Update 14 August 2009
Long Time No Update. Ladies and gentlemen, I am proud to present THE VERY FIRST ROUGH DRAFT TREATMENT!
I give you... DR. PHOBIA'S HOUSE OF FEAR.
The Entrance
Guests enter through the double doors of the house, haunted by the sounds within. Before them, in the darkness, is a portal made of blood-stained sheets. Bloody hand-prints cover it, and written in the center is WHAT ARE YOU AFRAID OF? The guests push through the portal and further into the house. Glowing arrows on the floors lead the guests through each scene.
TormenT
Cryptic chants surround the guests. Before them is a young woman in torn clothing, tied between two pillars. She screams and pleads for help, warning the guests to turn back. The guests continue past her and under a crudely constructed arch, hanging from which are all manner of human arms and legs, still dripping blood. Pushing past the grisly display and find an even worse scene; Lined up along the sides of the guests path are red-robed Cultists, still and silent. At the end of the path is a sacrificial altar, upon which is tied a screaming victim. Standing over him is the High Priest, Silas. The room is lit by flickering torches hanging from the ceiling. As the guests approach, the Highest brings down a knife and cuts open the victims chest. He reaches inside and pulls out the still-living victims heart. At this point, one of the Cultists leaps at the guests. The guests continue , turning left at the altar.
Insanity
The guests enter a room lit by a flickering strobe light. Large pieces of white construction paper cover the walls, scrawled on with finger-paints and crayons. A TV in the corner plays old cartoons, creating an unsettling music in the back-ground. Tables fill the room, covered in a variety of board games and puzzles. The room is filled with inmates in a whole manner of activities. The inmates are completely random and insane. Theres no telling who or when theyll attack. Rebecca leads her family in their attack until you pass through the portal into the next room; another ripped and dripping wet sheet.
Eternal Monsters of Filmland
The hall you enter is black on one side with a row of doors on the other. In each door is a different movie slasher. The first door is pitch black with a strobe going off. Jason Voorhees lurches out to make a grab or a slice with his machete. The second door is also black with a strobe. Freddy Kruger attacks from here. The third door leads to a pitch black room. A light flashes from a helmet as the Miner (My Bloody Valentine) attacks, chasing the guests into the next room.
The Dead Have Risen
The guests find themselves in a narrow pathway bordered by chain-link. On either side, a number of zombies attack the fence relentlessly. The guests finally make it out from between the fencing, only to be attacked by a last zombie, free of his confinement. He chases the guests into the next room.
Creepy Crawlies
The guests enter a narrow hallway, lit by a flickering strobe. The sounds of skittering and crawling are everywhere. The light illuminates the walls covered in all manner of insects and arachnids. Spiders and snakes hang from the ceiling, writhing and crawling. As the guests proceed, they can hear and feel crunches beneath their feet. They escape the hallway, passing under an arch with dangling spider webs, only to enter a far more dangerous setting.
Bloody Bill's Butcher Shop
The flickering industrial lighting lets the guests know that this is one place they should not be. Their attention is grabbed by the very large Bloody Bill, screaming and wielding a huge cleaver. As they pass his counter, another butcher lurches at the guests. A third butcher bursts from a pile of random body parts. The guests continue to rush through the room, and are herded outside by a final, masked butcher wielding a chainsaw. Little do the guests realize how foreboding this final scare is
The Circus of Slashers
Now outside, the guests are guided into a large tent painted in bright, happy colors. A sinister ringmaster lures the guests into the tents entrance, leading into a trap. The guests are immediately set upon by blade-wielding clowns that laugh wildly as they attack, the guests turn a corner and run straight into chainsaw wielding clown. He cackles and chases them out of the tent.
The Gauntlet
The Guests freeze. The glowing arrows stop, leading into a thick fog bank. Slowly and nervously, the guests head into the fog and are set-upon by a random assortment of the fears that they experienced in the house. The monsters chase the guests toward the end. Sometimes, Dr. Phobia himself can be sighted in the fog, his ghastly eye visible. At last, the guests escape the fog. They have faced their fears
and survived the house.
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Next Update will probably be the start of Dr. Phobia's backstory.