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Let's cut to the chase...
Why am I posting this here?
1. Because it is an amalgamation of various ideas for Batman 3
2. I want people to actually read and comment about it....
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Dawn. A lock of ravens fly across the morning the sky. We ignore the beautiful skyscrapers of downtown Gotham and focus on the the Narrows. We go inside one of the apartments to see a little boy (barely 18) watching a news report.
"In other news, criminal known as The Batman is still at large and the FBI has been called in for the ongoing investigation"
A woman walks in. The boy's mother. She seems upset, "Tim, why are you watching that again? He's not a good role model for you."
The boy retorts, "Because he's the only one who helps people like us. I can't believe that The Batman would kill people. He saved us remember."
The boy gets up and leaves as his mother turns off the television. He gets dressed and prepares to leave. He leaves towards the city of a bicycle. As he rides, he sees someone familiar standing on the sidewalk. His father. Just as he calls out to him, a limo drives up and his father enters the limo and leaves.
Naturally, the boy is perplexed and tries to follow the limo.
Inside we see Tim's father squirming in his seat and feeling uneasy. There is someone next to him. But his face is obscured. He asks, "Were you followed?"
William replies, "No Sir..."
The man hands him a rubber mask, "Loki, the trickster. Welcome to the False Face Society"
We see the limo drive up to warehouse and enter. From a distance we see, young Tim cycling franticly towards them. His heart rate getting faster and faster. He turns away from them main entrance and tries to sneak in. He finds the various closed but finds a stack of boxes under a window. He climbs them and tries to get a better look inside.
Inside we see William's boss addressing his gang. "Brothers and Sisters. We are gathered here today to set an example for all future members of our society. I value loyalty among all else and expect my fellow members to do the same. Unfortunately, it has come to my attention that there who wish ill upon us and today (he takes out a gun and ***** it), one of them will pay dearly for it... (he moves towards one of the many masked faces and pulls William out. the boss presses his gun against the trickster's temple.)
Willaim freaks out, "No... it wasn't me... sss... sir! I"
The boss screams, "SHUT UP!!! ... No one.. tricks... Black Mask ... (we see his face for the first time or rather his mask. A pitch black skull with shiny white teeth.) He tears off the tricksters mask. At a distance, Tim is shocked and horrified to see his father in such a position.
William, sweating profusely, begs for mercy and just before Black Mask pulls the trigger. An explosion rips open a side wall and the Batpod screams through. Black Mask swears bloody murder. He notices William trying to use the chaos to make a break for it but Black Mask unflinching, shoots him square in the head and breaks for it. The society proves almost too much for The Dark Knight as he brawls. Black Mask manages to escape however.
With several of the thugs dispatched and the wail of police sirens coming closer. Batman looks around for any stragglers. However, he only sees one dead police informant and a little boy running to his dead father. Flashback Little Bruce at the feet of his dead parents crying.
The little boy, his face running with tears, notices the Dark Knight and shouts, "WHY? WHY DIDN'T YOU SAVE HIM!!"
Batman leaves on his Batpod as the police arrive.
Later at night. Commissioner Jim Gordon partakes in the humble chore of talking out the trash. He sees a moving shadow. "Those thugs we caught. They were decoys, petty thieves. We still have no clue about who this Black Mask is or what is his 'society' like. He's got a lot of resources.
To make matters worse. An FBI agent has been called in to catch you. Name's Edward Nygma. Says he wants to use the internet and telephone networks to expose your identity... (Gordon notices the shadow has disappeared)... (whispers)... be careful...
To Be Continued
Why am I posting this here?
1. Because it is an amalgamation of various ideas for Batman 3
2. I want people to actually read and comment about it....
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PROLOGUE
Dawn. A lock of ravens fly across the morning the sky. We ignore the beautiful skyscrapers of downtown Gotham and focus on the the Narrows. We go inside one of the apartments to see a little boy (barely 18) watching a news report.
"In other news, criminal known as The Batman is still at large and the FBI has been called in for the ongoing investigation"
A woman walks in. The boy's mother. She seems upset, "Tim, why are you watching that again? He's not a good role model for you."
The boy retorts, "Because he's the only one who helps people like us. I can't believe that The Batman would kill people. He saved us remember."
The boy gets up and leaves as his mother turns off the television. He gets dressed and prepares to leave. He leaves towards the city of a bicycle. As he rides, he sees someone familiar standing on the sidewalk. His father. Just as he calls out to him, a limo drives up and his father enters the limo and leaves.
Naturally, the boy is perplexed and tries to follow the limo.
Inside we see Tim's father squirming in his seat and feeling uneasy. There is someone next to him. But his face is obscured. He asks, "Were you followed?"
William replies, "No Sir..."
The man hands him a rubber mask, "Loki, the trickster. Welcome to the False Face Society"
We see the limo drive up to warehouse and enter. From a distance we see, young Tim cycling franticly towards them. His heart rate getting faster and faster. He turns away from them main entrance and tries to sneak in. He finds the various closed but finds a stack of boxes under a window. He climbs them and tries to get a better look inside.
Inside we see William's boss addressing his gang. "Brothers and Sisters. We are gathered here today to set an example for all future members of our society. I value loyalty among all else and expect my fellow members to do the same. Unfortunately, it has come to my attention that there who wish ill upon us and today (he takes out a gun and ***** it), one of them will pay dearly for it... (he moves towards one of the many masked faces and pulls William out. the boss presses his gun against the trickster's temple.)
Willaim freaks out, "No... it wasn't me... sss... sir! I"
The boss screams, "SHUT UP!!! ... No one.. tricks... Black Mask ... (we see his face for the first time or rather his mask. A pitch black skull with shiny white teeth.) He tears off the tricksters mask. At a distance, Tim is shocked and horrified to see his father in such a position.
William, sweating profusely, begs for mercy and just before Black Mask pulls the trigger. An explosion rips open a side wall and the Batpod screams through. Black Mask swears bloody murder. He notices William trying to use the chaos to make a break for it but Black Mask unflinching, shoots him square in the head and breaks for it. The society proves almost too much for The Dark Knight as he brawls. Black Mask manages to escape however.
With several of the thugs dispatched and the wail of police sirens coming closer. Batman looks around for any stragglers. However, he only sees one dead police informant and a little boy running to his dead father. Flashback Little Bruce at the feet of his dead parents crying.
The little boy, his face running with tears, notices the Dark Knight and shouts, "WHY? WHY DIDN'T YOU SAVE HIM!!"
Batman leaves on his Batpod as the police arrive.
Later at night. Commissioner Jim Gordon partakes in the humble chore of talking out the trash. He sees a moving shadow. "Those thugs we caught. They were decoys, petty thieves. We still have no clue about who this Black Mask is or what is his 'society' like. He's got a lot of resources.
To make matters worse. An FBI agent has been called in to catch you. Name's Edward Nygma. Says he wants to use the internet and telephone networks to expose your identity... (Gordon notices the shadow has disappeared)... (whispers)... be careful...
To Be Continued
