does this idea sound good to anyone

[spidergrant]

ok im writing a fan fiction that about a fantasy worl called midgar where instead of humans there are creatures that are half human half animal. like lion, tiger, panther, and rhino, and some others. i got the idea from when i went to my friends house and we played golden axe 3 and i saw there was a character that was like half human half panther and i thought it looked cool so i came up with the idea. four kings/queens of each race are going to come togethor. sort of like the fellow ship of the ring and there going to meet other characters as they go on there journey. there trying to kill this one king who is like a hybrid of alout of animals. he makes a large army of hybrids like him that he can easily make more of. i know this is kind of like lord of the rings or something i was just wondering if anyone liked the idead

 

[Untilteld]

http://forums.superherohype.com/forumdisplay.php?f=36

There dude.

 

[millennium movies]

You know what, to be frank i think you got a good concept there! Need to work on the villain a bit perhaps to make him have a more valid reason/motive for being "bad". Other than that sounds interesting.

 

[Untilteld]

I think you should have something like an action/fantasy movie. Here's a suggestion, shoot it down or whatever you want to do with it. Maybe have this Hybird or whatever had a terrible accident, thus him becoming the Hybird. Than he feels left out, and embarassed because of his new look. Have him develop this drug that he spreads to most of the population on the planet (obviously another planet, not ours) and he has basically everyone turned into a Hybird, but not as strong as him. But there are some defaults of those he gave the drug to and they become a different type of species, (hence, your half animal, half human idea) and than when he creates these defaults, he leaves them for death and kicks them out to a forest or something. And your main character has to stop this Hybird, and discovers these characters on his way. Kind of like a Wizard of Oz theme I guess.

 

[spidergrant]

actually i just wrote the prolouge and the villain is a hybrid because he was the emporer race of a half dragon hlaf human that killed some other races and used alchemy to give himself the good traits of the species along with some traits of the way they look. than he abandons his race and uses alchemy to make a new army of hubrids like him. im going to put the prolouge up here and tell me what you think. the only problem i have with the next part is i cant think of names for the characters. for the lion im thinking i should call him amar. than for the rhino i will call him grunt, and for the panther im thinking maybe shadow and for the tiger maybe stripe. i know thats a lame name and i could use a suggestion for it. just keep in mind that the tiger will be a girl

 

[Jack Rabbit]

Wrong forum.

 

[spidergrant]

prolouge

This is a story of a world much different than ours called midgar. Only few wise men know why, but there world once consisted of humans but now only consists of beasts that are half human, half animal.

The world of midgar has four main beast classes ; the Leos, great swords men with good strenght and speed making them great warriors its too bad there very hard headed and almost have to be leaders because they hate taking orders from anyone, the Tigras, a race that uses only women as wariors who relie almost completely on archery along with great speed makes them the best archers in all of midgar if they lack one ability it would be there strength which is the cause of not having men in there army, the Rhinons, slow moving brutes with great strength along with skill with a war hammer or battle axe, the rhinons lack wisdom because they take orders from anyone with a higher rank which causes them to have horrible stategy in battle, the last main race is the panthions, a race of that relies completly on their natural speed and agility making them great assasins and spys, if there empire where ever to come under attack by another empire instead of making an army to fight back they would send there assasins to kill there political leaders and than become the new leaders of that race.

Recently Tyrus, The dictator of the drageons, a race of dragon beasts, found out that trough alchemy he could have the skills of other races but he would have to kill one beast from each race to get its traits. The first time he tried it he killed a scavenger (a rat beast) a cheeton (a cheata beast) and a were wolf. The result of the alchemy gave him the great senses of a scavenger, the speed of a cheeton, and the strength of a a were wolf, but the result also made him a very ugly creature with the body of a dragon, nose of a rat, fur like a wolf, and black spots on his fur like a cheeta. Tyrus felt like he weas too good to be a drageon so he abandon his own class and left them to die while he used more alchemy to make a new class of beast that would change as he did. Tyrus has caused the three races he stole traits from to go into hiding along with other races he has stolen traits from that no one knows of yet. Now Tryrus has taken the next step and started attacking the four main classes which is where our story picks up.

 

[spidergrant]

sorry about the paragraphs but has anyone else noticed paragraphs dont work on here

 

[Morg]

Grant, Drak told you to spend some time looking around this board

 

[nosebleed.]

This thread is increasingly hostile towards beast men...and I find that highly offensive. Seeing as how my father was a beast man and couldn't earn enough money to fully support us, putting us on welfare and eventually getting us deported to a foreign country...I see NOTHING funny nor entertaining about 'hunting' a 'bad guy' who is a 'beast man' purely for the sake of 'hunting' a 'beast' man'.

CEASE AND DESIST before I report you!!

