Sequels new trilogy written by me if ur intrested

['N']

Hey guys I just finished my script for a new x-men trigology starting where X-3 ended.

X-4: Apocalypse Now

Major players
are:

(In order of importance to story)

X-men:
highlight below for big spoiler:
Scott
Angel
Gambit
Colossus
Wolverine
Rouge(re-powered, and you'll see how)
Nightcrawler
Storm
Kitty
minor:
beast-cameo
iceman-kinda sits out for most of the script, you'll see why...

(more pivotal to the part two and three)
Cable
X-man
Bishop
I'm doing an all new take on these characters

Villains:
(in order of importance to the story)
Mr. Sinsiter
Forge
Psylocke
Wild Child
minor:
cameos:
Pyro
juggernaut
multiple man
Avalanche

Apocalypse will not appear untill pt. 2, along with Banshee, Mimic, Havok, and Emma Frost

I'm very excited about this. pt 2 is almost done and pt 3 is already outlined. If anyone here wants a copy of the completed script just pm me ur e-mail and ill send it as an attachment.


So heres a summary

Picking up the pieces after X-Men 3:The Last Stand, our heroes find themselves in, yet another earth-saving mission. After taking down the remaining members of The Brotherhood, a tragic death of an old friend sends one X-Men to a fatal accident. A letter recieved by Storm causes her to panic, so Wolverine travells to Alakli Lake to meet the letter writer. Who he meets sends shock through the enitre team. A new enemy emerges known as Sinsiter, a mutant who believes an ancient mutant named Apocalypse is still alive, and if found will save the world. Storm's knowledge of these happenings makes her call an old teammate, whom has a history with Sinister. This old teammate calls himself Gambit. What he unveils involving the new enemy will change the X-Men forever. This is a story of betrayl,murder, mystery and enough action and drama to tickle everyone's fancy.

X4: Apocalypse Now
by: 'N'



*please don't steal any of my orignal ideas if you ask to read the script*

Thanks!

 

[ampersand]

You lost me at Rouge and then I totally stopped reading at Pshylocke.

 

['N']

thats to bad, y reply to say that?

 

[ampersand]

Rouge is a color and Pshylocke just makes you sound like Sean Connery.

 

['N']

ok...did i spell rouge wrong?

 

[ampersand]

It's Rogue and Psylocke.

 

['N']

oh, i have psylocke spelled right, but i feel stupid about rogue, but whatever u cant judge my ability to write by a spelling mistake

 

[L0ngsh0t]

well it is the presentation that counts, so how do you expect someone to take your work seriously if you don't take it serious enough to spell the words correctly, i haven't read it, and considering X3 is a week old and you already have a trilogy written i think it is safe to say it is rushed

but considering you have about a .03 percent chance of ever getting the X4 job (don't forget everyone else on these boards thinks they can write to, also don't throw out the actual screen writers who will probobly be getting the job) it honestly ends up not really mattering if you rushed it or not

 

[GoHF]

"Picking up the pieces after X-Men 3:The Last Stand, our heroes find themselves in yet another earth-saving mission. After taking down the remaining members of The Brotherhood, a tragic death of an old friend sends one X-Men to a fatal accident. A letter recieved by Storm causes her to panic, so Wolverine travels to Alkali Lake to meet the letter writer. Who he meets there sends shock through the entire team. A new enemy emerges, known as Sinister, a mutant who believes an ancient mutant named Apocalypse is still alive and, if found, will save the world. Storm's knowledge of these happenings makes her call an old teammate, who has a history with Sinister. This old teammate calls himself Gambit. What he unveils, involving the new enemy, will change the X-Men forever. This is a story of betrayal, murder, mystery and enough action and drama to tickle everyone's fancy."

There, fixed your synopsis (at least as far as spelling and commas are concerned). It's poorly written, regardless of your grammatical accuracy. Besides, I don't want a movie to tickle everyone's fancy, just mine... and unless you make a city get wiped out from the map in a sequence that takes at least 5 minutes, have flying mutants fighting each while airborne by their own powers and/or show common-citizen mutants hunted on the streets by human mobs and sentinels, the movie won't tickle my specific fancy ;P

Bring teh Sh'iar cruisers, I wanna see Prof-X get it on with a hot Lilandra.

 

[ampersand]

oh, i have psylocke spelled right, but i feel stupid about rogue, but whatever u cant judge my ability to write by a spelling mistake

Dude, you edited psylocke's name after I said it. Don't try to pull bull like that.

 

[phillip phonix]

hi send my your story 'N' at [email protected] thanks

 

['N']

thanks for everyones comments, I have only finished pt. 1, and have completed part of pt. 2. I do understand what you mean by the presentation and I can understand what you mean. I noticed the pyslocke spelling mistakes right after I posted it and then I fixed it, but rogue was spelled wrong, and I didn't relize, sorry. Also, the way I type in forums isn't the way I type a script, thanks.

 

[Remy LeBeau X3]

The man is trying to share ideas of a script he wrote. Regardless if it was rushed or the fact that he made a spelling error does not hinder his ability to express his ideas. You can simply correct his mistakes, but only in a respectable manor. Quit trying to sound or act like your an english major by correcting his work. I highly doubt any of you have never made a spelling error. You know sometimes when you type you might hit one key before the other. I know that as some of you read this and are about to "flame" me, as you type I know you're hitting the backspace because you accidentally mispelled a word. It's okay to make errors. Especially a spelling one. "N" isn't a director nor author so a spelling mistake on his part is highly unpunishable. this is a message board, not a "win a job as an X-4 director contest entry"

So "N" don't be discouraged.

 

['N']

thanks remy i appreciate that, there just upset that they dont make as much money as movie writters(which i never claimed to be) and have to live with there parents, i write becuase im a fan and it's fun