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  1. Orb Lord of Demons

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    I will be writing a fanfic of this. Its gonna be in script formant. Its gonna be about 8 Marvel heroes teaming up and fight villains and protect the world. Like a TV show its gonna have episodes but I call them chapters in this. The heroes are:

    Spider-man

    Iron Man

    Captin America

    Wolverine

    Hulk

    Daredevil

    Thor


    More heroes might come later on! I am working on the fanfic right now. I hope you like the heroes I picked! Stay tune for more info. For now here is a some info on the fanfic.

    -Heroes will join forces to stop a powerful force.
    -More Heroes might come
    -Captin America will lead the team
    -S.H.E.I.L.D will come in this
    -In the beginning nobody knows eachother.
    -UPDATE: Symbiote will be in this.
    -UPDATE #2:-The first chapter is about S.H.E.I.L.D, Spider-man and Captin America
    -Different universes will collide
    -Hints of DC heroes will be made
    -UPDATE #3:Ghost Rider will only make a cameo.

    Trailer #1:http://youtube.com/watch?v=JEPRsjN96Hg (Credit to venomscurse)

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    Chapter 1: A New Begining

    Peter (Narrating):
    My name is Peter Parker. My life changed a year ago. My best friend died saving me. Even thou I did and said bad things to him he still came and saved me. And I didn’t even do anything that matches this for him. Mary Jane, she still wanders on her room thinking everything over. Gwen hates me, after what I did to MJ at the jazz club. Ever since the symbiote came and took over me, my life turned upside down. People of New York still don’t know what to call me. A hero or a villain

    *cut to the Daily Bugle*

    J.Jameson
    Hey Parker! Wake up!

    *Peter realized he was in Jameson’s office*

    J.J
    Stop day dreaming and hand over the pictures!

    Peter
    Oh here!

    *Peter hands over some Spider-man pictures*

    J.J
    Hmmm…

    Peter
    Something wrong?

    J.J
    Nothing. 200?

    Peter
    300.

    J.J
    Done.

    J.J
    Hoffman!

    *Peter leaves his office only to meet up with Betty*

    Peter
    Hey, Betty.

    Betty:
    Hey. Any news on Eddie? He disappeared after getting fired.

    Peter:
    Nothing.

    Betty
    I’m sorry about Harry.

    Peter
    Its okay.

    *They both stare at each other for a wile, Peter leaves and goes outside, Peter looks up in the sky, All of a sudden Spider-man swings across the screen, he continues to swing and finally landed down on a rooftop, he takes off is mask *

    Peter (narrating) :
    What now? New York has not been the same. No bad guys running around. Nothing!

    *Peter quickly notices a bank alarm on, he puts his mask on again, he shoots a web line and slides down*

    Bank Robber #1:
    Hurry before that Spider guy comes!

    Bank Robber #2:
    Relax. Nobody has seen him over weeks. Why now? Besides if he does decides to show up, we got something ready.

    *Spider-man crawls around listening to every word spoken by the robbers*

    Bank Robber #3:
    For the last time put the money in the bag!

    *He points his gun on to the bank manager, Spider-man quickly shoots a web-line to his gun and pulls it away from him*

    Bank Robber #4:
    Its him!

    Spider-man
    Who did you expect? Ronald McDonald?

    *All of the bank robbers shoot, Spider-man jumps and uses his Spider-sense and his reflexes to dodge all the bullets while landing down*

    Spider-man
    Missed me!

    *His Spider-senses started, He looked back to see a robber trying to shoot him, he dodged it but after he jumped back he suddenly got knocked down by a man in blue armor holding a steel pipe*

    ???
    Good night.

    *Everything went blurry, he couldn’t see anything, he started to blackout, He woke up on a dark place, looking around for any intelligent life*

    Spider-man
    Hello!

    ???
    Over here.

    *He turned to only see Eddie who was wearing everything black*

    Eddie:
    Hey Parker.

    Spider-man:
    Eddie? But you are-

    Eddie
    Dead? I am. But I still live in your head, in your nightmares.


