Hype City :The Series
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BHK V.O. – It was a warm summer night at the Hype. My partner Kritish and I were at the local Krispy Kreme, which I have a very bad craving for.
Kritish: Them **** are going to kill you one day BHK, then maybe I’ll get a hot ass partner to look at.
BHK gives Kritish the finger.
BHK V.O.- While are daily comments about each other are still going strong, the radio is blasting Kritish’s favorite DJ. Celldog aka Memphis Slim was a very popular political shock jock, depending on who you asked.
Kritish: Why the **** do I listen to this **** every goddamn night.
BlackHardKnight: Cuz deep down you like the sob.
Kritish: **** you.
Police radio: Adam 12 please respond.
BlackHardKnight: This detective Knight over.
SFX: Police Radio: We got 10-54 over on SHH Lane, we need a Hype Squad detective to the scene.
BlackHardKnight: Roger, Adam 12 on the way.
Tonight’s Case File
Play Memphis For Me
BHK V.O.- We got our contact information about a possible dead body at 1006 SHH Lane. A very rich area of Hype City, the best of the best live here including Mayor Crave. As we pull up to scene of the crime Kritish looks pissed, but then when he is not.
Kritish: Not this two asswipes again.
BlackHardKnight: What? I like EnterTheMaddness he seems like a decent cop.
Kritish: Yea but Lollicop is a real **** up and ETM I just don’t like him.
BlackHardKnight: Do you like anybody?
Kritish: My yoga teacher Candy Samples, my word she is something.
BlackHardKnight: ….
BHK V.O.- The crime scene looked very messy with tree branches, dirt all over the driveway and back yard area. Two Hype City officers EnterTheMaddness and Lollicop were the first on the scene.
ETM: Ever scene something like that.
BHK: Jesus his head is gone!
ETM: I know poor bastard.
Kritish: Eh he lost his head so.
Lollycop: Good to see you never change Krit, still a heartless sob.
Kritish: The chick dig it, which pretty much matters at this point.
BHK: So do we have any id on the victim from him or from inside the house.
Lollycop: Yep it that shock jock Celldog.
BHK: Are you sure, cuz we just heard him on the radio.
Lollycop: Yea that was his best of series, he was on vacation here at his home according to his neighbor Burt Ward.
Kritish: The Boy Wonder Burt Ward, jeez.
ETM: CSIU is combing the house for more clues.
BHK: Ok keep us posted we are heading to WHYPE, and to talk to the program director.
Kritish: ( Walking toward the Turbo Interceptor) Man I can believe this happen.
BHK: Wow you having emotions for Celldog, got to record.
Kritish: Nah I just wish it was me that did it first.
BHK: ….
BHK V.O. – It was a warm summer night at the Hype. My partner Kritish and I were at the local Krispy Kreme, which I have a very bad craving for.
Kritish: Them **** are going to kill you one day BHK, then maybe I’ll get a hot ass partner to look at.
BHK gives Kritish the finger.
BHK V.O.- While are daily comments about each other are still going strong, the radio is blasting Kritish’s favorite DJ. Celldog aka Memphis Slim was a very popular political shock jock, depending on who you asked.
Kritish: Why the **** do I listen to this **** every goddamn night.
BlackHardKnight: Cuz deep down you like the sob.
Kritish: **** you.
Police radio: Adam 12 please respond.
BlackHardKnight: This detective Knight over.
SFX: Police Radio: We got 10-54 over on SHH Lane, we need a Hype Squad detective to the scene.
BlackHardKnight: Roger, Adam 12 on the way.
Tonight’s Case File
Play Memphis For Me
BHK V.O.- We got our contact information about a possible dead body at 1006 SHH Lane. A very rich area of Hype City, the best of the best live here including Mayor Crave. As we pull up to scene of the crime Kritish looks pissed, but then when he is not.
Kritish: Not this two asswipes again.
