Comics create a mutant( or teams)

^I have to disagree. I don't think the codename makes the character.

(No Name As of Yet)
Real Name: Nao Ueda
Powers: Uncontrollable technoforming ability allows her to restructure metal, plastic, and glass and then adopt it to work with along with her body. For example, she could create a "cybernetic" eye out of a computer and then use it to replace her own eye. She has no control over what she technoforms, but if she was in need of a new liver then her power would create a dialisis(sp?) machine that she would walk around with as a part of her body. This power works in conjuction with Nao's also uncontrollable power to move her organs and even live without major organs for up to 24 hours.
History: Nao's powers first manifested themselves after a car crash that would've killed her if it wasn't for the second aspect of her ability. She survived her injuries that would've killed a normal person long enough to get to a hospital and be put on life support while waiting for vital organ transplants. Teh technology she was connected to was technoformed while she was under and slowly became a part of her giving her a second lease on life but also greatly disfiguring her face. At the Institute, Nao works with Forge to technoform new body parts to replace old ones, organic and metal.
 
What no i'm saying that the characters are good except that the codenames suck.
 
Oh. Okay. My bad. Like I said, it was just me being bored and taking rap stage names and turning them into mutants. Wasn't really a whole lot of thought behind them beside that. No one else has taken me up on my offer/request to do the same thing. I wanna see what kinda characters ya'll can come up with.
 
Spectre722 said:
Mindscape

Real Name: Jeff O'Connel
Height: 5'11''
Weight: 200 lbs.
Hair: Brown
Eyes: Brown
Powers: Jeff's mutation has caused his mind to expand into its own separate dimension, however this does not change his intellect or personality in any discernible way. Jeff has the ability to pull anybody's psyche into his "mindscape" as he calls it. There, time has no meaning whatsoever. What might seem like hours, days, weeks, months, or years even, actually happens within the space of a moment in the real world. There is no forseen limit to how many psyches Jeff can pull in and when there Jeff has complete control of the psychic reality; he can alter the landscape, or manifest any object he desires. He can't read minds but he is able to use his mindscape as an interrogation room, so at times it may seem like he can read minds since this interrogation takes place between seconds. He also uses the mindscape for strategizing with teammates, as well as sort of a psychic danger-room training experience.
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That's damn good! damn good!
 
X-RAPPERS:Professor MCX (DMX) "Where my Dawgs at?!"Beasta' Rhymes (Busta Rhymes) "Oh my starter pistols and bodyguarders."Shotcrawler (Ja' Rule) "Mein' Gat!" "Murda!"Bamm!shee (Kanye' West) "Bolivar Trask, hates black mutants."Phen-eve-nix (Eve) "I'm on my period, don't f--k with me today!"Shadowfox (Foxy Brown) "Clicklossus and me, we Bonnie&Clyde."Clicklossus (Game) "I ain't Russian, but I play Russian Roulet wit yo life!"Jackerine (lil'Jon) "I'm the best at what I do!! YEAH!!! bub."Gumbo (Juvenile) "FEMA?! f--k FEMA!"GANGSTA RAPPERS OF BLING-BLING:50-Tooth (50-Cent) "I got shot nine times......."Mr.Slizzard (Snoop Dogg) "What's da dizzle wit da DNA? fo'shizzle"*****naut (David Banner) "Stompin' like a pimp."Ice-boi (Ice Cube) "F--k da X-Rappers!"Omega-Red Rag (Suge Knight) "Givemeyomoneyb-tch!"Magnegro (Afrika Bambata) "Rock,Rock..planet Rock"Toady Toad (Flavor Flav) "What time is it?...Yeah Boyeee!!"
 
