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Mr. Credible

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i searched, but didn't find anything on these quirky, yet deep little japanese poems. they're so much fun, and so easy to write. you almost always come up with something that sounds very deep and meaningful, even if you didn't mean to. quite unlike more 'traditional' forms of poetry, which often come across as really gay and/or emo, because, well, most people just suck at it, but think they're actually good.

i find myself counting syllables sometimes in my head, seeing what phrases or events in my day i can squeeze into the parameters.

for those who don't know, its 3 lines: 5 syllables, then 7, then 5 again.

so, um... yeah. anyone else do these?
 
they're bloody addictive... for me at least. i write like, 3 or 4 a day, usually. i just don't write them down, is all.
 
deadpool:


I hate broccoli
And think it totally sucks
Why is it not meat?
 
Boss thinks I'm working
Surfing the internet instead
Hope I don't get canned

Raining like crazy,
sucks cuz I was headed out
cancelled lunch for SHH

My first try :hyper:
 
Doing a haiku
does not have to make sense now
refrigerator

thank you, I know I'm a regular poet.
 
yes!! more!

all great. i love them.




here's a few of many i did:





drinking... drinking hard.
how many drinks have i drunk?
3? 12? i've lost count.

the morning gazette
bringer of good... and evil
i step over you




they're so random. you've got to love them.
 
Searched for haiku threads
I found this one and bumped it
Let's all be smexy
 
My gums kinda hurt
Today I had my teeth cleaned
Dentist: get new job.:cmad:

Yeah, it's a stretch.:o
 
I'm actually not
I just figured the Air Force
Has better dentists.:o
 
Psh, ours suck like your's
My friend's mouth got sliced by one
That dentist got punched
 
I'm hungry right now
I want a philly cheese steak
I'll eat cereal :(
 
Urges manifest
Quickly run to the bathroom
Release is heaven
 
Sometimes I wonder
If a good pee is as good
As an orgasm
 
left right, left right, left
right kill. Left right, left right, left
right, i think I will
 

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