Create a poem, each person adds 1 line!

[OverMyHead]

The hardest part will be deciding when it is done!

I'll contribute the first line. Here we go:

The sulfurous cloud was like a snake

 

[OverMyHead]

I'll continue:

The sulfurous cloud was like a snake,
a serpent from the depths of hell

 

[jimmy]

Incarnate Solvent Abuse

 

[OverMyHead]

uhmm.. you suppose to rhyme with snake or hell...

Don't you know the 5 word Story?

 

[jimmy]

You didn't say it HAD to rhyme. And if you're going to get technical, what about meter, and stress?

 

[OverMyHead]

It's a freaking poem!

 

[DarthRekal]

the consequences i assume were all at stake

 

[DarthRekal]

edit

damnit make up your mind OVER... i edited cause i was gonna use your other line..LOL

 

[OverMyHead]

The sulfurous cloud was like a snake,
a serpent from the depths of hell
the consequences i assume were all at stake
from the depths my mind does dwell

But what do it mean to be the Satan incarnate?

plz continue

 

[DarthRekal]

what qualities portrayed

 

[OverMyHead]

I think it would be better to quote from the actual poem, and then, add on to it.

 

[Batty for Bats!]

OverMyHead's games suck ass

 

[DarthRekal]

I think it would be better to quote from the actual poem, and then, add on to it.

gotcha

 

[DarthRekal]

OverMyHead's games suck ass

quoth the BATS! this thread should ye pass

t:

 

[DarthRekal]

The sulfurous cloud was like a snake,
a serpent from the depths of hell
the consequences i assume were all at stake
from the depths my mind does dwell


But what do it mean to be the Satan incarnate?
what qualities portrayed

 

[Kritish]

Mods, somebody ban overmyhead from making threads.

 

[Canadian Rider]

OverMyHead's games suck ass

 

[Kevin]

The sulfurous cloud was like a snake,
a serpent from the depths of hell
the consequences i assume were all at stake
from the depths my mind does dwell
But what do it mean to be the Satan incarnate?
what qualities portrayed

Is the hell I lead my curse or Fate?

 

[Canadian Rider]

Mods, somebody ban overmyhead from making threads.

Agreed. If you are going to make threads with unknown rules ... well you might as well jump into hulk threads and leave the rest of us alone!

 

[Kritish]

Agreed. If you are going to make threads with unknown rules ... well you might as well jump into hulk threads and leave the rest of us alone!

The posters in the Hulk Forum are like the reavers in Serenity.

OMH suggested Bellucci was a man!

 

[Kevin]

OMH, go back and EDIT your first post with some rules.

 

[OverMyHead]

You and the next 2 people will determine that, by what you post. You could turn it into a formal poem with a rhyme scheme, or you could take it in a different direction. Set the standard, see what happens.

 

[Kevin]

...WHAT?

 

[OverMyHead]

Just follow the flow.

When the poem becomes too long, we start with another brand new, fresh line.

Oh--and it has to ryhme.

 

[jimmy]

Don't try it. I tried to go all Walt Whitman, and she went all MLA on my ass.