BlackHardKnight: What? I like EnterTheMaddness he seems like a decent cop.
Kritish: Yea but Lollicop is a real **** up and ETM I just don’t like him.
BlackHardKnight: Do you like anybody?
Kritish: My yoga teacher Candy Samples, my word she is something.
BlackHardKnight: ….
BHK V.O.- The crime scene looked very messy with tree branches, dirt all over the driveway and back yard area. Two Hype City officers EnterTheMaddness and Lollicop were the first on the scene.
ETM: Ever scene something like that.
BHK: Jesus his head is gone!
ETM: I know poor bastard.
Kritish: Eh he lost his head so.
Lollycop: Good to see you never change Krit, still a heartless sob.
Kritish: The chick dig it, which pretty much matters at this point.
BHK: So do we have any id on the victim from him or from inside the house.
Lollycop: Yep it that shock jock Celldog.
BHK: Are you sure, cuz we just heard him on the radio.
Lollycop: Yea that was his best of series, he was on vacation here at his home according to his neighbor Burt Ward.
Kritish: The Boy Wonder Burt Ward, jeez.
ETM: CSIU is combing the house for more clues.
BHK: Ok keep us posted we are heading to WHYPE, and to talk to the program director.
Kritish: ( Walking toward the Turbo Interceptor) Man I can believe this happen.
BHK: Wow you having emotions for Celldog, got to record.
Kritish: Nah I just wish it was me that did it first.
BHK: ….
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good start man 
i love buddy cop thrillers, i can't believe slim got whacked before he got to rant
good start man i love buddy cop thrillers, i can't believe slim got whacked before he got to rant
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This is pretty good. I hope you finish this too many people don't finish there stories on here 
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A-Man is the King Pin of the city, suckas!
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BHK V.O.- Wednesday mornings are the worst when it comes to solving murders. I would love doing it on Mondays, but since I can’t control who died on what day , I will just suck it up. Kritish and I headed to WHYPE where Celldog works the night time air with his show The Real American Hero. We are meeting his program director Sapphire Prima.
SFX: The Turbo Interceptor roars in to the WHYPE parking lot.
Kritish and BHK enter the WHYPE lobby.
Kritish: I hope this chick is cute, I get tired of old bags in high position.
BHK: We are here on business not for you to get laid. Remember an innocent man get whacked last night.
Kritish: Right innocent…I’ll try to remember that with a straight face.
BHK V.O: The program director Sapphire Prima was a young fresh face from Empire University. She was top of her class in journalism and fought like hell to get this job. Word on the street is she and Celldog had a thing but that could be just rumors.
Sapphire Prima: Good morning gentlemen, I have heard the news about Memphis Slim. It is a sad day he will be missed.
Kritish: Right. Anyways we are here to ask a few question about Celldog. Did he have any enemies? Did he provoke anyone here at work or did not get along with people in the community?
Sapphire Prima: No he was great to work with, he was a true professional. He gave a lot of money to people. He help me get this job straight from college, as well as public services around the city.
BHK: So you’re saying he was not some right wing nut job.
Sapphire Prima: No he was a model citizen with different views of America.
Kritish: Ms Prima where you sleeping with Mr. Slim.
Sapphire Prima- No Mr. Slim and I had a very good working relationship. No affairs went on with him and I.
BHK: We are sorry about that question we just have to know, it can help our case. Also we will need a log of calls from the show.
Sapphire Prima: May I ask why?
BHK: Well the killer might have been a caller who did not share in the…
Kritish: Views of the real american hero.
Sapphire Prima: I see well I will have these records sent to your dept.
Kritish: Thank you Ms. Prima. Here my card please call me uh if you have more information.
Sapphire Prima: Thank you gentleman.
BHK: Thank you for the time.
The two detective leave the building heading toward the car.
Kritish: Did you see the legs on her, Christ if Celldog wasn’t sobbing her down he is an idiot.
