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Well, the ending that we got was awesome, but do you think your little Secret Ending After the Credits would be?
Here's one that I made up, although it's not that great. haha
EXT. ALKALI LAKE, SHORELINE - DAY
The scene we see is serene, and gentle. The water splashes onto the shore as birds squak in the distance. The waves continue splash onto the shore, and a body washes up. The camera moves in closer to see the haggard body of Scott Summers. Clothing ripped and torn to shreds, hair in a complete mess, burn marks covering his body. He slowly pushes himself up to his knees. He rubs his face and notices his glasses are gone.
He continues to kneel and his whispers turn into screams.
He begins to cry. Soon the crunch of sand can he heard as someone begins to walk towards the shoreline towards Scott. Scott, picks up on this and yells again.
The camera pans up to show a tall, slender, young woman, wish striking blonde hair, but the first think you notice about her are her icy blue eyes.
The woman, kneels down to face Scott on the shore. She begins to speak, showing her Britsh accent.
Get up to his feet and continues to scream.
His screams trail off as he again, breaks down and cries. Emma, moves forward to put her arms around him as he continues to sob.
Scott backs away from her and continues to sob as he looks up at her, eyes still tightly shut.
Camera pans to to Emmas face as she cracks a small grin.
CUT
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Yea, told you it wasn't that great. But just something I was thinking about earlier today. Just thought I'd like to share it with you, and hopefully spark some interesting convo.
Here's one that I made up, although it's not that great. haha
EXT. ALKALI LAKE, SHORELINE - DAY
The scene we see is serene, and gentle. The water splashes onto the shore as birds squak in the distance. The waves continue splash onto the shore, and a body washes up. The camera moves in closer to see the haggard body of Scott Summers. Clothing ripped and torn to shreds, hair in a complete mess, burn marks covering his body. He slowly pushes himself up to his knees. He rubs his face and notices his glasses are gone.
SCOTT
(whispering)
Jean!
(whispering)
Jean!
He continues to kneel and his whispers turn into screams.
SCOTT
(yelling)
Jean! Jean!
(yelling)
Jean! Jean!
He begins to cry. Soon the crunch of sand can he heard as someone begins to walk towards the shoreline towards Scott. Scott, picks up on this and yells again.
SCOTT
Jean??
Jean??
The camera pans up to show a tall, slender, young woman, wish striking blonde hair, but the first think you notice about her are her icy blue eyes.
SCOTT
Jean, is that you?
Jean, is that you?
The woman, kneels down to face Scott on the shore. She begins to speak, showing her Britsh accent.
EMMA
(comfortingly)
No, no. She's....she's dead.
SCOTT
No! No! She's not.
(comfortingly)
No, no. She's....she's dead.
SCOTT
No! No! She's not.
Get up to his feet and continues to scream.
SCOTT
(screaming again}
JEAN!! JEAN!!!
(screaming again}
JEAN!! JEAN!!!
His screams trail off as he again, breaks down and cries. Emma, moves forward to put her arms around him as he continues to sob.
EMMA
It's okay. It's gonna be alright. I'm here.
It's okay. It's gonna be alright. I'm here.
Scott backs away from her and continues to sob as he looks up at her, eyes still tightly shut.
SCOTT
Who are you?
Who are you?
Camera pans to to Emmas face as she cracks a small grin.
CUT
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Yea, told you it wasn't that great. But just something I was thinking about earlier today. Just thought I'd like to share it with you, and hopefully spark some interesting convo.
