Venom

[red hood 4]

This is my Venom Script i posted it on the fanfiction section but did not get any reviews hopfully it will do better here enjoy and please review



My venom script
This scene is set just after the last fight of spider man 3

Construction site lower levels

The black symbiote slithers over the ground flames lick at its tentacles Eddie Brock is slumped in a corner his face grey due to blood loss his flesh is lacerated with cuts and burns he crawls towards the black creature.


Eddie: you cant leave me like this

Symbiote: everything has its time and everything dies accept it


Eddie: no not yet im not ready please please don’t leave me

Mocking Symbiote: what are you going to do sob and scream noooo again


In response Eddie grabs two poles and bangs them together the Venom symbiote writhes and lashes out with its tendrils trying to knock the poles away

Eddie: yeah it hurts don’t it you hurt me I hurt you

Symbiote: stop it

Eddie: then help me

In pain Symbiote: you humans are very persistent

weakly Eddie: thank you so do we have a deal

Symbiote: fine

The symbiote reaches down with its tendrils and begins the bonding Eddie smiles as it crawls over his face he rises to his feet and shoots out a web line and swings in to the night fade to black.


Scene 2 the Stacey residence
Scene takes place a few weeks after spider man 3

The scene opens on a lush garden Gwen Stacey sits on a chair a mobile clutched in a manicured hand

Gwen: im sorry flash its just im not ready for a relationship at the moment

Flash: that’s not what you said last night or the night before

Indignant Gwen: that was a mistake

Flash :what ever you’ll still come back to me

Gwen: you think so she hangs up
Captain Stacey enters


worried Captain Stacey: Gwen honey how long are you going to keep this up

Gwen: keep what up?

Captain Stacey: pretending your over what happened at that jazz club

Angry Gwen that’s none of your business

Captain Stacey alright princess I just want to make sure your ok

sarcastic Gwen: yes everything’s fine I went on a date with a guy I like and the only reason he went with me was to spite that ***** of a girlfriend if it wasn’t for her we would be together

Captain Stacey: what about that nice boy you went out with that one time what was his name Edmund ed something
Gwen: Eddie Brock?

Captain Stacey: that’s it well maybe should go out with him if you need someone


Gwen: well I would if he had not vanished of the face of the planet

Captain Stacey: maybe you’ll meet again who knows

Gwen :right anyway im off she exits


Scene 3 night club

Gwen sits at a table several glasses are strewn around her a barman comes over

Barman excuse me but don’t you think you’ve had enough?

Angry Gwen: when ive had enough you’ll know

Barman: whatever do as you please

A tall thin man with reddish hair portrayed by cillian Murphy comes over

Man :you alright?
Gwen: fine

Man: what’s your name?

Gwen: Gwen Stacey

Man nice to meet you Gwen I am Cletus Cassidy maybe you and me should go somewhere a bit more quiet

Gwen ha get away from me

Getting angry Cletus: don’t say that Gweny you should give me what I want or I may do something I will regret

Gwen slaps him round the face get away from me you sicko

She stands up and leaves Cletus stands up and calmly walks after her as she reaches an alleyway Cletus grabs her and shoves her up against a wall Gwen scratches his face Cletus grunts and smacks her in the face and wipes the blood from his forehead.

In a rage Cletus you shouldn’t have done that draws a knife tell me do you like that face of yours he walks towards her Gwen whimpers as he gets nearer.

Sickly Cletus: surgery time
As he reaches up to cut her face a dark figure jumps between them Cletus panics and slashes at the figure as he pulls the knife back he notices some black liquid on the blade.

Venom: get your hands off my girl the figure comes in to the light revealing fanged symbiotic mask the white eyes glare at Cletus .

Terrified Cletus what the hell are you

Eddie/venom :I am venom he back hands Cletus some of the slime clutches hold of Cletus’s shirt and burrows in to his clothes he turns and flees

The black creature turns to Gwen

Venom: are you ok

Gwen what are you

Venom :don’t you recognise me the mask peels
Eddie: how about know

Gwen: Eddie?

