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Post Your Poetry!

Aha! Well, you certainly have the right idea to go about it. That's exactly how I wish to do it. And at college, i'll have so much free time to just read, relax and write. It's going to be massive!

I'm studying English Language at University. Which I'm sort of half-regretting as the time goes on. Really I feel I should be doing combined English Language/Literature. But, hey. I'm content enough to go with it. It's last minute nerves, I'll see how the first few months go. And I can always go back and do a Masters in English Literature, when I can. There's a writing society there, I'll learn a lot from that. :up:

I've got a lot of poems I've written during the past year. The inspiration has pretty much fizzled. heh.

Hold on. I'll dig into the ol' archives. :cwink:

And, you too! Don't leave me hanging.
 
I played Russian Roulette with the devil


Have you ever played games with the devil?
Sold your soul for a part of hell?
Have you ever rung the death bell?
Can I tell you what I'm thinking?
Will you promise you won't scream?
Will you promise you won't cry?

I played Russian Roulette with the devil,
A shuffle of a deck, a shuffle of a gun,
He smiled a yellowing gimace,
A forked tongue slither lick of his lips,
Feeling the burning of his breath down the hairs of my neck,
A creeping, dirty eye flash flutter,
Moving his eyes from my head to the floor.

Beckoned me with his dirty, black fingernails
Summoned me to his firey domain,
I laid my cards on the table,
He laid down his.

Plastered on his face was a manic grin,
As he spun the revolver to his head,
Pulled the trigger- lying face down...dead.

Lazarus rose from his grave and sat behind me,
Flesh was gone- a bony frame remained,
'The king is dead...' he slowly said.

Gabriel sat behind him- white wings torn and bloody
'The horrors i've seen- you can never imagine..'
Eve draped her arms around his shoulders,
Her hand holding an apple core.

I closed my eyes and pictured a windy heath,
Newly sprung lilly petals flew through the airy skies,
A hidden sea lay beyond the sycamore tree,
A great deep mesmerising cooling sea,
In this azure blue sea,
Regret was dead and gone.

Jesus was standing by his camel,
He handed me a small cross,
His blue eyes showed me a lasting light,
A warming hand healed my scars,
He climbed onto his camel and rode into the drowsy sunlight.

I opened my eyes and realised what I'd been fighting for.
 
I've got a lot of poems I've written during the past year. The inspiration has pretty much fizzled. heh.

Hold on. I'll dig into the ol' archives. :cwink:

And, you too! Don't leave me hanging.

I wouldn't mind reading your material; I enjoy other people's work sometimes.

Personally though, if I highly regard a piece or work that I've composed, it never is shown to anyone. I write all my stuff, and hand write the copies. Yep, it's tedious, but people love to become 'inspired' by way of someone else's hard work. . . so, you know how it is. I'd rather burn it than show my trick before it's ready.

Anything on here is just for kicks. I might put a short that I no longer prefer in the fan forum one day, but until then, it's not a big deal. . . post your poetry!:yay:
 
Here is a Haiku

I like poems so
I decided to bump this
thread up a notch Kay?
 
trying to steal poems Arachnid???:oldrazz:



my poetry is copywrighted:word: :woot:
 
Kobe sucks my balls
cries all down the halls

i dont have team
i cant complete my dream
trade me wait
keep me too late
i hate our gm mitch
cause i'm a little b**ch:cmad: :woot:
 
Be Happy

You act like a *****,
And you dress like one, too.
If I didn’t know better,
I’d probably hate you.
But, behind your cruel façade,
Lies a heart of gold.
I just want you to be happy,
Pretending to hate you is getting old.
 
Kobe sucks my balls
cries all down the halls

i dont have team
i cant complete my dream
trade me wait
keep me too late
i hate our gm mitch
cause i'm a little b**ch:cmad: :woot:

Not bad...Not bad at all. A little self depricating at the end, but still cool.

Be Happy

You act like a *****,
And you dress like one, too.
If I didn’t know better,
I’d probably hate you.
But, behind your cruel façade,
Lies a heart of gold.
I just want you to be happy,
Pretending to hate you is getting old.

There isn't an ounce of happiness in that thing. Why is it called be happy? Still goog though.
 
Not bad...Not bad at all. A little self depricating at the end, but still cool.



There isn't an ounce of happiness in that thing. Why is it called be happy? Still goog though.
Thank you, it's called "be happy" because I really want this person to know that I only want their happiness dispite what happened between us. It's the point of the poem.
 
