I made a comic book...

Discussion in 'Fan Art' started by TheCorpulent1, Apr 25, 2006.

  1. Elijya Registered

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    damn, not bad corpy. I didn't know you had talent
     
  2. eXperiment ...gone wrong.

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  4. Archangel Emergency & I

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    I remember when you used to frequent these parts quite often Corpy, you should come back every once in a while with more greatness.
     
  5. The Last Meatbag Registered

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  6. The Question Objectivism doesn't work.

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    Art's pretty good, man.
     
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    Wicked.Great stuff :up:
     
  8. TheCorpulent1 SHAZAM!

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    Thanks, everyone. I drew it to scale on normal 8.5" x 11" paper and I had to condense it all into 11 pages because I couldn't physically draw more than that in the time I had. So I've been thinking I might revisit it, expand it to a full 22 or 25 pages so the story works better, and draw it on actual 11" x 17" bristol boards to get the whole comic illustrating experience.
     
  9. yenaled 3X2(9YZ)4A

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    Great stuff Corpy, I especially liked the GL poster.
     
  10. hojcat Registered

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    Very nice!
     
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    liked it. nice work.
     
  12. Harlekin Business

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    Some damn nice work there Corpster. Loved the little comic homages there too.
     
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    thats stuff's great!
     
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  15. Nightwing 52 Things change

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    Neat little story.
     
  17. Ultimate Movie-Man Registered

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    That cover looks awesome :eek:

    But you lost me once I saw the vampire...i'll read it eventually
     
  18. TheCorpulent1 SHAZAM!

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    The vampire's only on the first page. I thought starting the comic through the sketches of the protagonist would be cool.
     
  19. Darthphere Kneel before 'Drox!

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    Awesome stuff.
     
  20. The BatDude Dopest Dope

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    sweet :) :up: the only wrong with the story is the ending doesn't feel completed other then that it was good
     
  21. TheCorpulent1 SHAZAM!

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    Yeah, I pretty much rushed the ending. I wanted a more climactic fight sequence, but I had to go all Bendis on it and cut it down to like 80% setup and 20% action. I would've stretched it out to around 13 or 14 pages and included a splash page if I had time.
     
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    I actually read it an dit's great. Wonderful art too! Why arent you in the business?!
     
  23. LadyVader Smile like you mean it.

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    I read the first page:
    Transilvania
    Dracula

    He did a comic book about Dracula and he didn't tell me? ME OF ALL PEOPLE!

    Needless to say my fears were soon laid to rest. It was a nice coming of age story and I really liked the bit about "the band responds to your desires, not your wishes". That was a cool twist. You should really expand the story.
     
  24. Xofenroht The Mad Moreno

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    Really good stuff man. I never come into this part of the thread, but I quite enjoyed your comic.
     

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