would meet in the same place they did that night and discuss what do do after that.

 

[spidergrant]

ok if anyone read the story earlier you should know i edited the story and changed shadows power to invisibility instead of speed because i realized speed works bettar for a character i plan to put in later in the story

 

[spidergrant]

The four leaders told the people of their cities about what had hapened and alos told them to get along with the other races because if they were going to beat this new enemy they would have to work togethor.

The four met at the clearing where they met last night. "We all know it was fait that brought us togethor last night, and I for one think its fait who want us to destroy the monsters. But first we need to figure out what those monsters were and where they came from and how to destroy them. After I told my people what happened i went out on a quick search for answers when i found this guy" said Shadow as a drageon steped out from the woods. "What were you thinking, bringing one of his kind here" said Amar "I know my race hasnt been to friendly to other races in the past but you have to believe me when i say were all in danger. My names is fang i am the new leader of the drageons, I am the sun of Tyrus, the former kind of the drageons. Not to long ago he found out that he could get stronger if he killed a beast from another race and used alchemy, part of that beast would would become part of him. After killing a werewolf, scavengor, and cheeton. Now he has abondon the drageons and made his own army of monsters like you encountered last night. The only way we can stop these armys is if we kill tyrus than no one will be able to make more monsters thus ending the monster army. For now i cannot join your group of kind for I must go and find other armies and warn them of tyrus and take there kings to make an alliance of people that can kill my father" explained Fang. "Where can we find this king his army" asked Streak. "Head toward the black mountains, The army is all over the place there, and as for the king head toward the tallest mountain and enter and base of the mountains and the tunnels should take you to the top of the mountains" replied fang. After they discussed there plans Fang flew off to find races that needed help while the four headed back to there cities for the last time, to get weapons and armour and a way of transportation.

 

[Harlekin]

How about a spell checker?

 

[spidergrant]

om sorry about my spelling. il try and check it bettar. my word program on my computer doesent have spell check

 

[spidergrant]

sorry my word program on my computer doesent have spell check

 

[spidergrant]

The Night after the meeting with Fang, Amar walked through the woods in his new suit of armour with his new sharp long sword. Amar came to the clearing but no one seemed to be there "Guess im the first on here" said Amar to himself "actually, your a little late" said Shadow as he apeared next to Amar. He was wearing a new black cloak with pads where his chest was. "sorry im late, but i had some last preperations for my armour" said Streak as she walked into the clearing, she was wearing a chain male with cloth sraps and a quiver on her back to put her bow and arrows into. "So wheres Grunt" asked Amar. Sudenly the king of the rhinons walked into the clearing and said "Im here, Im here now lets get the show on the road." He was wearing very heavy this metal armour even with a healmit that opened up at his face just so there was room for this horn, on his back he carried a battle axe and a war hammer.

"I think its safe to say that its fate that brought us togethor, and its fate that needs us to destroy Tyrus and his army of monsters. I know some of you may not like it, But i feel like Amar should lead us. Everyone here knows that the leos are bettar leaders than warriors" said Shadow, trying to get his plans in action.
"Of course you men illect one of you own to lead" said Streak in deffiance
"Your just jealous of my leader ship skills" replied Amar
"Both of you stop fighting, just keep it to yourself and live it"said Shadow, trying to quiet down the two
"Thats all you pantheons do isnt it. Just keep it to yourself and live with your problems. No wonder their community is so bad" said Amar, regreting what he said right after it came out of his mouth
Shadow jumped and tackled Amar and unsheathed one of his knives and held it to Amar's throat. "Dont you ever insult the pantheon empire infront of me, understand!" exclaimed Shadow as he got off of Amar. "Quiet, quiet, QUIET!" yelled Grunt, quiting the other the members. "Fighting is getting us no where, if were going to defeat Tyrus we'll need to work togethor like, an alliance of heroes." said Grunt, stoping the fighting.

The alliance silently crept through the woods for hours as they headed for the black mountains. Sudenly Shadow stoped and signed for the others to stop too. The four hudled togethor and shadow whispered to the others "I smell monsters. Im going to scout into their camp alone while Streak, you cover me, Grunt, if we get into trouble well need you to help us out, and Amar, I want you to go after the leader of the battalion while we deal with everyone else.

Shadow crept up to the camp and made sure that Streak could see him. Shadow Turned invisible and silently walked into the camp and headed toward a fire with two monsters sitting around it. Shadow snuck up behind one monster and was about to reveal himself and slit the monsters throat when the other monster spoke up. "Whats the shadow behind you coming from" said the monster. Before the other could react Shadow revealed himelf and cut open the monsters throat. The other monster screached and flew into the air but before he could get far an arrow came from the ground and soared through the air and went through its head. Shadow could here the rest of the monsters waking up and heading toward him. Five sword wielding monsters charged toward Shadow but stoped when they felt the ground shaking. The soldiers looked back and saw Grunt charging at them. Grunt gored on soldier with his horn and took out his hammer and hit the next as hard as he could and sent him flying in the air while he swaped his hammer for his battle axe and than cut the next soldier in half. Grunt put his axe away and grabed the last two soldiers and slamed them togethor. One last monster that seemed slightly bigger than the others steped out of its tent and screached into the air and pulled out two short swords. Amar steped out from the woods and pulled out his two handed sword and roared at the monster. Amar ran at the monster and swung his sword at the monster. The monster blocked Amar's sword with one sword and stabed Amar with the other. Amar resheathed his sword and held the gash where the sword went into him. Amar roared into the air and started his fury power and ran toward the monster. The monster realized what was happening so it used its speed power from the cheetons and than jumped into the air and started flying away. Amar ran near Grunt and jumped into the air and Grunt graped him and threw him at the monster. Amar soared through the air and landed on the back of the monster and pulled out his sword and choped off both of its wings than jumped off of the monster and right when he hit the gorund he rolled, causing minimal damage. Amar gathered the allince togethor and told them to search the camp for supplys and that in the morning they would start there journey to the black mountains again.

 

[spidergrant]

so readers what do you think. please tell me what i need to work on. i already know i need to work on detail and spelling more. and keep in mind im only 13

 

[spidergrant]

sorry im taking so long for the next part. i just want to know if anyone even reads the story

 

[spidergrant]

im thinking of stoping writig this story. i guess im a little more into transformers than i am fantasy. i just did a fan fic called transformers unleashed. but i dont have sell check so i had alout of spellin mistakes. and i had like 10 parts written and when it got time for me to start writting it was hard to start writting again