ThePenguin
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How's Up, Up, and Away?
Kevin Roegele said:Just finished reading this, and while it's well written with some memorable moments (Superman walking in on a woman in the bath and her attempts to seduce him, Supes hearing Lois being shot and flying around the world in three seconds to catch her), it's not really a standalone story. The villains are not charaterised properly and we don't see what happens to them, the whole sexual tension thing is not wrapped up, and it ends on a cliffhanger.
ThePenguin said:How's Up, Up, and Away?
Bruce_Wayne29 said:I thought that one was good but could have been better, I'm hoping Camelo Falls will be even better. This one had a kind of SR type story but with the end result being alot better.