Honestly, poetry is like manure; some people take it, some people discard it, and some people use it for fertilizer to turn objects into something valuable. Once you see past the bs, you get the reward.

I agree. I truly enjoy reading poetry and I love this thread. Thank you.
 
I found this thread through the search because I have some poetry that I wanted to share with everyone. When I write it's usually because something is on my mind, on heart, or something that needs to be let out in a creative fashion.

I used to write poetry based off of books, video games, and movies. Now my poetry is based off of real events that I've experienced, read about, or thought about in general.

The first poem is a dedication to my late grandmother who passed away. While listening to Tool's "10,000 Days", which is dedicated to Maynard James Keenan's mother Judith the lyrics really spoke to me and it made me think about my grandmother. So I wrote the poem as a dedication to her and even included lyrics from Tool's song for that extra sincere emotion. Every word that I wrote down is from the heart, mind, and soul.

Ethel written by Isaiah

*Except 10,000 Days(Wings For Marie PT 1 lyrics written by Maynard James Keenan*(Excerpt) )**

You were an inspiration for the love you showed
I always wondered how you could show such kindness
To those who seem to show little care for you
She never strayed, betrayed, or felt the need to lie

Yet you were made to suffer in the most undeserving way

You were an inspiration for the kindness you displayed
As someone felt the need to betray you
You would still forgave them while trying to understand them at the same time
It's not like you used them or abused them
The ones you helped tried to weaken and paralyze you
None of which could hold a candle to you

All the time I wonder why you passed on
Then there are those who aren't deserving of the life they have
As they choose to use the innocent, lie, stray, and betray
Yet you felt the embrace of loneliness and longed for the feeling of happiness

It's not as though you were asking for eternal material wealth or to ignore anyone else's desires

You were a mother, a wife, and an angel all combined into one it seemed
They say there is no such thing as perfection
While in my eyes you were as close to flawless as anyone in life

One sullen night you said you'd be happy to just see the age of seventy
With a tear falling from your eye and the feeling of loneliness embracing
Despite the pain you never strayed from your faith nor from the path of righteousness
And refused to wish ill desires on those who drove the spear in your back

You would not want anyone living with anger and hatred in their hearts
Feeling the timeless essence of sadness and despair
Through all the losses within your soul you gave a smile regardless of the circumstances
You're the only one who can stand before the Maker and say you lived true to your life and beliefs
You can stand before the gates and receive the wings you earned.

Ethel, you experienced many pains in your life by those who constantly bragged about they had
Still you never felt the need to strike back in bitterness
The realm you entered there is tears, sadness, or loneliness
Ignorant entities gathered around offering their sympathies
While in their hearts they only desired what you possessed

When you would show people the kindness you had
They would react to you with ungratefulness and greed
Showing you their backs as if you weren't a human being that had feelings
And during the aftermath you would try to figure out how one could be cruel
If one were to ask about you, I would say:

"She never told a lie,
... well might have told a lie,
But never lived one."*

"Ignorant siblings in the congregation
Gather around spewing sympathy,
Spare me.
None of them can even hold a candle up to you.
Blinded by choice, these hypocrites won't see."**

What will they say when they come face to face with you?
How will they react to when they see the face of true love?
One day they'll have to answer to the one they hurt in the most shameless way
I used to hope that the day for them would be instant
Then I realized that you wouldn't hold that grudge in your heart

If all of humanity in the world displayed the same amount of dignity that you did
The world itself would be a much better place
You held your head high despite the numerous obstacles
While shining your light that was given to you
As it illuminated every passage of darkness that spanned for indicated centuries

Ethel, you earned the wings you lived for
You held your cross close to your heart never living a lie or taking a life
Maintaining true to the faith you aligned yourself with
Keeping honesty with those close to you

When the soul left your body and you stood before the Maker
You could look him in straight in the eye
As He reviewed your life and asked you questions
You could say with honesty that you never lived a lie, never took a life, nor strayed from the path
Ethel Meeks, the living personification of angelic love and kindness

In the end you're on solid ground
Already stood before the Maker
Entering into the eternal shining light as a loyal and faithful servant
Ethel Meeks the suffering and loneliness you felt of this life is no more
You're home in the arms of absolute comfort and respite
You have received the wings you earned
 
And here's the second one that I've been working on. It's still a work in progress at the moment.