BHK: Maybe he was a gentleman and had morals.
Kritish: Yea and my dick can do the Electric Slide.
BHK: I have no words.
BHK V.O.- We left to head back to the station analyze the data being sent from the radio station. I’m hope that maybe in the caller logs is something that can make a big impact. Plus I get to work with Vibeke_T, oh baby maybe today won’t be so bad.
SFX: The Turbo Interceptor roars in to the WHYPE parking lot.
Kritish and BHK enter the WHYPE lobby.
Kritish: I hope this chick is cute, I get tired of old bags in high position.
BHK: We are here on business not for you to get laid. Remember an innocent man get whacked last night.
Kritish: Right innocent…I’ll try to remember that with a straight face.
BHK V.O: The program director Sapphire Prima was a young fresh face from Empire University. She was top of her class in journalism and fought like hell to get this job. Word on the street is she and Celldog had a thing but that could be just rumors.
Sapphire Prima: Good morning gentlemen, I have heard the news about Memphis Slim. It is a sad day he will be missed.
Kritish: Right. Anyways we are here to ask a few question about Celldog. Did he have any enemies? Did he provoke anyone here at work or did not get along with people in the community?
Sapphire Prima: No he was great to work with, he was a true professional. He gave a lot of money to people. He help me get this job straight from college, as well as public services around the city.
BHK: So you’re saying he was not some right wing nut job.
Sapphire Prima: No he was a model citizen with different views of America.
Kritish: Ms Prima where you sleeping with Mr. Slim.
Sapphire Prima- No Mr. Slim and I had a very good working relationship. No affairs went on with him and I.
BHK: We are sorry about that question we just have to know, it can help our case. Also we will need a log of calls from the show.
Sapphire Prima: May I ask why?
BHK: Well the killer might have been a caller who did not share in the…
Kritish: Views of the real american hero.
Sapphire Prima: I see well I will have these records sent to your dept.
Kritish: Thank you Ms. Prima. Here my card please call me uh if you have more information.
Sapphire Prima: Thank you gentleman.
BHK: Thank you for the time.
The two detective leave the building heading toward the car.
Kritish: Did you see the legs on her, Christ if Celldog wasn’t sobbing her down he is an idiot.
BHK: Maybe he was a gentleman and had morals.
Kritish: Yea and my dick can do the Electric Slide.
BHK: I have no words.
BHK V.O.- We left to head back to the station analyze the data being sent from the radio station. I’m hope that maybe in the caller logs is something that can make a big impact. Plus I get to work with Vibeke_T, oh baby maybe today won’t be so bad.
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BHK V.O.- When it comes to a pissed off boss Dew K Mosi win the award hands down. She is never happy with Kritish and I’s work ethic.
Lt. Dew K. Mosi: You two screw up in my office.
Kritish: Hey Dewdrop what shaken.
Lt. Dew K. Mosi: Your job.
Kritish: That is cold Lt.
BHK: We got back from the radio station, and talked to the program director. She also gave us the caller log. We are on top of things Dew.
Lt. Dew K. Mosi: Sure you are and I know you two morons are going to screw this up. Celldog is a popular figure in the community and I promise Mayor Crave and Commissioner Excelsior that you two are the men for this case. Prove me wrong and don’t screw up, I will be watching.
BHK: Don’t worry we will be smooth.
The two detectives leave Lt Mosi’s office.
BHK: Man that was a close one.
Kritish: Dew is all talk sometimes, she loves us.
BHK V.O.- We got word that the data had been process and reviewed so we head down to Vibeke_T’s dept.
Vibeke_T: Ok I checked over the caller list and this name appears more than 50 times, Taiwarrior 21.
BHK: Hmmm got anything on him.
Vibeke_T: Not much he is priest for that cult movement Hyperion Bay.
Kritish: That crap where they believe that Hype City was built on ruins of a man spider god. Un ****ing believeable.