 

[spidergrant]

you know you bettar be kidding cause if your not. that is the dumbest think ive ever heard. i dont even get ho this would be afensive. and by the way i didnt put this on the fan fiction boards because i wanted to see how the shh community reacted to this befor i entered it

 

[spidergrant]

actually i just wrote the prolouge and the villain is a hybrid because he was the emporer race of a half dragon hlaf human that killed some other races and used alchemy to give himself the good traits of the species along with some traits of the way they look. than he abandons his race and uses alchemy to make a new army of hubrids like him. im going to put the prolouge up here and tell me what you think. the only problem i have with the next part is i cant think of names for the characters. for the lion im thinking i should call him amar. than for the rhino i will call him grunt, and for the panther im thinking maybe shadow and for the tiger maybe stripe. i know thats a lame name and i could use a suggestion for it. just keep in mind that the tiger will be a girl

any suggerstion

 

[Untilteld]

sounds good, get writing dude

 

[spidergrant]

im already writing the first part. the story will be going by the name beast quest

 

[KALEL114]

This thread is increasingly hostile towards beast men...and I find that highly offensive. Seeing as how my father was a beast man and couldn't earn enough money to fully support us, putting us on welfare and eventually getting us deported to a foreign country...I see NOTHING funny nor entertaining about 'hunting' a 'bad guy' who is a 'beast man' purely for the sake of 'hunting' a 'beast' man'.

CEASE AND DESIST before I report you!!

I am.

 

[KALEL114]

im already writing the first part. the story will be going by the name beast quest

Sounds good. Keep the imagination flowing and don't let anyone pull you down.

 

[spidergrant]

sorry its taking a while. ive been doing other stuff while i write

 

[spidergrant]

Sounds good. Keep the imagination flowing and don't let anyone pull you down.

that what they did to my last story transformers unleashed

 

[spidergrant]

so for those of you reading this psot here and cant figure it out go tot he fan fiction boards

 

[Kevin Roegele]

This thread is increasingly hostile towards beast men...and I find that highly offensive. Seeing as how my father was a beast man and couldn't earn enough money to fully support us, putting us on welfare and eventually getting us deported to a foreign country...I see NOTHING funny nor entertaining about 'hunting' a 'bad guy' who is a 'beast man' purely for the sake of 'hunting' a 'beast' man'.

CEASE AND DESIST before I report you!!

Post of the Year 2007

 

[Kevin Roegele]

ok im writing a fan fiction that about a fantasy worl called midgar where instead of humans there are creatures that are half human half animal. like lion, tiger, panther, and rhino, and some others. i got the idea from when i went to my friends house and we played golden axe 3 and i saw there was a character that was like half human half panther and i thought it looked cool so i came up with the idea. four kings/queens of each race are going to come togethor. sort of like the fellow ship of the ring and there going to meet other characters as they go on there journey. there trying to kill this one king who is like a hybrid of alout of animals. he makes a large army of hybrids like him that he can easily make more of. i know this is kind of like lord of the rings or something i was just wondering if anyone liked the idead

Good ideas!

 

[spidergrant]

did you read the first 2 chapters on the beast quest thread

 

[donaldthe3rd]

I know I'm a little late on this but I couldnt help it. This is towards Nosebleed pretty much. For starters you say this is hostile to how you say "beast men", how would a fan made story be hostile to "beast men"? For one they dont necessarily exist in the way that spidergrant is talking about. You also say that your father was a "beast man". Well what was he exactly? Perhaps part wolf or a bear? And if he was disfugred into some beastial form then wouldnt that make you part beastial yourself? And if he was "handicapped" like you say he was then how would he not be able to make a living? I know I know, that maybe he was handicapped so bad that he couldnt work but come on if he was so badly handicapped that he couldnt work, he looked like an animal, then how did your parents meet? Online? So far I find your arguement to be quite untrue and rather pathetic. And what else do you find offensive about anything that portrays "beast men"? Movies, cartoons, music, that Geico commerical perhaps? Do you write complaints to movie companies saying that they should recall all of their movies that contain beastial humans in the film because you find it offensive for a reason that makes no sense what so ever? And whats with CEASE AND DESIST OR I"LL REPORT YOU! Who are you Robocop calm down man gosh.
You know theres a quote I was told from a WW2 Veteran that obviously survived but sadly passed away about 10 years ago, his name was Don "Doc" Watson and he said, "Better to be thought a fool than to open one's mouth and remove all doubt". And if you can put two and two together you'll know what that means.

 

[SniktSteven]

Yeah I didnt believe him either. Not a word he said really made much sense. :S. But well said donald. And nice quote.

 

[Norman Osborn]

I know I'm a little late on this but I couldnt help it. This is towards Nosebleed pretty much. For starters you say this is hostile to how you say "beast men", how would a fan made story be hostile to "beast men"? For one they dont necessarily exist in the way that spidergrant is talking about. You also say that your father was a "beast man". Well what was he exactly? Perhaps part wolf or a bear? And if he was disfugred into some beastial form then wouldnt that make you part beastial yourself? And if he was "handicapped" like you say he was then how would he not be able to make a living? I know I know, that maybe he was handicapped so bad that he couldnt work but come on if he was so badly handicapped that he couldnt work, he looked like an animal, then how did your parents meet? Online? So far I find your arguement to be quite untrue and rather pathetic. And what else do you find offensive about anything that portrays "beast men"? Movies, cartoons, music, that Geico commerical perhaps? Do you write complaints to movie companies saying that they should recall all of their movies that contain beastial humans in the film because you find it offensive for a reason that makes no sense what so ever? And whats with CEASE AND DESIST OR I"LL REPORT YOU! Who are you Robocop calm down man gosh.
You know theres a quote I was told from a WW2 Veteran that obviously survived but sadly passed away about 10 years ago, his name was Don "Doc" Watson and he said, "Better to be thought a fool than to open one's mouth and remove all doubt". And if you can put two and two together you'll know what that means.

I'm not sure if you're serious or not......it was a freaking joke dude....he was spoofing