I dont know if this is the write place to put it, so mods, feel free to move. A while back, I had this cool Idea for a book I call Soul of the Demon. Its about 6 kids in modern day New York, who have demons inside them. The premise is that the Slayers, a fanatical religous group of Demon hunters, have created a biological bomb, killing every non-hosted Demon on the planet. Heres the first part, please dont rip me off! "Demons have no souls. Thats what I thought to myself as I looked steadily into the eyes of my would be killer. I could hear Vulpes talking to me, telling me to break his neck. But I couldn't. I just looked at his eyes, filled with fear, as he stared back into my errie red ones.I bit my lip, and shut Vulpes out of my thoughts. Then broke his neck." Just wanted to know what you guys think.