how could I make this custom shirt better?

[Ozymandias]

This might not be the right place to put this, but I'm making a custom shirt online. This is what I have so far:

Any suggestions on what I might add to it?

 

[BatSpider]

is that you?
wow, if it is
cool shirt

 

[Boom]

It looks fine like that, actually.

Maybe put the bat logo on the back of the neck, with "7.18.08" underneath.

 

[hegele]

didn't jon meyer get that shirt in the mail from WB?

 

[Luchastyle]

same picture, not the same shirt though. this looks like a cafepress shirt. until cafepress realizes it's a copyrighted image.

 

[Ozymandias]

It's from zazzle.com, and no it's not me. Think they'll make the shirt? or will the copyright issues stop it?

 

[Luchastyle]

i dont know. i think they wont know so i think they will make it. as long as you do it before those images are all over the place

 

[Ozymandias]

I think I'll put that “I believe that whatever doesn’t kill you simply makes you stranger” quote on the back. That should top it off nicely.

 

[TheBatman072]

Man, I really hope they mass-produce these shirts.

 

[d.k.]

I would buy that in an instant
If you post that for sale i'd totally get it

 

[CaptainClown]

I would add blood splatter across it or some off color splatter to make it not just look like a plain white shirt

 

[Ozymandias]

well, I would add the blood, but I wouldn't be able to wear it at my school if I did. This is how the back turned out:

 

[CaptainClown]

well you could vary it up and not put blood but add that warhol look and put purple and green splatters on it mostly purple splats

 

[Redd]

Yeah try and make the shirt have a little more grunge. Like it's a old shirt kind thing.

 

[Commodore Schmidlapp]

I like simplicity, I would just want the face on it, I don't need the tag line.

 

[CaptainClown]

ya you can drop the tag line

 

[DRUMM3RBOY]

ya you can drop the tag line

yeah i was thinking the same but its still awesome

 

[rizzo51]

Any suggestions on what I might add to it?

Can't go wrong with kittens, everything could use more kittens

 

[CaptainClown]

haha I would def wear it if it just had a random kitten in there

 

[Batman137]

i wouldnt change a thing, good job!

 

[d.k.]

i 2nd that

 

[NikkiSixx]

Me personally would loose the writing and have just the face....but thats just me

 

[d.k.]

I think the writing is nice

 

[BubbaGump]

I like the eyes.

Spoiler

Of the model, that is!

 

[tomstoyz2]

I think it looks great just the way it is but I do like the "blood splatter" idea.