House of Arcturus

[Arcturus]

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[Eggyman]

I really like your stuff, man. Fomalhaut was very poetic in some passages

The venom story is good, too. One lil thing I noticed - just a slight technicality. It looks like it's been overlooked rather than you not knowing the general rule. In the paragraph that starts with 'Betty Brant rolled her eyes as she left the office . . .' you have joined two paragraphs together. No biggie. The first half should end with what Brock is thinking. It needs a new paragraph really once Robbie is speaking.

Great work man!

 

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[The Navigator]

This actually makes me want to watch Spidey 3. Very nice, my friend.

 

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[The Navigator]

I like how he notices the power and confidence.

 

[Arcturus]

Thanks for the response, RS, I appreciate it!

Eddie Brock noticing Spider-Man's power and confidence was something I wanted to establish early in this story, because later, when he becomes something other then human, he'll really abuse these powers.

 

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[red hood 4]

This has got to be one of the best fanfics i have ever viewed when will you upload more. will it carry on after the film ended

 

[Arcturus]

Thankyou for the kind comments. I am currently working on a the next chapter, but I am taking my time on it. My schedule has suddenly become a little more cramped then I anticipated, but it will be posted sooner then later. As for the ending, at this point in time, I am undecided. I have two ideas of how I want it to end.

 

[red hood 4]

you could always do both I look forward to how you portray Eddies thoughts as the suit is blown up

 

[red hood 4]

Oh have you checked out my Venom script?

 

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[Eggyman]

Fantastic mate

I'm really looking forward to the next encounter

 

[red hood 4]

Magnificent just brilliant what part will you be writing next?

Eddie and Gwen should get together at the end of this.

 

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[red hood 4]

Bloody brilliant. Does he become Venom next chapter?

 

[The Navigator]

Very nice. I love watching the gradual slide. The fatherly touch is a nice one.

 

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[red hood 4]

And so it begins brilliant stuff. If Eddie/Venom gets out of the explosion alive in your story will you write a sequel with Venom?

 

[The Navigator]

Nice--Venom is here! I like how you wrote his point of view.