    *The symbiote started to cover bit by bit, finally he was transformed into Venom, He kneeled down and dash at him, Spider-man began to scream, suddenly
    he woke up on a strange lab, confused*

    Spider-man
    Where am I?

    ???
    Welcome

    *Suddenly he saw a man with dark brown hair, blue cloths and a eye patch*

    Nick Fury
    My name is Nick Fury. Head of S.H.E.I.L.D.

    Spider-man
    What? What is all this and what is S.H.E.I.L.D

    Nick Fury
    This is a counterterrorism and a intelligent agency. S.H.E.I.L.D stands for Strategic Hazard Intervention, Espionage and Logistics Directorate. Got all that? This is the Helicarrier. Remember the bank? We set it all up to get your attention. Nothing big happened.

    Spider-man
    Whoa.

    Nick Fury
    We take care of top secret business. We need your help.

    Spider-man
    My help?

    Nick Fury
    Yes. Do you remember a meteor that crashed that contained a substance called the symbiote?

    Spider-man
    How can I forget?

    Nick Fury
    Well you see there was more than that came from.

    Spider-man
    What!

    Nick Fury
    Not only that but almost every villain has escaped from every jails or prisons.

    Spider-man
    Oh boy.

    *Spider-man started to look around and see different things*

    Nick Fury
    We have a plan. We need a team. We only got two.

    Spider-man
    Two?

    Nick Fury
    Yeah. You and…

    *A door slides open and a figure is hidden in the shadows, the figure took a step to reveal it self*

    Nick Fury
    …Captain America.

    Spider-man
    Whoa again.

    Captain America
    Greetings Spider-man.

    Chapter 2:The Man Behind the Iron Mask

    Spider-man
    Hi. It’s a honor to meet you!

    Captain America
    Thank you. I heard many things about you. I know what you’re going through.

    Spider-man
    Its okay. I can handle it.

    Nick Fury
    Sorry for interrupting but we got business to settle.

    Captain America:
    Yeah. Let’s get going.

    Spider-man
    Right!

    Nick Fury
    So, from what I learned bad guys broke loose. They started to form a alliance. We had learned that Dr. Doom has something to do with this. They also stole high-tech weapons and devices. There is a storm coming and we are right in the eye of it.

    *Nick Fury turns on his computer and shows pictures of other heroes, Spider-man stares in amazement*

    Nick Fury
    Remember when Galactus attacked? This “Silver Surfer” character gave his life to protect the world. But unfortunately it did not work. Galactus is still out there. Something tells me he is part of this breakout as well.

    *Nick shows them pictures of Galactus and the attack*

    Nick Fury
    We send out some of our elites to investigate.

    Captain America
    Do you want us to find heroes and convince them to join? Am I correct?

    Nick Fury
    Yes. Our first is Ironman or Tony Stark. Take this!

    *He hands them some kind of device*

    When you found him, just teleport here using that.

    Spider-man
    Got it.

    *Cuts to Tony looking out of his window of his building and looking at the city.*

    Tony
    What has this city turned into? Why do they continue to cause fear and destruction? Well I will never find out.

    *A door behind him slides open and comes Tony’s secretary*

    Secretary:
    Mister Stark? Someone wants to meet you.

    Tony:
    Fine.

    *A man dressed in white comes out*

    ???
    My name is Mack Mercy.

    Tony:
    What business do you have with me?

    Mack
    Well I want to tell you something.

    Tony
    That is?

    Mack
    He’s coming back.

    Tony
    Who?

    Mack
    Don’t play dumb with me. There is a war coming Stark. You better be prepared. If your not then lets say the whole planet will fall.

    *Mack stands up and walks to the door, it slides open and then closes, Tony runs as the door opens again, Mack was not there anymore.

    Tony
    What the hell?

    * Cuts to the mountains where we find Dr. Doom on the top looking down to a gigantic hole on the ground.

    Dr.Doom
    Finally it starts!

    Chapter 3: Savage

    Peter(narrating)
    Some people live in fear, in darkness. In hope of a light that will overshadow the darkness. I failed to do so. Some live in great wealth some live in the streets. Struggle is all I see. Fear is what sometimes stops people to fulfilling their dreams.