The Leeches written by Isaiah

The outsiders stood against the wall alone
Watching the world pass them by
They sat in a corner while in a cold room in the fetal position
Feeling that time itself would slow down for their excuses
Now all that is left is the shell of what they used to

Leeches of excuses drained all they could've been
Taking natural gifts and letting them wither away

Leeches come in many shapes and sizes
Some are in the form of men
While others are the mental insects that plague the minds of the weak

The angels watched from above looking down on their fallen loves
What was the point of creating these beings?
If all they're going to do is become hollow shells?
In the end they're confused, amused, and sad at the same time
For this is the lifetime they chose for themselves
Not knowing that the past is one that can't be relived

Leeches come in many shapes and sizes
Some are in the form of men and children
While others are the mental insects that plague the minds of the weak
How can we move on if we're bounded by the chains of the past?
Focusing on the little things that aren't of great importance in the first place

For so many years we spent valuable time arguing about who is right and wrong
What God is the right God to worship?
What life is the right way to live?
Delusions of which no answer has been found for these questions

Blood has been spilled in the name of religion
More lives have been ended in the name of the Father
And lives have been ended due to others ignorance and stupidity

We all have been infected by the Leeches
So often trying to deny the ugliness that has dwelled within us or does dwell within
Learn to accept the imperfection of yourself and of others
Only then will one learn the possibility of becoming one with the void of peace

Towers have fallen and thousands passed on
Soldiers went to the desert to fight a war
And all the while we as a human race haven't evolved for the better
None of us are angels, demons, or perfect
No one is better than the other
All have made choices for the better and for the worse
Just remember that when it comes to the answers of life no one is right or wrong

It's all just a perception from someone else's mouth and mind

Leeches come in many forms
Some in the form of those you are familiar with
While others come in ways that no one would expect
 
The colorfully dressed stranger
Strolls down the street
Offers me candy and a ride home
I accept both offers


A ball of yarn with a caramel core
Decomposing zombies with a hunger for genitalia
Look into my soul and see the urinal
Wash your hands and please do flush


His rainbow colored hair
His gentleman like smile
His warm embrace
I couldn’t help but accept


Break your shins and fall on your knees
Shatter your bones and shout your pain
No one will help you as you crawl to your desk
Get yourself a Big Mac and wipe away your tears


A tiny little German car
Stained with blood
And the stench of raccoon
I’ll admit that was creepy


Lindsay Lohan was in the Parent Trap remake
She doesn’t have a twin in reality
Ashley Olsen does, but no one likes Mary-Kate
Bananas in Pajamas raped the minds of children


He took a wrong turn
And we left the state
A cheap motel
I missed the new episode of The Doodlebops


Travel through time and stop the hearts
The zombies will live on and defy you
Use the yarn to ward them off
Trap them in the urine hole


“I want to go home”
“No”
“But you’re out of candy”
He hit me in his drunken rage


Greying hair leaving you crippled
Argyle sweaters give you a recharge
Fat camo boy is attacking the city
How do you stop that which you cannot see?


I wouldn’t stop crying
The bleeding wouldn’t cease
Chemistry is hard
It’s raining and he’s bathing right now


Yoshi’s tongue wraps around you
Slightly disgusted, slightly aroused
Nuclear fission won’t save you now
Your friend’s appendix explodes to save lives


I hope the police come
To take this bad man away
Although he was initially nice
We’re out of jelly beans

I wrote this last year and read it to my class. While everyone was going "Oh my god, why is he reading this?" my teacher was laughing. Then he read it himself and asked if there was a theme of child abuse laced through it. Of course he was right, but I said he was wrong. He believed me.
 
"Fat camo boy is attacking the city
How do you stop that which you cannot see?"

LOL. I might just have to sig that. That struck me as funny for some reason.
 
Fat Camo Boy is the name me and my friends gave this kid at our school. He's fat and wears the same camo jacket everyday. And then either camo pants or basketball shorts.
 
here's a classic of mine... wrote it back in 2005

I call it, "untitled"

Kipobe sucks balls
Kypade rocks his puny ass
Refrigerator
 
I found this thread through the search because I have some poetry that I wanted to share with everyone. When I write it's usually because something is on my mind, on heart, or something that needs to be let out in a creative fashion.

