I made a comic book...

[TheCorpulent1]

It was for my class. It's only 11 pages, not a full-size comic. Judge it as harshly as you see fit, but keep in mind that it was done over the course of about a week and a half, total.

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v71/thecorpulent1/Comic/cover.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v71/thecorpulent1/Comic/p1.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v71/thecorpulent1/Comic/p2.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v71/thecorpulent1/Comic/p3.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v71/thecorpulent1/Comic/p4.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v71/thecorpulent1/Comic/p5.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v71/thecorpulent1/Comic/p6.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v71/thecorpulent1/Comic/p7.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v71/thecorpulent1/Comic/p8.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v71/thecorpulent1/Comic/p9.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v71/thecorpulent1/Comic/p10.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v71/thecorpulent1/Comic/p11.jpg

 

[Elijya]

damn, not bad corpy. I didn't know you had talent

 

[eXperiment]

Me either.

 

[ampersand]

 

[Archangel]

I remember when you used to frequent these parts quite often Corpy, you should come back every once in a while with more greatness.

 

[The Last Meatbag]

Awesome man

 

[The Question]

Art's pretty good, man.

 

[Silver Sable]

Wicked.Great stuff

 

[TheCorpulent1]

Thanks, everyone. I drew it to scale on normal 8.5" x 11" paper and I had to condense it all into 11 pages because I couldn't physically draw more than that in the time I had. So I've been thinking I might revisit it, expand it to a full 22 or 25 pages so the story works better, and draw it on actual 11" x 17" bristol boards to get the whole comic illustrating experience.

 

[yenaled]

Great stuff Corpy, I especially liked the GL poster.

 

[hojcat]

Very nice!

 

[Zolland]

liked it. nice work.

 

[Harlekin]

Some damn nice work there Corpster. Loved the little comic homages there too.

 

[Asteroid-Man]

thats stuff's great!

 

[Wilhelm-Scream]

whoah

 

[Nightwing 52]

Nicely done.

 

[WeaponZ2]

Neat little story.

 

[Ultimate Movie-Man]

That cover looks awesome

But you lost me once I saw the vampire...i'll read it eventually

 

[TheCorpulent1]

The vampire's only on the first page. I thought starting the comic through the sketches of the protagonist would be cool.

 

[Darthphere]

Awesome stuff.

 

[The BatDude]

sweet the only wrong with the story is the ending doesn't feel completed other then that it was good

 

[TheCorpulent1]

Yeah, I pretty much rushed the ending. I wanted a more climactic fight sequence, but I had to go all Bendis on it and cut it down to like 80% setup and 20% action. I would've stretched it out to around 13 or 14 pages and included a splash page if I had time.

 

[Ultimate Movie-Man]

I actually read it an dit's great. Wonderful art too! Why arent you in the business?!

 

[LadyVader]

I read the first page:
Transilvania
Dracula

He did a comic book about Dracula and he didn't tell me? ME OF ALL PEOPLE!

Needless to say my fears were soon laid to rest. It was a nice coming of age story and I really liked the bit about "the band responds to your desires, not your wishes". That was a cool twist. You should really expand the story.

 

[Xofenroht]

Really good stuff man. I never come into this part of the thread, but I quite enjoyed your comic.