The Son Of Venom

[venom628]

The son of venom: part one


I was walking around the village doing nothing. I sat down on a bench putting on a bored face. Sigh. nothing good ever happens around Selsey! I said to myself. what if... I was a hero? that would be really fun! I said. Suddenly I saw a comet speeding this way. I gasped in amazment. It was heading this way. I jumped left and the comet crashed right onto the ground. Next a black goo came outside and looked at me. It started to chase me. I ran i horror as the black goo chased me. It got grab hold of my leg and I tripped. It started to take me over. I was frightend. I screamed AAAAAAAAaaa I got up. I looked at myself. I had a bat symbol on me and I had claws. I was so frightend that I shouted: AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH! Someone looked at me. I looked at them back. I'll eat you up! I growled! He look at my blankly. Uhhhh... ok... He said. I got angry. I started to eat him. Aaaaaaaaah! I was eaten. I suddenly gasped. This suit... the power... its awesome. From now on I shall be called... VENOMOUS!

end of part 1.

 

[Bat Attack]

What?

 

[Spidey]

Yeah, what?

 

[venom628]

What?

Its a story i made up, like it?

 

[Immortalfire]

I'm not sure, but I take this to be some kind of story? If that's the case, you should really post it in Fan Fiction.

 

[M.E.H.Z.E.B]

I'm not sure, but I take this to be some kind of story? If that's the case, you should really post it in Fan Fiction.

Agreed.

Closing.

 

[venom628]

I'm not sure, but I take this to be some kind of story? If that's the case, you should really post it in Fan Fiction.

Blast it sorry Immortall fire but where is that thread?

 

[venom628]

Agreed.

Closing.

It aint closed yet...

 

[Immortalfire]

Fan Fiction forum, right here.. http://www.superherohype.com/forums/forumdisplay.php?f=36

 

[venom628]

...

What you dont like it?

Thats just cruel....

 

[venom628]

The son of venom: part one


I was walking around the village doing nothing. I sat down on a bench putting on a bored face. Sigh. nothing good ever happens around Selsey! I said to myself. what if... I was a hero? that would be really fun! I said. Suddenly I saw a comet speeding this way. I gasped in amazment. It was heading this way. I jumped left and the comet crashed right onto the ground. Next a black goo came outside and looked at me. It started to chase me. I ran i horror as the black goo chased me. It got grab hold of my leg and I tripped. It started to take me over. I was frightend. I screamed AAAAAAAAaaa I got up. I looked at myself. I had a bat symbol on me and I had claws. I was so frightend that I shouted: AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH! Someone looked at me. I looked at them back. I'll eat you up! I growled! He look at my blankly. Uhhhh... ok... He said. I got angry. I started to eat him. Aaaaaaaaah! I was eaten. I suddenly gasped. This suit... the power... its awesome. From now on I shall be called... VENOMOUS!

end of part 1.

 

[venom628]

Damn computer doing the same story i meant to COPY NOT PASTE!

 

[Julez]

haha in before the lock

 

[J.Jonah Jameson]

 

[BeserkerHilf]

well i think it sucks

 

[Julez]

When do we get a continuation?

 

[Toxin]

Either your a troll (if so, thumbs up for the lulz) or need to stay in school. My 5-year old brother has a better grasp of capitalization, quotation marks, and punctuation than you.

Also, you DO realize that "the son of Venom" is already a title given to Carnage, right?

And "Venomous" is an adjective, not a noun.

 

[Spider-Man Luvr28]

Lol. Well...The title caught my attention..

 

[venom628]

Im not making episode 2 cos everyone hates this thread. Mods can you close this thread please?

 

[Julez]

No.

 

[Spider-Man Luvr28]

Why did you write part one twice?

 

[Iceman]

Im not making episode 2 cos everyone hates this thread. Mods can you close this thread please?

I like it.

Post part 2.

 

[BeserkerHilf]

no, please don't

 

[venom628]

Why did you write part one twice?

I meant to copy but not paste part 2.

 

[venom628]

no, please don't

Ok.

Part 2. The gift the power, the evilness.

I got up and looked at my hands. This... suit... It feels great... the power... It feels good. I jumped. I jumped high. Wow! I said in amazment. I spined a web next. Awesome! I said again. But does anyone know that my voice has turned evil and raspy? I said in my Evil voice. I landed on a house. What else can this stuff do? I suddenly turned into a cool dude. Awesome! Transformation to! I Said. Suddenly I saw a burgaler carrieng a suitcase. I followed him. Hey! I shouted at him. Whaddya think your doing? I swinged down Into action and kicked his face. Ow! He said. He fell down. I looked at him angrly. He got up and ran. I shot a web at him. I pulled and went flying at him. I grabbed him and tackled him. He fell again. I suddenly started to grow tentacles. I'll eat you up! I snarled. The tentacles grabbed his arms. I started to jump at him and RIP his body LIMB FROM LIMB. Then I ate all his body. I gasped. Whats happening to me? I suddenly started to grow angirer and angrier. IM HUNGRY! I growled. Someone looked at me. I looked at him back and... Aaaaaa..... I ate him. I WANT MORRRREEEEEEEEEEEEE!

part 3 coming soon!