I used to write poetry based off of books, video games, and movies. Now my poetry is based off of real events that I've experienced, read about, or thought about in general.

The first poem is a dedication to my late grandmother who passed away. While listening to Tool's "10,000 Days", which is dedicated to Maynard James Keenan's mother Judith the lyrics really spoke to me and it made me think about my grandmother. So I wrote the poem as a dedication to her and even included lyrics from Tool's song for that extra sincere emotion. Every word that I wrote down is from the heart, mind, and soul.

Ethel written by Isaiah

*Except 10,000 Days(Wings For Marie PT 1 lyrics written by Maynard James Keenan*(Excerpt) )**

You were an inspiration for the love you showed
I always wondered how you could show such kindness
To those who seem to show little care for you
She never strayed, betrayed, or felt the need to lie

Yet you were made to suffer in the most undeserving way

You were an inspiration for the kindness you displayed
As someone felt the need to betray you
You would still forgave them while trying to understand them at the same time
It's not like you used them or abused them
The ones you helped tried to weaken and paralyze you
None of which could hold a candle to you

All the time I wonder why you passed on
Then there are those who aren't deserving of the life they have
As they choose to use the innocent, lie, stray, and betray
Yet you felt the embrace of loneliness and longed for the feeling of happiness

It's not as though you were asking for eternal material wealth or to ignore anyone else's desires

You were a mother, a wife, and an angel all combined into one it seemed
They say there is no such thing as perfection
While in my eyes you were as close to flawless as anyone in life

One sullen night you said you'd be happy to just see the age of seventy
With a tear falling from your eye and the feeling of loneliness embracing
Despite the pain you never strayed from your faith nor from the path of righteousness
And refused to wish ill desires on those who drove the spear in your back

You would not want anyone living with anger and hatred in their hearts
Feeling the timeless essence of sadness and despair
Through all the losses within your soul you gave a smile regardless of the circumstances
You're the only one who can stand before the Maker and say you lived true to your life and beliefs
You can stand before the gates and receive the wings you earned.

Ethel, you experienced many pains in your life by those who constantly bragged about they had
Still you never felt the need to strike back in bitterness
The realm you entered there is tears, sadness, or loneliness
Ignorant entities gathered around offering their sympathies
While in their hearts they only desired what you possessed

When you would show people the kindness you had
They would react to you with ungratefulness and greed
Showing you their backs as if you weren't a human being that had feelings
And during the aftermath you would try to figure out how one could be cruel
If one were to ask about you, I would say:

"She never told a lie,
... well might have told a lie,
But never lived one."*

"Ignorant siblings in the congregation
Gather around spewing sympathy,
Spare me.
None of them can even hold a candle up to you.
Blinded by choice, these hypocrites won't see."**

What will they say when they come face to face with you?
How will they react to when they see the face of true love?
One day they'll have to answer to the one they hurt in the most shameless way
I used to hope that the day for them would be instant
Then I realized that you wouldn't hold that grudge in your heart

If all of humanity in the world displayed the same amount of dignity that you did
The world itself would be a much better place
You held your head high despite the numerous obstacles
While shining your light that was given to you
As it illuminated every passage of darkness that spanned for indicated centuries

Ethel, you earned the wings you lived for
You held your cross close to your heart never living a lie or taking a life
Maintaining true to the faith you aligned yourself with
Keeping honesty with those close to you

When the soul left your body and you stood before the Maker
You could look him in straight in the eye
As He reviewed your life and asked you questions
You could say with honesty that you never lived a lie, never took a life, nor strayed from the path
Ethel Meeks, the living personification of angelic love and kindness

In the end you're on solid ground
Already stood before the Maker
Entering into the eternal shining light as a loyal and faithful servant
Ethel Meeks the suffering and loneliness you felt of this life is no more
You're home in the arms of absolute comfort and respite
You have received the wings you earned


This is a beautiful tribute to your Grandmother. It is very touching.
 
Figured I would give it a try.

Moments In Time

There are moments when I
am without burden.
Then A bill collector calls.

I have had moments when a woman
has taken my breath away, & I can
hardly speak. But she informs me
she is out of reach.

There are moments where I feel just
like a kid again. Some one tells me to
grow the **** up.

I had moments where I
feel at my lowest…..
 
Writing? Yep, I've been seriously pursuing it for a bit of time now; poetry. . . not so much. Honestly, I hate the stuff, but some of my female friends love it, so I kind of do as well.