Deadhead

Real Name: Michael Ellington
Age: 19
Height: 5'9''
Weight: 142 lbs.
Hair: None
Eyes: Black

Powers: Michael's mutation provides him with a unique energy signature that acts as a magnet for other mutant energies. His energy constantly pulls other mutant powers into his own body. However, the atomic bonds between a mutant physiology and its energy signature are too strong for Michael's power to overcome. However, when a mutant is dead, these bonds are destabilized and weakened, allowing Michael to absorb those abilities. The more abilites he absorbs the less room there is and therefore each ability's potency weakens. As a result of absorbing these energies, some trace brainwave patterns of the deceased are picked up as well, giving him aspects of their personalties as well. He is able to deabsorb an ability but once he does, that energy signature dissipates and he can never use it again. Michael has chosen to forever keep the strength and speed of Thunderbird, and the sonic scream of Banshee, though his current power template includes the pyrokinetics of Pyro, and the translation abilities of Cypher. If somebody comes back from the dead, the atomic bonds between them and their powers are restored, ripping the powers from Michael back to them, an extremely painful experience for Michael, which is why he refuses to utilize any powers from Jean Grey. As a sideaffect of his mutation, Michael's skin is a dark grey color.
 
deemar325 said:
Yep! Hoopz she is sooo fine.
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Damn thats Hoopz, she is finer than I already thought she was, look at that ass, I knew she wouldnt stay with Flav
 
who would he looks like he was hit by a car and then jumped and said boy.
And whats up with his colors have you seen what he wears.
 
Spectre722 said:
Deadhead

Real Name: Michael Ellington
Age: 19
Height: 5'9''
Weight: 142 lbs.
Hair: None
Eyes: Black

Powers: Michael's mutation provides him with a unique energy signature that acts as a magnet for other mutant energies. His energy constantly pulls other mutant powers into his own body. However, the atomic bonds between a mutant physiology and its energy signature are too strong for Michael's power to overcome. However, when a mutant is dead, these bonds are destabilized and weakened, allowing Michael to absorb those abilities. The more abilites he absorbs the less room there is and therefore each ability's potency weakens. As a result of absorbing these energies, some trace brainwave patterns of the deceased are picked up as well, giving him aspects of their personalties as well. He is able to deabsorb an ability but once he does, that energy signature dissipates and he can never use it again. Michael has chosen to forever keep the strength and speed of Thunderbird, and the sonic scream of Banshee, though his current power template includes the pyrokinetics of Pyro, and the translation abilities of Cypher. If somebody comes back from the dead, the atomic bonds between them and their powers are restored, ripping the powers from Michael back to them, an extremely painful experience for Michael, which is why he refuses to utilize any powers from Jean Grey. As a sideaffect of his mutation, Michael's skin is a dark grey color.
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SWEET!!
 
Fraternal Triplets
Age: 18
Height: 5''7 (all three)

Alyce Winstar
Hair: Blonde
Eyes: Blue
Codename: Ariel
Powers: Control the wind, Flight.

Hermia Winstar
Hair: Black
Eyes: Blue
Codename: Firecracker
Powers: Control and create fire, body can withstand high temperature.

Mary-Ann Winstar
Hair: Blue
Eyes: Blue
Codename: Oceanus
Powers: Control and create water bursts, can breathe underwater.
 
I'll try.

Codename(can't decide): Omen
Real name:Keisha Small
Powers:Has the ability to make other mutant powers malfunction by causing a temporary error with the mutant X-gene.eg.If she uses her powers on a pyrokinetic,she may cause him to loose his ability to withstand heat and flame,but not his pyrokinesis(this could easily kill someone) or cause a flier to propel uncontrolably into space by causing an extreme intensification in the mutants flight energy that he cannot cope with.The severity of the malfunction depends on the amount of time she applies her powers.The malfunctions are somewhat random but she can acheive more desired effects with extended periods of time an power application.
History:Coming soon!