BHK: Did not you not meet Superman in Metropolis while on vacation?
Kritish: Yea and your point?
BHK: Maybe Lord Hyperion could have been real.
Vibeke_T: Real or not this guy deserves a checking out.
Kritish: Alright let’s roll partner.
BHK: Give me a min, I’ll catch up.
Vibeke_T: Yes detective what more can I do for you.
BHK V.O.- This Nubian princess always make me nervous when I’m around her.
BHK: I was…well wondering if you would like to go out on a night on the town with me.
Vibeke_T: Well I don’t know Knight, I just got out of a long relationship with Deputy mayor Catman. So I don’t know if I’m ready for a night on the town.
BHK: I see well if you change your mind umm give me a call.
Vibeke_T: I will keep that in mind.
BHK V.O.- Well I just crashed and burned…and she was dating the deputy mayor Catman. That slime ball wow and I thought she had taste.
BHK head toward the Turbo Interceptor with Kritish ready to go.
Kritish: Crashed and burned again (chucks to himself)
BHK: Go to hell
Kritish: See if you were swinging like me then you would be king of the jungle.
BHK: She dated Catman.
Kritish: That slime ball…man I thought she would have taste.
BHK: I need to drown my sorrows real quick.
Kritish: Oh yea to Le Grease.
Lt. Dew K. Mosi: You two screw up in my office.
Kritish: Hey Dewdrop what shaken.
Lt. Dew K. Mosi: Your job.
Kritish: That is cold Lt.
BHK: We got back from the radio station, and talked to the program director. She also gave us the caller log. We are on top of things Dew.
Lt. Dew K. Mosi: Sure you are and I know you two morons are going to screw this up. Celldog is a popular figure in the community and I promise Mayor Crave and Commissioner Excelsior that you two are the men for this case. Prove me wrong and don’t screw up, I will be watching.
BHK: Don’t worry we will be smooth.
The two detectives leave Lt Mosi’s office.
BHK: Man that was a close one.
Kritish: Dew is all talk sometimes, she loves us.
BHK V.O.- We got word that the data had been process and reviewed so we head down to Vibeke_T’s dept.
Vibeke_T: Ok I checked over the caller list and this name appears more than 50 times, Taiwarrior 21.
BHK: Hmmm got anything on him.
Vibeke_T: Not much he is priest for that cult movement Hyperion Bay.
Kritish: That crap where they believe that Hype City was built on ruins of a man spider god. Un ****ing believeable.
BHK: Did not you not meet Superman in Metropolis while on vacation?
Kritish: Yea and your point?
BHK: Maybe Lord Hyperion could have been real.
Vibeke_T: Real or not this guy deserves a checking out.
Kritish: Alright let’s roll partner.
BHK: Give me a min, I’ll catch up.
Vibeke_T: Yes detective what more can I do for you.
BHK V.O.- This Nubian princess always make me nervous when I’m around her.
BHK: I was…well wondering if you would like to go out on a night on the town with me.
Vibeke_T: Well I don’t know Knight, I just got out of a long relationship with Deputy mayor Catman. So I don’t know if I’m ready for a night on the town.
BHK: I see well if you change your mind umm give me a call.
Vibeke_T: I will keep that in mind.
BHK V.O.- Well I just crashed and burned…and she was dating the deputy mayor Catman. That slime ball wow and I thought she had taste.
BHK head toward the Turbo Interceptor with Kritish ready to go.
Kritish: Crashed and burned again (chucks to himself)
BHK: Go to hell
Kritish: See if you were swinging like me then you would be king of the jungle.
BHK: She dated Catman.
Kritish: That slime ball…man I thought she would have taste.
BHK: I need to drown my sorrows real quick.
Kritish: Oh yea to Le Grease.
