What better dialogue would you have used when Silken met The Spirit in the alleyway?

[BDuncan]

I know The Spirit film isn't great, but in the scene when Silken Floss
meets The Spirit in the alleyway (to set him up so The Octopus can
nab him), what different and much more humorously wittier
dialogue would you have preferred her to have said to The Spirit
(instead of what she says to him in the film).

 

[Black_Board]

Anything other than what she said.

 

[Wesley Dodds]

What did she say?

 

[theMan-Bat]

What did she say?

"You're a fine detective. You lead the bread crumbs right to us."

 

[Temple Fugate]

it wasn't an ally way. it was a sewer

 

[OctaviusINC]

INT. SEWER- NIGHT

THE SPIRIT watches vigilantly as a seductive shadow makes it's way towards him. The shadow reveals itself to be the seductive SILKEN FLOSS.

She smiles at THE SPIRIT and caresses his blood red tie.

SILKEN

You're a fine detective. You lead the bread crumbs right to us.

THE SPIRIT​

T1tties.​

THE SPIRIT proceeds to motorboat the hell out of Scarl-er-SILKEN FLOSS'S awe-inspiring t1tties that are well worth the price of admission. She slips THE SPIRIT a mickey. Something happens. There's like a Nazi MACE WINDU and kittens. They talk about eggs. And

THE END.

6/12/08

By Frank Miller.

 

[Temple Fugate]

i dunno man the part with avenging muffin made me very happy