Codename:Ammo
Special Skills:Ammo is a highly trained martial artist.He is an excellent marksman and also a gifted weapons designer.Daron carries many,many weapons(non-lethal,we think) on his person at any given time.
Real Name: Daron Woods
Powers:High level precognition.
History: Daron was a regular boy in most aspects.He went to school,had friends,went out etc.Average as can be.Except for two things.His parents are two of the most skilled assassins in the world.Since a very young age,Darons parents trained him in several martial arts and on becoming older,in the use of many,many weapons.(the other thing ofcurse being that he was a mutant). Daron has always been sensitive.Not emotionaly,but rather to the world around him.As he grew older, unusual things began to happen to him.He would succesfully predict the songs on the radio 5 and 6 times in a row.An image of a friend would pop into his head and the said friend would appear.One day,during school,he complained of severe headaches and nausea.He also complained of feeling as if the earth were shaking.As he waited in the nurses office,he began to experience excruciating head pain.He closed his eyes and that was when it happened.His first full scale vision.He saw his school devastated,bodies strewn everywhere.He opened his eyes and found that his nose was bleeding.He told the nurse of what he saw but,ofcourse,she did not believe him and it only made her worry about his sanity.Her reasoning was justified,as his vision never came true.Nonetheless,Darons powers continued to grow,having dead on visions about his grandmother's death,his younger sisters birth and many others,some of which have yet to come true.He told his parents,and they knew what to do.Daron's mother contacted the Professor at the Xavier institute and Daron was sent there.

Part 2 coming soon.
 
Exploding Boy

Age 17
real name: Darwin Dynamite

HISTORY; As a child darwin was extremely normal. Went out for sports had good grades, everything. When he was 12 years old he went out for the juior high football team and made it easily he was one on of the best players. During his frist game he was the star quarterback and there were only four minutes left in the game and they were only down by 2. But before he could even throw the ball his eyes started glowing and he started levatating. after was a loud boom and then abright light. when Dawin woke up everyone was dead and he was in his underwear.

POWERS: darwin can create blast or an explosion from 10 to 100 yards like a giant bomb. All of his skin is blown off and and he becomes more of a giant light but in a human form. He recenttly learned that he could make things blow up with his mind but he has to be able to see what he is blowing up.
 
Ah.Back to civilization after Easter vacation in the country.

Now.Ammo,Part 2.

When Daron arrived at the institute,he made fast friends,with recent transfer Nexus(my character) and Emma Frost(she's a teen),talkative as he was.After his first 2 weeks at the institute ,Daron was placed on a team.Unfortunately,Neither of his friends were on this team.Instead,he ended up on a team with Hellion,Rockslide,Omen and Sovreign(both my chars).This team was seen by many as the premier team at the institute,its members having some of the most developed powers and skills.Daron got off to a poor start,being embarassed as Hellion picked a fight with him,telling him that he was of no worth to the team.Daron simply ignored him.Many at the institute were not even sure what his power was,they would think he was a teleporter as he would use his master stealth skills to arrive unnoticed,or a feral,due to his prowess when fighting.One thing that everyone new,was that he had a lot of weapons(non-lethal).Stun guns,energy blasters,power shortouts along with many other gadgets.Darons quirk was that he be seen pulling out large numbers of weapons and gadgets almost from nowhereduring danger room training.Daron's chance to prove himself would come sooner than expected,as Intro,a teleporter, his own teammate Omen decided that theydisagreed with Xaviers teachings(think Quentin Quire).They stood to crush anyone who opposed them.This resistence consisted of Daron,and surprisingly enough,Hellion,among other students.With his followers keeping the teachers busy outside,Intro,along with Omen entered Prof X's offices to steal sensitive files.He was shocked to see Daron sitting in a chair waiting for them.This meeting was interupted by Hellion,who broke down the doors in most dramatic fashion.Daron simplsat in his chair,staring at all of them.Hellion swore at Daron as he sat motionless,watching,waitng.Hellion occupied himself with Intro,but this proved to be foolish,as Omen attacked and caused his telikinesis to reverse and hold him locked in place.Daron stood.He turn around and fired a shot of concussive force from one of his countless weapons.This shot seemingly fired at nothing would hit an appearing Intro mid teleport and send him reeling into Omen,knocking her unconscious.Daron battled intro with relative ease,predicting his every move.While fighting Intro,Omen awoke,unnoticed(or so she thought).Omen prepared to strike as Daron fired a single shot at the roof,causing rubble to fall on her.This caused her to misfire her powers and hit intro,who then teleported out.He did not teleport back in(to our world).Ever.Daron dealed with Omen quickly and he and Hellion were soon aided by the senior X-men.
2 days later,it was Hellion who suggested Darond codename,seing his true skills for the first time.He had gained Hellion's respect,(not that he really cared)after he saw how effortlessly he defeated the others while he was trapped with his trademark weapons and skills.



