Don't be harsh

[Road Warrior]

My first film:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dljwYQAMuHQ

It's a piece of crap! But, you know what they say..."live and learn."

 

[Catman]

It atleast had potential.

 

[muertevilla]

what is the title of the movie

 

[jaguarr]

The intro was a little hamfisted and some of the acting was a little stiff, but all in all...not that bad for your first time out.

jag

 

[Catman]

hamfisted

First time I hear of that word.

 

[jaguarr]

First time I hear of that word.

Are you blaming me for your inexperience?

jag

 

[Catman]

Are you blaming me for your inexperience?

Um...no! Sorry if I'm not familiar with the word hamfisted.

 

[BRUTAL]

I see a lot of potential in there, I don't really want to go into a lot of detail as it may seem "harsh" but keep at it.

 

[jaguarr]

Um...no! Sorry if I'm not familiar with the word hamfisted.

Well don't blame me for it, son. Google is your friend!

jag

 

[BRUTAL]

Hamfisted = "Clumsy"

I don't know why jag is being a d*****-bag about it.

 

[Catman]

Well don't blame me for it, son. Google is your friend!

jag

Jag hates me cause I own a PC.

 

[jaguarr]

I don't hate anyone. Catman's just a lot of fun to tease.

jag

 

[Catman]

Hamfisted = "Clumsy"

Oh, I see! Yeah...I guess the intro is hamfisted. I would have used fast-paced...but okay.

 

[AndThePickles]

My first film:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dljwYQAMuHQ

It's a piece of crap! But, you know what they say..."live and learn."

For your first piece of work, not bad.

The first 30 seconds just seemed like a crazy, super fast random frame though.

I liked the Moonlight Sonata sequence.

Cops are getting younger and younger these days, huh?

Good first try, keep on filming!

 

[Catman]

Cops are getting younger and younger these days, huh?

I met a young female cop the other day. No wait...that was a stripper! Nevermind!

 

[Kevin]

meh. not bad, lost me around the end.

 

[Road Warrior]

For your first piece of work, not bad.

Thanks!

 

[Lackey]

it needs to make more sense and the first line is corny... visually it was good, you got that down.

 

[Kipobe]

I didn't watch it because Lackey didn't give it two thumbs up.

I will still however be willing to review it.

 

[OverMyHead]

Absolutely Hilarious!! Well done.

No! NO! NOO! hahahah

Thought you were going to hang yourself with that blind.

 

[Catman]

visually it was good, you got that down.

Yeah, that was the only good thing! Atleast he has the technical skills. Which, in fact, is all you need in Hollywood! The studio will provide a writer, so you don't have to worry about that.

 

[Mike_D202]

Hamfisted:(ham-fist-ed)-Where one would roll up a piece of ham around his fist and shove it up the butt.

 

[Catman]

Okay.

 

[Mike_D202]

I got it from google.

 

[Kevin]

Hamfisted:(ham-fist-ed)-Where one would roll up a piece of ham around his fist and shove it up the butt.

Oh, what the holy ****?