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This is building well we have an early suspect here in Tai and i am already suspicious of deputy Mayor Catman
we have an early suspect here in Tai and i am already suspicious of deputy Mayor Catman
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BHK V.O.- Le Grease is the hottest spot in Hype City, everyone comes thur at some point. The place was founded by MusclesForSupes a world traveler who had been to place like Brooklyn, Smallville, and Eternia. My only vacation was in the Mushroom King and it was so over hyped.
SFX: The Turbo Interceptor roars into the parking lot.
BHK V.O.- MusclesForSupes as has a lot of famous people come by. I have met Bruce Wayne once here, doesn’t talk much. Wonder Woman has stop by for a drink and man is she one big *****.
Kritish: Man I am hungry this case is stress me out.
BHK: Funny you don’t look stress
Kritish: My stress comes in layers, you would know that if listen to me.
BHK: Oh brother.
Clouseau: Hey fellas join me over here.
BHK V.O.- Clouseau is a great detective and I hope to live up to he's stats in the field.
Kritish thinks he is a blow hard and needs to shut his trap.
Clouseau: I hear you two are working the Celldog case. Any leads yet.
Kritish: You know we don’t talk Hype Squad cases in public Clouseau.
Clouseau: I know just testing you and you passed.
BHK: Wow what a detective.
Kritish: Yea I got something in my toilet he can detect.
BHK: Clouseau how much do you know about the Hyperion Bay cult.
Clouseau: The Hyperion Bay religion was founded in 1962 by Stanly Ditko. He was a failing comic book writer and artist who need a gimmick. He researched a spider man god that was prasied by the natives that once roamed where Hype City stands. It attracts a lots of strange and wealthy people, but some of them do violence things to the city. It believed that Lord Hyperion will cast his might web over his follower and take them to a heaven to live forever.
Kritish: That was the big crock of **** I have ever heard. Stan Ditko was an insane man trying to get rich and weirdos with money are just that.
Hunter Rider: So am I just a weirdo old partner.
SFX: The Turbo Interceptor roars into the parking lot.
BHK V.O.- MusclesForSupes as has a lot of famous people come by. I have met Bruce Wayne once here, doesn’t talk much. Wonder Woman has stop by for a drink and man is she one big *****.
Kritish: Man I am hungry this case is stress me out.
BHK: Funny you don’t look stress
Kritish: My stress comes in layers, you would know that if listen to me.
BHK: Oh brother.
Clouseau: Hey fellas join me over here.
BHK V.O.- Clouseau is a great detective and I hope to live up to he's stats in the field.
Kritish thinks he is a blow hard and needs to shut his trap.
Clouseau: I hear you two are working the Celldog case. Any leads yet.
Kritish: You know we don’t talk Hype Squad cases in public Clouseau.
Clouseau: I know just testing you and you passed.
BHK: Wow what a detective.
Kritish: Yea I got something in my toilet he can detect.
BHK: Clouseau how much do you know about the Hyperion Bay cult.
Clouseau: The Hyperion Bay religion was founded in 1962 by Stanly Ditko. He was a failing comic book writer and artist who need a gimmick. He researched a spider man god that was prasied by the natives that once roamed where Hype City stands. It attracts a lots of strange and wealthy people, but some of them do violence things to the city. It believed that Lord Hyperion will cast his might web over his follower and take them to a heaven to live forever.
Kritish: That was the big crock of **** I have ever heard. Stan Ditko was an insane man trying to get rich and weirdos with money are just that.
Hunter Rider: So am I just a weirdo old partner.
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Kritish V.O.- Honestly why the hell does BHK do these pointless voice overs for. Anyways since BHK doesnt know Hunter Rider like I do this is my pointless voice over. Hunter and myself were a part of the Hype City police dept. He was the lead officer and I was just a rookie. He was truly my best friend, I am mostly a lone wolf type keeping to myself privately. It would explain my cold heart to others, psss that just bull****. Getting on with this voice over, a new show was created by producer Morg called Hyper Cop. Hunter said I was perfect for this cyborg cop show, I didnt see myself as this tv star. Well I went in to audition with Hunter as my support, what do u know that bastard Rider got the lead. ****ing pretty boys make me sick.