Eddie: oh remembered my existence have you

Confused Gwen: what?

Ranting Eddie: you humiliated me confusing me playing with my head

Eddies voices changes you will pay I will remove you from my hosts mind

Gwen: im sorry I never meant to hurt you

Eddies face softens slightly the symbiote starts speaking inside Eddies head

Symbiote: she lies

Gwen realises that Eddie is starting to listen

Gwen: I mean I never realised you liked me that much



Symbiote: stay out of his head

Gwen: why don’t you think im the parasite you should see what your doing to him

A large black tendril flies towards her Eddie scream loudly and falls to the floor the tendril falls just short of its goal Gwen walks forward and gently supports Eddie towards her home.
Scene 4 the coming of carnage

Cletus hurtles down the alley he stops as notices a dark black liquid crawling up is arm he shakes it trying to get it off it crawls higher as it reaches his head it slides in to his cut forehead he screams in agony as it melds with his brain he falls to his knees a tramp walks up to him.

Tramp: are you ok mate?

Cletus gets to his feet: yes everything is fine a large spear like appendage impales the blood drips from the tramps mouth

Tramp; my god what are you

Cletus: I im not sure but lets just say that im here to bring a bit of carnage oh I like that I am carnage

The tramp lets out a gurgle and slips off the blade


Carnage looks at himself large orange eyes stare back at him from a shop window he looks down at his new
form he is grotesquely skinny the red and black symbiote ripples slightly
Cletus: what are you

Carnage symbiote: I am your salvation

smiling Cletus : lets go and play the screen fades to black with the sound of distorted insane laughter ringing in the background
Scene 5 Gwen’s home

Gwen sits on a sofa a large cup of tea clutched in her hands Eddie is sprawled opposite his face twitching muttering inaudibly Captain Stacey stands over Gwen .

Captain Stacey so your saying that this guy tried to kill you and Brock here saved you with some kind of alien creature

Gwen :yes I know it sounds strange insane even but it happened look he’s wearing it right know

Captain Stacey: how much did you have to drink

Gwen Stacey: not much well twelve glasses



Captain Stacey: I see

Gwen: how can you explain those third degree burns that are know miraculously healing



Captain Stacey: there are many reasons like

Eddie suddenly jerks upright with a gasp

Gwen runs to his side Gwen: Eddie its all right don’t move. She grabs a bowl of antiseptics and begins to gently dab at his cuts and bruises


Eddie: what happened

Gwen: you collapsed

Getting scared Eddie: what how ?

Gwen: Well that thing tried to attack me

Eddie: But it cant it obeys me

Gwen: are you sure?

Scene 6 first victim and alliance

Cletus sneaks in to a house he switches on a light a woman is sitting in a chair

In a rage Woman: get out

Cletus: don’t say that Shelly

Shelly: don’t talk to me after all you’ve done I don’t want you near me please just leave

Cletus:: but I love you

Shelly: love? You don’t even know what love is all the people you’ve hurt you have the nerve to tell me that you love me.


Starting to cry Cletus: but you said you said


Shelly: that was before I found out what you did to your father

The Carnage symbiote starts to speak inside Cletus head

Carnage symbiote: don’t let her talk to you that way

Cletus: your right

Carnage symbiote : make her suffer


Shelly: who the hell are you talking to Cletus


Cletus: he’s not here right know but maybe you would like to make a appointment

Several tentacles burst out of him Shelly screams as they enter through her chest and drain her of life the creature grows in stature and screeches it then races from the scene’









Scene 7 the Shocker

Still in Gwen’s home Captain Stacey is on his mobile Eddie is sleeping Gwen is tenderly stroking his hair





Captain Stacey: what? Ok ill be right there He turns to Gwen

Captain Stacey: Gwen honey something’s come up ive got to go

Gwen: ok dad

Captain Stacey leaves


Scene cuts to Carnage he is talking to a man of about 32 dressed in a glittering silver suit

Carnage: I need you to pay my friend a little visit my guardian angel tells me that he is weak and wont be able to fight you off

Shocker: whatever dude when do I get paid?