Look, you'd be amazed to see what a beautiful young woman is willing to do if you write some clever proposition on a piece of paper, fold it into an origami object (spike ico and the crane are my personal favs), and put, 'for your eyes only' on top.

That sums up my love for poetry. I like the stories though; it makes the generic bore [imho] of poetry seem less. . .horrible.

*makes notes for future reference* :o

Here's a more recent one I did--it is based on a real instance, so if you say it sucks, please say so constructively.

The Front Yard

When I was only a small child,
My mom would always say,
"You and your friend can play
In the house and in the back,
But never, ever, go play in the front yard."

I could never understand why.
It's all hard soil with grass growing from it,
The only difference is where they are,
Why can't I play in the front yard?
"It's just too dangerous," she said,
And then I'd go next door to play.

One day I was with Ronny at his house,
Even though Mom said never to go there,
Playing Power Rangers in his back yard,
Bumping and crashing into my enemies
The Puddy Fighters and Lord Zed and rogue toy trucks.

"Come on, man, let's play in the front yard," Ronny said.
Nah, I'm cool here.
"We'll have more room for the Zord battle!"
We shouldn't go in the front yard.
"Why not?"
'Cause...'cause--
"'Cause what?"
'Cause...my mom said it was dangerous.
He laughed and snorted, while slapping me on the back.
"Come on, man, nothing can go wrong in the front yard.
My older brother sits on the porch all the time and he'll protect us.
I've seen him and his friends and they're just like the Power Rangers,
Fighting together against other Power Rangers.
They're clothes are...kinda different, and they don't know karate, but they're so cool, man.
You have nothing to worry about."

We go into the Front Yard,
Wide open space, nothing but the fence keeping the outside world away.
We imagine that we're thousands of feet tall,
Me, five robot dinosaurs combined into a single fighting force,
Him, a gruesome monster with tentacles and claws.
We grapple and fight, imagining the shots of spark whenever we connect.

Mom jumps out of the house and screams out my name,
"Dinner's ready! Get the he--get off that front yard!"
I groaned, inches away from slaying my enemy, and leaped over the fence.
I stopped at the curb, looked to my left and my right and crossed the street,
Walking faster when I saw the rusty convertible turn the corner.

I didn't really hear it, but felt it:
A thunderous pop, like a firecracker.
Another pop.
And another.
And another.
Mom grabbed me and dragged me away.
I looked to see it was aimed for Ronny's house.
Mom pushes me through the door before I can see.

Mom nearly shoved her spaghetti into my mouth to get me to eat,
Trying to distract me from the policemen all over the streets.
Distract me from the screaming mother.
Distract me from the small body put into a gray bag.

The next day, my teacher told the class that Ronny was dead.
She couldn't explain how.
Whether it was to keep us innocent
Or because she didn't want to think of it herself,
I still don't know.

After school, I waited for Mom to pick me up,
And when she pulled up and I jumped into her Jeep,
I looked into her tired, bloodshot eyes and ask,
"Why? Why did Ronny die?"
Mom, deciding it would hurt more to lie,
Told me the truth,
That Ronny's brother wasn't a Power Ranger, but something else,
And that was why I should have never been there.

She drove all the way home and walked inside and started crying,
For the child that died and her child that lived,
And I finally understood the difference
Between the back yard and the Front Yard.
 
Wolf

Ruby blood spilling on the snow
Horrified screams pierce the air
The moon ignites with an eerie glow
The victim’s tremble she doesn’t care
The yellow eyes sear inside
The scowling teeth rip the flesh
The poor victims run and hide
"Let them run it keeps them fresh"
The gnarled claws shred the skin
All these people will die
The creatures fowl and evil grin
The fear strikes them how and why
Terror in this Childs eyes
It has never seen its mother kill
Her kindness appears to be all lies
He doesn’t want to stay so still
He wants to so run far way
Away from all the screams
He just doesn’t want to stay
He watches as her eyes gleam
She rips and tears until she’s done
And then she runs and bounds
"And what have u learnt today my son"
He replies "momma I don’t like those sounds"
"You never will my baby boy
You will have to do this to one day
And don’t worry this is not something I enjoy
But we have to survive so lets just ... play"
He shook his head and ran away
His fearsome mother started to chase
"Fine my son you’ll learn another day"
And they wandered home through this horrific space

and BTW the Kobe poem rules
 

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