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My Spider-Man 4 plot

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5 years have passed and Peter Parker asks MJ for marrige. Later on, Mac Gargan has transformed into a deadly villain called Scorpion. As Spider-Man takes on this new foe, Scorpion brings Eddie Brock back to life with a machine using the power to bring anyone back alive. Eddie Brock finds a piece of symbiote and uses it and Becomes Venom once more! 2 more villains, chameleon and kraven join scorpion to defeat spidey. Sandman comes back to join spidey defeat this deadly force. Venom must join Spiderman to kill Kraven and Scorpion. The ultimate battle will chaos, descruction, and no hope. One man must face the ultimate battle within before he loses it himself.....
 
... uh... I see another Spider-Man 3 happening...

too much villains...

and plus this has no real story... and a machine that can bring anyone back to life... how? once a heart stops beating it's hard to bring them back to life, especially after 5 years!

i think you need to think this through some more...
 
5 years have passed and Peter Parker asks MJ for marrige. Later on, Mac Gargan has transformed into a deadly villain called Scorpion. As Spider-Man takes on this new foe, Scorpion brings Eddie Brock back to life with a machine using the power to bring anyone back alive. Eddie Brock finds a piece of symbiote and uses it and Becomes Venom once more! 2 more villains, chameleon and kraven join scorpion to defeat spidey. Sandman comes back to join spidey defeat this deadly force. Venom must join Spiderman to kill Kraven and Scorpion. The ultimate battle will chaos, descruction, and no hope. One man must face the ultimate battle within before he loses it himself.....
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what the hell? scorpion brings eddie to life and then all of a sudden he has to team up with spiderman?
 
5 years have passed and Peter Parker asks MJ for marrige. Later on, Mac Gargan has transformed into a deadly villain called Scorpion. As Spider-Man takes on this new foe, Scorpion brings Eddie Brock back to life with a machine using the power to bring anyone back alive. Eddie Brock finds a piece of symbiote and uses it and Becomes Venom once more! 2 more villains, chameleon and kraven join scorpion to defeat spidey. Sandman comes back to join spidey defeat this deadly force. Venom must join Spiderman to kill Kraven and Scorpion. The ultimate battle will chaos, descruction, and no hope. One man must face the ultimate battle within before he loses it himself.....

Pulitzer anyone?
 
Your idea is interesting, but maybe scorpion would just be the main villain with his machine who can restore the dead, maybe he builds it to bring back a love one,

Peter will want to restore Uncle Ben, but he must make a choice stop scorpion and loose his chance to bring back uncle ben, or give him up to stop the greater evil

IDK sorry to rework your plot, just my idea
 
A different plot I made:

5 years have passed and Peter is having nightmares about the people he faced throughout his years. Later, as he visits dr conners, there was a accident and dr conners becomes the LIZARD! Even worse, the symbiote escapes from dr conners lab and combines with spider-man and Symbiote Spider-Man is back! He is getting even angreier than ever, stronger, faster, even his powers have never been greater the last time he consumed it. As Peter gets use the it, he uses it to defeat Lizard and his strange lizard family who have lived in the sewers for years. Spiderman faces a new enemy scorpion, who has super powers, far greater than symbiote spiderman. Eddie Brock (who has somehow survived but symbiote gone) is angreier than ever and finds a way to get the suit back. Later, Spidermans feed of rage and anger is growing, and so is the symbiote! He finaly uses a sonicgun to remove it. Eddie Brock gets the suit back and has a far greater feed of rage than symbiote spiderman! He teams up with scorpion to destroy spidey. The battle has only begun...
 
Yea.....not much better, sorry :dry:

Heres what you do, just look at the plot of the movies and compare it to your plots, then you'll see why its bad. These movies are running on themes, supporting cast, and Peters life, as well as the villains of course. Your basically just throwing in several villains for a meaningless plot.
 
come up with Peter's problem first, then the villains, revolving around Peter's problem. come up with a good theme... do not add villains that have nothing to do with the plot.

also try to keep villains under 3... like 1 or 2 villains per movie... also keep is realistic... as realistic as Spidey can be. ;)
 
My PLOT​


Spider-man meets Kingpin :"Hello, How r u? Bye!" Then he discovers that Doc Ock is alive and now he's a part of Sinister Six.... "My God" thinks Spider-man.
At the end of this "4 hours" film, everyone dies even MJ with Kingpin (in one bed) and i become a new spider-man!!! Hoorah!!!​
 
My PLOT​


Spider-man meets Kingpin :"Hello, How r u? Bye!" Then he discovers that Doc Ock is alive and now he's a part of Sinister Six.... "My God" thinks Spider-man.
At the end of this "4 hours" film, everyone dies even MJ with Kingpin (in one bed) and i become a new spider-man!!! Hoorah!!!​

BRAVO!!!!
 
My PLOT​


Spider-man meets Kingpin :"Hello, How r u? Bye!" Then he discovers that Doc Ock is alive and now he's a part of Sinister Six.... "My God" thinks Spider-man.

At the end of this "4 hours" film, everyone dies even MJ with Kingpin (in one bed) and i become a new spider-man!!! Hoorah!!!​
OMG i NEED to see this scene on film!
 
5 years have passed and Peter Parker asks MJ for marrige. Later on, Mac Gargan has transformed into a deadly villain called Scorpion. As Spider-Man takes on this new foe, Scorpion brings Eddie Brock back to life with a machine using the power to bring anyone back alive. Eddie Brock finds a piece of symbiote and uses it and Becomes Venom once more! 2 more villains, chameleon and kraven join scorpion to defeat spidey. Sandman comes back to join spidey defeat this deadly force. Venom must join Spiderman to kill Kraven and Scorpion. The ultimate battle will chaos, descruction, and no hope. One man must face the ultimate battle within before he loses it himself.....
that was really crappy dude really crappy
 

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