Carnage: soon


Shocker levitates and flies in to air



Scene 8

Still in Gwen’s Eddie is now awake is talking to Gwen

Eddie: so how is Parker

Gwen: not very good him and that MJ are going through a really bad time

happy Eddie: good

Gwen frowns slightly Gwen: why are you so cold?

Eddie: I don’t want to talk about

Gwen: maybe you should it might help you

Eddie: when I was five my dad came home drunk as normal and beat me for no reason except perhaps because I was born

Gwen: oh

Eddie: then I left home when I was fifteen left the bastard trapped in that home alone just what he deserved


There is suddenly a loud crash from outside Eddie goes out side to investigate as he reaches the garden a bolt of lightning streams in to his chest.

The shocker glides in front of him

Shocker: so your Eddie Brock I must say your not what I expected I thought someone who nearly killed the webslinger would have been older
so come on kid lets see what you can do

Eddie; kid? well if that’s how you see me then you’ll blush a pretty pink when I kick your ass

The symbiote envelops him and he flies at the hovering figure he delivers a hard kick to his ribs Shocker grunts and fires off blasts of energy the symbiote goes crazy with the sound waves.

Venom punches shockers face Shocker yells and knocks Venom out cold


Eddie opens his eyes and finds himself in a dark room the symbiote takes on a human visage

Symbiote: things have gone wrong have they not it was all going to be so perfect you and me one forever but she had to come and twist everything you don’t even know what you feel any more a part of you hates her but an even bigger part of you feels something I cannot pinpoint I believe its called love

Eddie: you cant stand it can you cant stand that she makes me happy
more than you

Symbiote: that’s nonsense

Eddie: im stronger than you because I can feel

Pleading Symbiote: just let me take care of you shouts: why wont you just let me take care of you

Eddie because I choose it

The symbiote lets out a roar of rage and despair as it disintegrates

Eddie opens his eyes a large white spider symbol is now on the symbiote signifying his control over it

Meanwhile the shocker has tracked Gwen to her bedroom

Shocker: its nothing personal love he raises a hand to blast her
someone taps him on the shoulder he turns round Venom punches him in his face he screams and rises in to the air and evaporates in to thin air little charges are left in his wake.

Gwen runs to Eddie and hugs him she strokes his face
the symbiote peels off of him

Gwen: do I get to say thank you this time he kisses him passionately on the lips and pulls
his shirt off they make love under the sparkling remnants of the destroyed Shocker in a beautiful and tender scene.

End of scene 8

In Carnages lair he is holding a large knife and is slicing in to his wrist

Carnage symbiote: what action is this

Cletus: Herman’s not back yet which means he is dead and whats more that little punk has just got done by that ****e

Carnage symbiote: so your inflicting harm on yourself

Cletus: yes

Carnage symbiote well then boy lets gather the troops

they turn towards a building

Cletus : this is going to rock come on buddy lets go and meet the family

Cletus/carnage: the end game is here.

 

[red hood 4]

The second half






Gwen wakes up wrapped in Eddies arms she gently kisses him and gets up Eddies eyes flick open

Eddie: are you awake

Gwen: yeah that was good wasnt it

Eddie: i love you

Gwen: right back at ya

Eddie: if anything ever happened to you I don’t know what id do



Gwen :nothing will happen to me as long as ive got you

Eddie looks up and sees a red and blue figure swinging through the city

Eddie: Gwen there’s just something ive got to do

Gwen: ok Eddie gets out of bed and pulls his trousers on the Symbiote covers him he kisses Gwen swings off through the window

Spider man swings through the city and lands on a roof top he sees a figure walking towards him

Eddie: hey parker

Spider man stares in stunned shock

Spider man: Eddie?