Codename:Intro
Real name:Amir Rajnath
Powers:Intro is a teleporter.His power is unique in the fact that he manifests a "trans-dimensional echo" seconds before he teleports.When his attacks are timed properly(and they usually are) it is almost as if u are fighting 2 teleporters instead of one.
 
ghost113 said:
Exploding Boy

Age 17
real name: Darwin Dynamite

HISTORY; As a child darwin was extremely normal. Went out for sports had good grades, everything. When he was 12 years old he went out for the juior high football team and made it easily he was one on of the best players. During his frist game he was the star quarterback and there were only four minutes left in the game and they were only down by 2. But before he could even throw the ball his eyes started glowing and he started levatating. after was a loud boom and then abright light. when Dawin woke up everyone was dead and he was in his underwear.

POWERS: darwin can create blast or an explosion from 10 to 100 yards like a giant bomb. All of his skin is blown off and and he becomes more of a giant light but in a human form. He recenttly learned that he could make things blow up with his mind but he has to be able to see what he is blowing up.
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;) :up:
 
A character of mine thet i have fixed.

Nexus





Name:Louie Smart
Codename:Nexus

Power:Generation and control of Black Holes from very small to extremely large.He enters a 'dark form' while using a his powers.He is also the only (normal)being that can enter a black hole and survive and function.
Can generate "black sphere's" within objects and cause them to suck in on themselves.He can also cause any black hole(generated by him or other wise) to become "white" and expel matter instead of sucking it in.He mainly uses this to increase his mass and size in his 'dark form' or to increases that of other objects.Vice versa for black holes.
History. very small to extremely large.He enters a 'dark form' while using a his powers.He is also the only (normal)being that can enter a black hole and survive and function.Can bend light and make himself or anything else invisible.
Can generate "black sphere's" within objects and cause them to suck in on themselves.He can also cause any black hole(generated by him or other wise) to become "white" and expel matter instead of sucking it in.He mainly uses this to increase his mass and size in his his second form,his spectral form, or to increases that of other objects.Vice versa for black holes.

History

His parents were physicists working on producing small black holes in the lab and inventing technology to use them for scientific purposes(such as storage,transport,time travel etc.).With their first success,(the ivention of limitless,retrievable data storage) his father began to grow power hungry,seeing as they were sitting on billions of dollars.Unknown to his wife,Louie's father began to design black hole weapons and attracted military attention.A secret meeting was set up between him and the military.During this meeting,he displayed the power of his weapons,but this went horribly wrong and caused a severe "space/time distortion".30 scientists and 9 government officials dissapeared.This caused the goverment to cut the funding of all code:Nexus (black hole) projects.The mother became depressed and the father descended into into insanity.When the goverment officials came to oversee thye closedown of the facility,Louie was helping his mother pack up her research.It was then that his father attacked with his black hole ,ripping open a black hole that began to devour everything in range.Louie was no exception.He and his mother,along with all others present were sucked into the hole.He knew he was being torn apart,but felt no pain,and then realised how odd it was that he was still thinking.He began to feel like he was moving in every direction at once,as if he were becoming one with the hole,and mustered every bit of his strength to stop it.Louie ejected from the hole, unsure of what had happened, but was overjoyed that he was alive.This joy quickly faded as he realised that he was the only one who survived.(or so he thought).Louie espcaped the facility before ayone could arrive,and ended up roaming the streets.He quickly drew the attention of the x-men,his new powers difficult to cotrol.Louie became high priority as he could easily cause a disaster.He was found in an abandonned house by Storm and Prof.X,along with Forge who had a temporary device to keep his powers in check.Daron enrolled at the institue and became friends with Emma Frost,and later on Ammo.