Kritish: You have always been strange Rider.
Hunter Rider: At least you have not changed Krit.
J. Albas Lover: HR where have you been, babe.
Hunter Rider: Been shooting the breeze with my old cop buddy.
JAL: Oh right when you were a real cop. Anyways I just got you a starring role with guess who.
Hunter Rider: Jessica Alba.
JAL: Wow you are good, how did you know?
Hunter Rider: Lucky guess.
BHK: It is a honor to meet you Mr. Rider.
Hunter Rider: Call me Hunter and this JAL my agent.
Kritish: Yea BlackHardKnight is my new partner, thank God is ugly as sin. Wont get snatch up by some coked up producer.
Hunter Rider: Look Morg gave me my career, I dont care how pissed off you are. Maybe you should have fought hard for the role.
Kritish: Why you sona .
BHK stands in front of Kritish.
BHK: We have a case to finish Hunter, see you around.
The two detective head out to their car.
Kritish: You have always been strange Rider.
Hunter Rider: At least you have not changed Krit.
J. Albas Lover: HR where have you been, babe.
Hunter Rider: Been shooting the breeze with my old cop buddy.
JAL: Oh right when you were a real cop. Anyways I just got you a starring role with guess who.
Hunter Rider: Jessica Alba.
JAL: Wow you are good, how did you know?
Hunter Rider: Lucky guess.
BHK: It is a honor to meet you Mr. Rider.
Hunter Rider: Call me Hunter and this JAL my agent.
Kritish: Yea BlackHardKnight is my new partner, thank God is ugly as sin. Wont get snatch up by some coked up producer.
Hunter Rider: Look Morg gave me my career, I dont care how pissed off you are. Maybe you should have fought hard for the role.
Kritish: Why you sona .
BHK stands in front of Kritish.
BHK: We have a case to finish Hunter, see you around.
The two detective head out to their car.
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good read so far.
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Did i just call Hunter a Babe? 
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oh okay i thought i was well you know.Hollywood talk
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oh okay i thought i was well you know.
Nah ur straight plus u won't get killed.
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Kewlness so i'm a big time hollywood person and i get TEH alba.Nah ur straight plus u won't get killed.
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Kewlness so i'm a big time hollywood person and i get TEH alba.
Yep your Hunter Rider's powerful agent.
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BHK V.O.- We reached Taiwarror 21 home about 4pm. From the information we got at HQ, he is a priest from the order of Hyperion Bay.
SFX: The Turbo Interceptor pulls up close to Taiwarrior21s home.
The detectives proceed to the front door.
Taiwarrior 21 comes from around the back garden.
Taiwarrior 21: Good afternoon gentleman, what can I do you for.
BHK: Detective Knight and Kritish from Hype Squad. I guess you have heard that Celldog has been killed.
Taiwarrior 21: No this a first for me. I have been very busy for Lord Hyperions arrival.
Kritish: Arrival!? Dude you got to be kidding me.
Taiwarrior 21: No it is true, he will come to sweep the earth clean.
BHK: Right we have logs from his show where you have called at least 50 times in the past months.
Tawarrior 21: He never understood us, he called us terrorist. Spread harmful threat against our members and our religion. Just because we dont believe the same Gods doesnt make us evil.
Kritish: And what about those attacks on the state building last year?
Taiwarrior 21: A few rogue members took the teaching to far and you condemn our whole group. We are peaceful but Celldog just would not let it go, he just keep bashing us. I called to get my point across
BHK: Ok we will be in touch if we have more questions.
Taiwarrior 21: May Lord Hyperion bless you.
The two detective head back to the car.
Kritish: Man that was the best load of crap
As the two walk back to the car a shot rings out missing Kritish and BHK.
BHK: Mother****er.