Eddie: in the flesh well sort of

Spider man: the suit take it off im begging you

Eddie: why? so once its off me it can run straight back to you never im sick of you taking things that belong to me my job for instance

Spider man: what about Gwen

Eddie: well me and her have just well ive showed her a better time than you ever could how does that make you feel and beside the suit is more or less dead know any way it nearly destroyed me but I won

he leaps at spider man spidey tries to dodge but fails

Eddie head butts him in the forehead knocking him out cold

Eddie: now everyone will know who you are

sometime later Peter wakes up webbed to the building with cameras flashing in his face spider man revealed at last

scene 11

Carnage enters the building which is a maximum security prison/asylum a nurse walks up to him

Nurse: can I help you sir

Carnage yeah baby you can he stabs her in the throat with his spear arm
he grabs an access card from her pocket

he walks in between the cells and opens several

Carnage: children oh my children rejoice for I have set you free

the inmates cackle and laugh

Carnage: go and play Daddy just needs to go and get something know don’t start the party without me have fun

Gwen is sitting at home she hers a knock at the door she goes and opens it and finds Cletus standing there

Cletus: hello Gweny he stabs a needle filled with a strong sleeping drug in to her arm
he swings off towards a tall building

Half an hour later Eddie walks in he sees a tape on the floor he puts it in the recorder he sees Gwen blind folded and gagged in a chair
Carnage steps in to view.

Carnage with his mask peeled back begins to speak: so mr Brock junior ready to play oh yeah I bet the anger is building up what does it feel like to have all that hate inside of you oh don’t worry I wont hurt your ***** im having far to much fun with her see you soon little boy
at the construction site im sure you know where it is
Eddie lets out an incoherent roar of rage

in a distorted voice Eddie: Cassidy I am not beaten you will not take my Gwen from me he storms from the house towards the construction site.

End of scene 11



Gwen is know suspended above the construction site in a large red web Carnage crawls up to her

Carnage: enjoying the view

Gwen: Eddie will come for me

Carnage: oh God I hope so you see Gwen you are very beautiful and my suit it wants to replicate with you I will have an army a species of my own you imagine and you could be part of it what do you say?

Gwen: I say go to hell you sick ****

Carnage hits her : then you can watch as absorb your little boy friend

laughing Gwen: that’s not gonna happen

Carnage: we will see my little moth give us a kiss he runs a long black tongue over her face

Eddie suddenly jumps on to roof of the building

Eddie: get off of her

Carnage: oh look your here

Eddie: im going to kill you

Carnage: sure you are couldn’t even kill the spider your just a weak child and I am a god this ends here mr Edward Brock junior



Scene 13

Eddie Charges at Carnage Carnage jumps up to the web and grabs Gwen

In a rage Eddie: let her go now

Carnage: oh not so manic now are we not when its someone you love
He throws her off the building

Horrified Eddie: Gwen no

Gwen falls hundreds of feet Eddie jumps after her he shoots out webbing it catches around her ankle slowing her slowing her decent she hit’s the lower floor hard Eddie cradles her in his arms she is stunned but alive. The floor is littered with the corpses of police officers Carnage leaps down
and kicks Eddie in the stomach he bends over and stabs him in the shoulder Eddie swings his foot out Carnage trips over he falls and fires out spike like tendrils several hit the supports of the building it shakes slightly

Carnage: what’s the matter little boy hurt he laughs insanely and walks towards Eddie he fires more tendrils towards Eddie he ducks and fires some of his own tendrils back at Carnage

Carnage: shall we go higher he jumps higher to the top floor

Carnage: this ends here boy don’t worry your Gwen looks like a screamer she looks likes she can give a good yelp tell was she good maybe ill find out once your dead

Eddie screeches in his alien voice and jumps at him they collide and smash through a wall they fall to the ground with Eddie on top he punches Carnage and bites in to his cheek Carnage yells and knocks him away he looks at his ruined cheek.

