CaptainCraig
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The difference is, the shows you mention, with the exception of Seinfeld make you feel for the characters. They have heart. This one was void of that. Seinfeld didn't have heart but that was kinda the point.
But the biggest problem is, that the one liners just aren't that funny. You get the watered down stuff from the blog and a fex sexual innuendos.
I can agree with the first part. The show will need to work more on making us concerned about Ed building a relationship with his son. They tried to move that along by humanizing Ed a bit by getting the mattress. Recall as the the son is talking to his brother&wife in the kitchen that he just wanted a 'gesture'. Ed then even calls it 'just a gesture' in an exasperated manner as if to say "I try to show love&caring, why can't they see it when I do it?". Indicating perhaps that they both may think alike and be alike than they thought. At least that was my take away. Still, lots more of that to do though I agree.
With the exception of Seinfeld and maybe The Office of recent memory most comedies have ample one-liners. That's all the Twitter feed is. Some are going to be more funny than others. The trick will be to make the one liners connect more to the growing personalities of the characters. I think they are going to have at least 7-9 episodes to establish that before its S1 fate is known. Unlike say Lone Star and Outlaw which will likely be cancelled next week.