Note:The disturbance the X men detected was a small scale space/time distortion.This distortion occured in the abandonned house he was staying in.It caused things that should not be physically possible to happen in the house,and persisted long after Louie was found.This lead many townspeople to dub the house "haunted",and has become somewhat of a mecca for paranormalists.
 
hey guys what up i have a few characters myself, omne i call claws shes a shapechaning mutant that can shift shape into into any kind of big wild cats, or dogs. shes very shy about using her powers at all but her fave thing to do is scare her twin brother shadowwalk whose power is like what specters was. they have beeen alone since age 9, their partents were both killed by mutant haters. both ran away from foster homes because slaws had injured one of the foster partents while the foster father was beating shadowwalk and claws powers came to life at age 13. She stayed in her cat form for at least 2 years she was scared to try to and shage back thinking that she couldnt.


whatare your thoughts their my firdt try.
 
icarusfreak said:
hey guys what up i have a few characters myself, omne i call claws shes a shapechaning mutant that can shift shape into into any kind of big wild cats, or dogs. shes very shy about using her powers at all but her fave thing to do is scare her twin brother shadowwalk whose power is like what specters was. they have beeen alone since age 9, their partents were both killed by mutant haters. both ran away from foster homes because slaws had injured one of the foster partents while the foster father was beating shadowwalk and claws powers came to life at age 13. She stayed in her cat form for at least 2 years she was scared to try to and shage back thinking that she couldnt.


whatare your thoughts their my firdt try.
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Good but there are many grammar mistakes and it's makes it hard to understand.
 
What do u guys think of my characters.Tell me where i need to improve.
 
ok i will be very honest here (takes a very deep breath) ok this is the very first time i have ever let anyone know any of the creations that i have made up. one ive been laughed at alot for making charcters so i kept them inside not letting anyone read them at all. then i started reading the xmen and that was in the 70s. but i still didnt feel right about telling anyone about the creations i had made, it wasnt until now that i feel relaxed enough to tell anyone about them so please remeber that as you are reading them.



#s one and #2 are twins, shadowwalk who can make his own shadow live, and claws is a shape shifting little girl that can chage into any wild cat or dog. these two have been through the foster system, their partents were mutants that were killed when the twins were both 10 by a group of mutant haters that tried to kill them as well. they ran to the police and were placed into he fioster system until thier powers showed, claws powers showed first she was being beaten by her foster father. she changed into a panther and she swiped at him gutting him. she freaked out and both her and her brother ran away right then. they were on their own for 3 years all that time she was in her cat form scared that she couldnt change back.

he is mutant that can make his shdow live but he can also change into a shadow himself and phase through things. He can also speak telepathicly with his twin. Hes alot brasher then his sister.


i dont have names for them real names that is.
 
Summoner

Age 19
real name: Jay Walters

HISTORY: Walters was born and raised in Louisiana. Jay is the inheritence of a $20 million dollar family. He has an older brother who is his parents "dream child". As in the one the family adores. Jay's older brother is also in business. Jay discovered his abilities at a family engagement when he was 12. The children decided to have a race and were assigned animals they were supposed to be. Walters' was a cheetah and needless to say he "destroyed" the competition, as his parents watched from the deck. They were afraid they wouldn't be able to handle Jay so he was sent away to Xavier's mansion.

POWERS: Walters can summon the essence of animals into himself. I.E. Cheetah: Run faster. Toad: Jump higher, etc.

Any good? :confused:
 
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