Carnage: you actually hurt me Brock I don’t like being hurt by anyone but myself he Delivers a flying kick in to Eddies jaw Eddie reaches and pulls Cassidy’s suit open slightly punches Carnages chest he staggers back Eddie is left holding a lighter he throws carnage in to a large red barrel at the side it bursts spraying him in petrel he gazes at Eddie in terror

Eddie: if you’re a God then burn in hell he throws the lighter it catches the petrel alight. Carnage howls as he bursts in to flames he topples backwards off the site and down to the lower floors the symbiote hangs off of him in strands Gwen looks over at him she groans and staggers towards a dead cop Cletus crawls after her.



Cletus: ill kill you pestilent ***** you cant stop me little girl his hands reach for her throat Gwen blast him through his left eye with a hand gun from one of the bodies blood sprays from it as he spasms Eddie runs over and embraces Gwen

Eddie: you killed him

Gwen: no I just finished him off you kicked his ass how’s your face.

Laughs Eddie: better than his


Cletus’s eye suddenly opens The carnage symbiote crawls off down the side of the construction site

Cletus: Brock you think it ends with me? My employer will finish this him and the Angels of the Lord will purify this world oh its going to be so beautiful my friends are already on their way to his right hand. His head falls back with a final death rattle


Eddie and Gwen swing away from the corpse in to the distance.




Scene 14

The Carnage Symbiote crawls along the ground a large steel net suddenly drops on it it is shocked with electricity. Several armed guards surround it pointing guns at it a tall elderly man gets out of a van

Man: don’t hurt it fools

Guard: yes sorry Mr Warren

Warren: get it in car now

The guards begin to carry the thrashing symbiote in to a heavily armed car Warren gets out a Mobile

Warren: we have it sir do want us bring it straight to you or do want me want me to run tests
Voice: run tests my dreams are realised here Mr Warren

Warren: of course sir he hangs up

Warren: lets go

End of scene 14




Final Scene Gwen’s home night In Gwen’s Bed room Two cases stand at the foot of the bed


Eddie and Gwen are laying in bed Eddie wraps his arms protectively around her Gwen snuggles up against his bare chest

Eddie: I cant believe I came so close to losing you

Gwen: but you didn’t did you im still here

Eddie: I know but what do you think he meant when he said his employer would finish it

Gwen I don’t know but whatever it is you’ll kill it she suddenly touches a scar on Eddies side : and ill be there with you she kisses him deeply



Main Cast

Venom/Eddie Brock Topher Grace

Gwen Stacey Bryce Dallas
Cletus Cassidy/carnage cillian Murphy
Captain Stacy James Cromwell

Shocker Eric banna

Warren Donald Sutherland


I would like to thank ultimate spider girl for giving me the inspiration/ground work to write this

Venom 2 dark ties is coming soon

What would you like to see the Villains will be Toxin annd Spider Carnage

 

[thejon93]

Nice spin-off to 'Spider-Man 3', red hood 4
From now on though, I'd put your fan-fics in the 'Fan-Fic' thread, not on here. Anyways, good fic, red hood.

 

[Spider-ManHero12]

Sounds very cool!

 

[TheFuture]

Very nice good work my friend!

 

[Metal Spidey]

I just read the first half and I'm confused. Why would the symbiote refuse to join with Eddie? The symbiote is like a parasite that needs a host to live. I'd imagine he would jump at the chance to become Venom again.

 

[red hood 4]

Because at that point Eddie is crippled and useless its plan was to leave and find a new host to bind with. but it realises that Eddie is dspreate for it so he then why should i bond with somone who might reject me.

it also knows that Eddie is not going to be very fast if Peter comes back to see if he is really dead hope that answered your qeustion are you enjoying it?

 

[red hood 4]

I know Eddie may be a bit out of character but he cant go axe murderer when Gwen is there

 

[TheFuture]

No, no I like the way he is all gentle and good with Gwen and then heads off and kicks Spidey's ass. It shows he is still very much a sinister and obsessive being.

 

[Immortalfire]

Check my announcement, this needs to be in Fan Fiction.

Moving.

 

[red hood 4]

Yes i know but when i posted there i did not get a single comment/reply here i have got about six