Transformers Write your own script.

[Hotwire]

It seems a lot of people have here problems with the presumed final draft script everyone has been reading. So, let's see the folks here, write how they would have changed things.

 

[DOG LIPS]

Open to a shot of Megan Fox naked.

Zoom in.

Zoom out.

Zoom in.

Show Optimus Prime kill something.

Fade to black.

The End.

 

[Swordmaster]

Open to a shot of Megan Fox naked.

Zoom in.

Zoom out.

Zoom in.

Show Optimus Prime kill something.

Fade to black.

The End.

Add in a sex scene and you're good

 

[Destructicus]

open scene : Spike standing at edge of cliff with bumble bee

Bumblebee moves behind spike and nudges him in.

end movie

 

[Jimmy, GL]

Fade in to Megan Fox.

Her blouse is unbuttoned therefore exposing her rack.

Zoom in Zoom out
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Pan to the left with Sam drueling.

Behind im we see Bumblebee transform.

As he does Sam is crushed underneath one of BB's feet.

BB scrapes off Sam's bloody remain and transforms back into a Camaro.

Megan gets in and takes off her bra.

BB begins to bounce up and down as he drives off into the sunset.

Fade out.

The End?

 

[Avangarde]

I see a dark future for this thread

 

[The Guard]

I'd like to see CFlash write one...or at least a decent outline for one (that doesn't simply copy the original source material) since he thinks everything about this one is so trite.

 

[Destructicus]

I still say that there is still no true proof to me that the leaked script is true.

 

[CherryRedSpider]

I still say that there is still no true proof to me that the leaked script is true.

Not word by word of the script but certain scenes from it have been shot already.

Edit: Dog lips, I'm surprised you put Prime in

 

[Creature SH]

Write your own script.

Actually, that is exactly what I plan to do. I can't guarantee anything, but I hope to have it done by the time the movie hits.

(For clarification : I don't think that it will ever go anywhere. I just want to make one.)

 

[zer00]

It seems a lot of people have here problems with the presumed final draft script everyone has been reading. So, let's see the folks here, write how they would have changed things.

...

The maturity is killing me.

Anyway, I have plenty of ideas for one. Mostly just to fix up this draft and make it...you know a TF movie. But I got enough projects. Though I would love to see some GOOD fan scripts. I've read a few TF fan scripts and they've all been sort of...ecky.

 

[Tad Fatherton]

i wrote this sweet script for the transformers a while ago, but i'll save you all some time by just giving you the plot.

so it starts off with the basic transformers premise, but its wen they get to earth that changes. this movie takes place during world war II and megatron is hitler's personal panzer tank, optimus prime is the enola gaye, and they are caught up in world war 2 because the nuclear bomb is actually a crude form of the power that is used to create energon. also, hitler has gotten ahold of a frozen megatron and rewired his brain to be under hitler's control. the big critical moment to the movie is when optimus has to decide between dropping the nuke on hiroshima or using the bomb to create just enough energy to revive the fallen autobot, hotrod.

 

[Golgo-13]

I made a thread based off of how i thought a 3 movie arc would go, about a year ago......

This is how the three films should go:

TF1: Begins with the Cybertron war..then their fated crash to Earth into the volcano within the Arc during prehistoric Earth (them being frozen by the ice age could also work). Fast foward several million years , where they wake up....then both sides learning about planet Earth. Back stories/character developement. Both sides not knowing if Cybertron even still exists after the millions of years they spent inactive.

TF2: The war continues on earth. More humans becoming involved..intricate plots between characters. Confirmation that Cyberton does still exist, and the dismal news that the Autobots have been defeated. (They learn this news after search parties from both sides come across the stranded Autobots and Decepticons-this could be a way to introduce more characters in the sequel).....

TF3: Megatron returns to Cybertron where Shockwave has succeeded in enslaving Cybertrons surviving Autobots (he has them in Nazi style concentration camps). Prime and co rally a last attempt to defeat him back where it all began! When Prime returns home, he feels guilty to see that during his absense his Autobots have been enslaved. Big battle ensues, as the enslaved cybertronian Autobots rise up against their Decepticon captors with the help of their Earth bound Autobots (Prime and Co) .Ends with Megatron being banished into outta space or presumed dead..but we all know better!

 

[Knightsaber Priss]

It seems a lot of people have here problems with the presumed final draft script everyone has been reading. So, let's see the folks here, write how they would have changed things.

It's funny you should mention this because I am in fact working on a fanfiction in prose form that's a basic reimagining of the finer points of the script.

 

[Destructicus]

Not word by word of the script but certain scenes from it have been shot already.

Edit: Dog lips, I'm surprised you put Prime in

but didn't the script surface after we heard those scenes were completed?

 

[Knightsaber Priss]

You know, I just think that even with all of our moviemaking technology, a Transformers movie is a lofty thing to realize because of budgetary reasons. Perhaps it's best served within the deep recesses of our imaginations where there are no limits.

 

[Avangarde]

You know, I just think that even with all of our moviemaking technology, a Transformers movie is a lofty thing to realize because of budgetary reasons. Perhaps it's best served within the deep recesses of our imaginations where there are no limits.

I thought the same thing back when there was plans to make a Dragonball Z movie. Should never happen.

 

[Creature SH]

but didn't the script surface after we heard those scenes were completed?

Some were completed, others started filming after. All appeared to match the script.

 

[Knightsaber Priss]

I thought the same thing back when there was plans to make a Dragonball Z movie. Should never happen.

Oh yes, it is a logistical nightmare to try to figure out how much it would cost for films like these in Live Action settings. Within animation you have a limitless boundary of what you can do. While CGI does make it easier to attribute cartoon character movements and situations in live action, it is much more expensive than hand drawn animation because you have to make the CGI photo realistic.

 

[Hotwire]

I thought the same thing back when there was plans to make a Dragonball Z movie. Should never happen.

Mainly because it would be 2 hours of a couple characters screaming, "AAAAHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!"

 

[Destructicus]

Some were completed, others started filming after. All appeared to match the script.

I still say there is no proof till we see the next trailer.

 

[CFlash]

I still say there is no proof till we see the next trailer.

Well, let's hope the trailer doesn't give away the whole plot the way The Island's trailers did. I think Michael Bay would wring Steven Spielberg's and Dreamwork's necks if they allow that to happen again.

 

[nogster]

whats there to give away?
the plot is as formulaic as u can get really. and riddled with cliches.
boy wants cool girl. 2 factions of alien robots come to earth in search of ancient artifact that could endanger all., boy and girl find themselves in the middle of it, boy saves the world and gets the girl. the end.

 

[Knightsaber Priss]

Mainly because it would be 2 hours of a couple characters screaming, "AAAAHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!"

Come now, I could write a DBZ storyline that doesn't have that in it!

 

[Knightsaber Priss]

whats there to give away?
the plot is as formulaic as u can get really. and riddled with cliches.
boy wants cool girl. 2 factions of alien robots come to earth in search of ancient artifact that could endanger all., boy and girl find themselves in the middle of it, boy saves the world and gets the girl. the end.

Sounds almost like both Spider-man movies so far, well minus the Giant Robot parts.