Val's ART-(kinda sucky)

[Valorman]

hey guys.i wanted to show you some of my stuff "well mainly...3 of my stuff" because well.im bored and i think some critisism could help me out little.so here are my sketches

The Thing.i did this the first time i picked up my first ultimate FF book.i wanted to see if i could sortof do small tweeks to ben in my general style..it came out like this.i think i did this about?....9 months ago? ..still looks alright to me..not that great though

[font=Arial,Helvetica,Sans Serif]this is a johnny storm picture i did.you know when you have a picture and it looks great.and you SHOULD stop but you dont and it makes it worse.thats the case with this drawing.i kept adding flame upon flame then i redid the hairshape and added the burn stripe lines and i became displeased with it after each addition.it kinda sucks...but meh[/font]

and finaly..yeah i know it isint "fan art" because well its my own design..but it took me ..about 2 hours to do "its all on paint" so it got complicated,...its not entirly from scratch though i used a batman peice on the hype as a base..im sorry to the guy i borried it from id give you credit if i could remember where it was so i could post as comparrison..hopefully i dont piss anyone off.i just saw the pic and thought the head was great and i thought it would be a great starting point for my character..lol my design is SO ORIGINAL ITS NOT FUNNY *lie detector explodes*


anyway..thats it..i have more but there not nesesarily fan art so i didint bother posting them.any critisim is welcome even negative you dont have to "go easy" on me or anything

so..comments anyone?

 

[DarkKnightJRK]

That's not sucky at all. In fact it's quite good.

 

[Valorman]

well i thank you for the compliment darkknight

 

[Cobblepot]

Yeah it looks pretty good to me.
Keep drawing and you will get better and better.

 

[ABC]

You think that's bad? That's awsome! Great Work!

 

[ABC]

I like the Human Torch one the best.

 

[spiderfan08]

human torch drawing is pretty cool. the thing has nice colors to it. very nice stuff.

 

[Valorman]

well thanks for all the compliments guys

man i need photoshop.id love to fine tune some of this stuff

 

[BizarroMe1001]

I really like the thing and johnny storm. not bad work at all. great stuff.

 

[Valorman]

guess i should do more FF stuff

 

[Valorman]

this is some stuff i found from awhile back

ill post explinations later tonight.for now i gota go really quickly

 

[-Fire-Fly-]

nice work man

 

[Valorman]

btw theres more its just the limit cut me off...so..more later as well.cya

 

[Valorman]

IM back.heres the rest

http://photos3.flickr.com/4617542_c5894fba95_o.jpg

 

[Valorman]

ugh..i found some really old...very bad photos i did..and i figure id post them

THIS FIRST ONE was a villian i created for the sirens book im working on back in january..ugh.i cant really..look at it because i cant beleve i drew this badly..lol.needless to say i did this in detention with a black and red sharpie and a yellow pencilcrayon i found on the floor.oh the tools of the trade

this one was one i did in math"i need to stop drawing in class" to try and fit all of the characters on one cover..i couldint find a pencil at first so i was using a blue pencil crayon..my friend samad asked why i was drawing with it.i told him.and he handed me the pencil to finish it off.i quickly sketched the others.but i shortend drarkfox way too much"top left" and glowgirl looks like a poor copy of WW but....bad...very bad"all of there designs have been changed drasticly..in sept itll be my b-day so im HOPING to get a tablet to show you what my current style looks like.far better than this.ugh"

oh yeah.one more thing..i do NOT know what those blue..squiggles on darkfoxs arms are..wtf was i thinking?

i do like the running effect on rush though"the bottom" but it can be better


enjoy or..puke, eather is justified lol

comments,critisism,and flaming welcome

 

[Vartha]

Well Val you're on your way, but, it takes ALOT of practice and studies of the human anatomy to get really good at what you want to do.

The best artist to draw fire IMO is Mike Golden (I draw fire like his). Try looking up Some of his art from Ghost Rider to Rom. In Rom he drew a character called FireFall, lots of fire in those Rom issues.

 

[Valorman]

...........................you actualy replied.....holy ***********

lol jk

thanks.ill look into it.ive been studying anatomy latley for the summer"especialy the chest to arm sections ugh" and its coming along decently

my new stuff should be coming.alot better than this i assure you but il still need to work on it

 

[SWAT]

If that's sucky... Then I really, really suck

 

[Valorman]

lol well im glad you think its good but im betting your stuff doesint suck"well i usualy dont think any art sucks unless its content is .....******ed" but besides that.post some stuff id like to see it

 

[Valorman]

that isint touchy that is SO AWESOME you have no idea

you guys are compleatly free to do anything you want with my art i like seeing the outcome

i love it iggy

 

[The Last Meatbag]

Mesa likey

 

[Valorman]

dont worry the eye probibly messed up because of my excessive use of lead making it difficult to work with.its still great none the less

that characters based on my ex so i get alittle emotional when i see it..ahh man

 

[Valorman]

eyyyyyyyyyyy guys.well the weather outside is frightfull... but the tree promisses a scanner/tablet in my future so heres hoping.

untill then i have been doing some paint practice. i was wondering if anyone felt like playing around with them

 

[forfeit]

Wow Val, its a little bit J Scott Campbell, a little Bradshaw, and a little anime. I like it. Good mix.

• Love the 'tude on the Thing
• Torch looks cool, better without the lines tho possibly?
• Cool character designs
• Nice lines on the robotic characters, well done
• Nice and stylised on the "its all in your head" pictures.
• Great stuff all round, keep it up!!!

 

[CyberMonkeytron]

Some good stuff man. I really like that character work on those blue people.

I would like to see some more hands and feet though