A black sedan screams out the neighborhood as the Turbo Interceptor roars into action. The Interceptor charges forward keep pace with the black sedan, thur the quiet neighborhood.
BHK: This is Adam 12 calling for back up on a black sedan with license place XLK-187. Requesting back up to pursuit
The Interceptor was in hot pursuit of the sedan as it was trying to reach the highway.
ETM: Adam 12 this car 54 on Mary Jane Lane follow your position.
BHK: Roger.
Kritish: This **** head is dead meat for shooting at me.
The sedan whizzed passed car 54 on Mary Jane Lane to the heart of the city downtown.
BHK: Did Jag replace the laser power pack on the Interceptor.
Kritish: Yea he did I got ya lets burn the tires off.
BHK sets up the laser power pack for use. The first shot misses hitting a tree.
Kritish: Watch it with that thing.
BHK: Drive like your not a mad man then.
The sedan makes a quick right on to the highway.
BHK: **** he is on the highway cant use the laser.
Kritish: Bull****.
The Interceptor hits the highway move pass the other slow moving cars.
Kritish: Go for the axel.
BHK: That is crazy, the car could flip and cause a major accident.
Kritish: Look BHK take out the ****ing car with the goddamn laser or I ram the ****er.
BHK: You wouldnt.
Kritish: Try me!
SFX: The Turbo Interceptor pulls up close to Taiwarrior21s home.
The detectives proceed to the front door.
Taiwarrior 21 comes from around the back garden.
Taiwarrior 21: Good afternoon gentleman, what can I do you for.
BHK: Detective Knight and Kritish from Hype Squad. I guess you have heard that Celldog has been killed.
Taiwarrior 21: No this a first for me. I have been very busy for Lord Hyperions arrival.
Kritish: Arrival!? Dude you got to be kidding me.
Taiwarrior 21: No it is true, he will come to sweep the earth clean.
BHK: Right we have logs from his show where you have called at least 50 times in the past months.
Tawarrior 21: He never understood us, he called us terrorist. Spread harmful threat against our members and our religion. Just because we dont believe the same Gods doesnt make us evil.
Kritish: And what about those attacks on the state building last year?
Taiwarrior 21: A few rogue members took the teaching to far and you condemn our whole group. We are peaceful but Celldog just would not let it go, he just keep bashing us. I called to get my point across
BHK: Ok we will be in touch if we have more questions.
Taiwarrior 21: May Lord Hyperion bless you.
The two detective head back to the car.
Kritish: Man that was the best load of crap
As the two walk back to the car a shot rings out missing Kritish and BHK.
BHK: Mother****er.
A black sedan screams out the neighborhood as the Turbo Interceptor roars into action. The Interceptor charges forward keep pace with the black sedan, thur the quiet neighborhood.
BHK: This is Adam 12 calling for back up on a black sedan with license place XLK-187. Requesting back up to pursuit
The Interceptor was in hot pursuit of the sedan as it was trying to reach the highway.
ETM: Adam 12 this car 54 on Mary Jane Lane follow your position.
BHK: Roger.
Kritish: This **** head is dead meat for shooting at me.
The sedan whizzed passed car 54 on Mary Jane Lane to the heart of the city downtown.
BHK: Did Jag replace the laser power pack on the Interceptor.
Kritish: Yea he did I got ya lets burn the tires off.
BHK sets up the laser power pack for use. The first shot misses hitting a tree.
Kritish: Watch it with that thing.
BHK: Drive like your not a mad man then.
The sedan makes a quick right on to the highway.
BHK: **** he is on the highway cant use the laser.
Kritish: Bull****.
The Interceptor hits the highway move pass the other slow moving cars.
Kritish: Go for the axel.
BHK: That is crazy, the car could flip and cause a major accident.
Kritish: Look BHK take out the ****ing car with the goddamn laser or I ram the ****er.
BHK: You wouldnt.
Kritish: Try me!
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