Challenge #1

[Cmill216]

How about we change the premise to Renner and Pine as cops, Renner's character is seeking redemption for the death of his wife and the only man that can help him is a contract killer who was betrayed by the inner circle? Something like that, would have to be worded properly.

That's not a bad suggestion, though I still prefer the journalist angle because it makes him more of an outsider looking in.

 

[Mrs. Sawyer]

Hot damn, I love it.

I'd probably swap out Scorsese for someone a little less obvious (maybe Sam Mendes), but other than that I think it's pretty perfect. Great work!

We have a winner Parker, excellent job.

Thanks, guys.

It took a little over 5 hours to complete. That includes finding all the right pictres (thanks for the Fass picture).

I chose Scorsese because I stole the credits stuff from The Departed and it said Martin Scorsese at the bottom so I chose to match it. But since you can't read it I can change it to Mendes if it's really needed.

How about we change the premise to Renner and Pine as cops, Renner's character is seeking redemption for the death of his wife and the only man that can help him is a contract killer who was betrayed by the inner circle? Something like that, would have to be worded properly.

That's not a bad suggestion, though I still prefer the journalist angle because it makes him more of an outsider looking in.

I prefer the journalist angle too. It makes him holding the gun more powerful and I like the though of all these guys coming together from different worlds.


Now one of us needs to send all of this to Spider-Fan. Who's doing it?

 

[Cmill216]

Yeah if you wouldn't mind, go ahead and change it to Mendes, and we can gather the final pitch together to send to SF.

 

[Mrs. Sawyer]

Okay. Doing it now.

 

[Mrs. Sawyer]

Here it is.

 

[Sebastos]

Alright then guys I say we're all set. Just to let you know, I probably won't be on till after 11, having company over.

 

[Cmill216]

Okay, so if we're in agreement, here will be our presentation. I really think we nailed it:

TITLE:
The Triumvirate

GENRE:
Crime Drama

RATING:
R

LOGLINE:
In 1970s New York, a lone reporter (Jeremy Renner) teams with a contract killer (Michael Fassbender) to take down members of a corrupt inner circle who secretly run the city.

DIRECTOR:
Sam Mendes

CAST:
Jeremy Renner - a reporter
Michael Fassbender - a contract killer
Jon Hamm - the corrupt city mayor
Willem Dafoe - the corrupt police chief
Tom Wilkinson - the drug kingpin
Charlize Theron - Renner's fiancee
Chris Pine - a rookie cop
​

 

[Sebastos]

Great edit PW.

EDIT: NVM

 

[enterthemadness]

Gun is a bit too...big. However, poster is good enough as it is.

You all got my Dorff pic on the last page, right? That's my player pic grid. Emo Dorff from fear Dot Com. I'll be sad too if I was in that mess of a film.

 

[Cmill216]

Oh, yeah, who's doing the squares?

 

[enterthemadness]

Not me, I don't know how to do that stuff.

You think I should ask Spider-Fan if my Dorff pic is okay? Cuase there are pics of him attending red carpet in a suit...I just went for the movei pic still.

 

[Sebastos]

Okay, so if we're in agreement, here will be our presentation. I really think we nailed it:

Great job team. I could've done the squares but I'm on my IPod now, having a miner problem with my laptop...

 

[Mrs. Sawyer]

Okay, so if we're in agreement, here will be our presentation. I really think we nailed it:

With the log line, I would add he teams up with a contract killer and a rookie cop.

 

[Mrs. Sawyer]

Oh, yeah, who's doing the squares?

I think we just give him the pictures and he said he'll get them resized. Someone's making the grid for us.

 

[Sebastos]

Should we add the characters names? Or we leave it like "a journalist" and etc.?

 

[Cmill216]

With the log line, I would add he teams up with a contract killer and a rookie cop.

Good catch.

TITLE:
The Triumvirate

GENRE:
Crime Drama

RATING:
R

LOGLINE:
In 1970s New York, a lone reporter (Jeremy Renner) teams with a contract killer (Michael Fassbender) and a rookie cop (Chris Pine) to take down members of a corrupt inner circle who secretly run the city.

DIRECTOR:
Sam Mendes

CAST:
Jeremy Renner - a reporter
Michael Fassbender - a contract killer
Jon Hamm - the corrupt city mayor
Willem Dafoe - the corrupt police chief
Tom Wilkinson - the drug kingpin
Charlize Theron - Renner's fiancee
Chris Pine - a rookie cop
​

 

[Mrs. Sawyer]

So are you sending it to Spider-Fan Cmil?

Also, We should cast a guy for the score. I suggest Michael Giacchino.

 

[Cmill216]

Alrighty fellas, our submission is in.

TEAM 2 SUBMISSION:

Here's our Oscar movie pitch under the Gangster/Crime Drama genre:

TITLE:
The Triumvirate

GENRE:
Crime Drama

RATING:
R

LOGLINE:
In 1970s New York, a lone reporter (Jeremy Renner) teams with a contract killer (Michael Fassbender) and a rookie cop (Chris Pine) to take down members of a corrupt inner circle who secretly run the city.

DIRECTOR:
Sam Mendes

CAST:
Jeremy Renner - a reporter
Michael Fassbender - a contract killer
Jon Hamm - the corrupt city mayor
Willem Dafoe - the corrupt police chief
Tom Wilkinson - the drug kingpin
Charlize Theron - Renner's fiancee
Chris Pine - a rookie cop
​

And here are our team squares. We think they reflect our own personal outlooks on awards and life:

Parker Wayne:

Iron Fist:

enterthemadness:

Cmill216:

I might be biased, but I think we've got this one in the bag.

 

[Mrs. Sawyer]

Excellent!

 

[Sebastos]

I join you in the biasness.

 

[enterthemadness]

Awesome. This looks great.

 

[enterthemadness]

Guess SF & Nirvana are busy?

 

[enterthemadness]

Well, we lost....I did the best I could, but was hardly any help. Now what happens? Who do we vote for? Do we aim for team 4?

 

[Sebastos]

Good job regardless guys.

 

[enterthemadness]

Well..I'm voting for somebody on team 4...probably Nell.