    *Cuts to a rocky mountain *

    Wolverine
    Ah. Why did they send me to a place like this. Boring and a dump. There’s nothing here!

    *Cuts to a flashback*

    Wolverine
    You wanted to see me?

    *He quickly jumped down to sit*

    Wolverine
    Make it quick!

    Professor Xavier
    Well I have a job for you.

    Wolverine
    Why me?

    *He sighed*

    Xavier
    Its… well pretty secret. Has to do something with you. That’s all I know.

    Wolverine
    What do you mean that’s it? Who informed ya?

    Xavier
    I really don’t know.

    Wolverine
    Fine.

    *He rolled his eyes*

    *End of flashback*

    *he ran down to see a small cave*

    Wolverine
    Well what’s this?

    *He entered the dark cave, he notices writing on the bumpy wall*

    ???
    Hey! What are you doing here!

    Wolverine
    Who’s there?

    *The man stepped out of the shadows and revealed to have a silver gun, he seems to be wearing blue armor, he shot the gun and Wolverine slowing landed to the ground*

    ???
    Bye.

    *Cuts to Iron Man flying to the skies*

    Iron Man
    Only one man can help me now!

    *He boosted to full speed, suddenly he was attacked by two strange looking ships*

    Iron Man
    Woah!

    *He dodged all the lasers they shot, they chased him around everywhere, One of them launched a missile, quickly as it got near Iron Man turned went up a bit, slowed down, now that he was behind the missile, he quickly grabbed it and he flipped it, he threw it at one of the ships, destroying one of his wings*

    Iron Man
    All right!

    *But the other shot him down in the chest, damaging him*

    Iron Man
    Dammit!

    *It continued to chase him around, he turned back to hit the ship with his laser hands, but the ship won in dodging them.*

    Iron Man
    Ahhh! Come on!

    *It shot a missile and Iron Man got hit again but this time he started to fall*

    Iron Man
    Too weak...

    *He fell faded out, he continued to fall*


     
  2. Orb Lord of Demons

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    Bump. Anyone? A trailer for this will come soon.

    EDIT: First post now updated with poster.
    EDIT #2: Trailer as well.
     
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  4. Orb Lord of Demons

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    Thank you very much!
     
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    Nice job! but Ghost Rider? Meh...

    Other than that! Awesome trailer...great music too! Great job Venomcurse! Can't wait guys!
     
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    thanks Green Goblin 1964, greatly appreciate it
    and I can't wait to get enough updates to make a trailer 2
     
  7. Orb Lord of Demons

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    First chapter will be up this week.
     
  8. Orb Lord of Demons

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    Bump. Need more comments from more people.
     
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    What's the song called?
     
  10. Orb Lord of Demons

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    Not sure, gonna ask venomscurse.
     
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    Preview of Chap 1 is up.
     
  12. Orb Lord of Demons

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    Its unfinished. Also action is VERY little in this chap and the next. The Lines will be changed as this is rough. This is near end of the chap. Trust me when seen the final you will like it more.
     
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    That's very unlike Nick Fury.
     
  14. Orb Lord of Demons

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    Making him more strict guy. More of a general type. But its still rough work. so expect things change.
     
  15. Climperoonie A God Named Sparkles?

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    Meh. I don't like that depiction of Fury.
     
  16. Orb Lord of Demons

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    Do you guys want HYDRA group in this?
     
  17. Orb Lord of Demons

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    Bump. Hydra is in.
     
  18. Orb Lord of Demons

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    FIRST CHAPTER IS UP!

    Next Time: The Man Behind the Iron Mask.
     
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    awesome!! i love fury in this and spidey sounds cool too.
     
  20. Orb Lord of Demons

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    Thank you.
     
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    anytime pal. can't wait for the next one.
     
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  23. strikezone89 Smarks Chat CM PUNK :-/

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    kudos man
    kudos
     
  24. Orb Lord of Demons

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    First post updated with new poster. New Chap coming this Saturday and new trailer coming soon. Also Ghost Rider removed from heroes list but will still make a cameo.
     
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    new poster looks cool!
     

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