moonknight

[ghrendal]

Decided to redraw these....


page 1

page 2

page 3

page4

page 5

 

[Shuley]

storytelling is choppy...Mcfarlane an influance of yours?

 

[Green Goblin 1964]

damn....nice....

 

[Mee]

Very nice.


Careful though, no nudity allowed on the Hype.

 

[Mattchew]

page 4 is may fave! great stuff!

 

[MadMaximus]

Is she yawning in the first panel of page 5? If not, it's the most bored looking orgasm I ever seen....


Dig the rest of the stuff, but I think the first page is the most solid. Excellent pacing, dig the angles. It's like a refined Ben Templesmith. The other pages look a little hurried, but still look good. I'm not exactly sure what happened to the guy on page 4 though. Too many things pop in my head for what happened, for me to feel satisfied with the flow of the story.

 

[MaskedManJRK]

Is she yawning in the first panel of page 5? If not, it's the most bored looking orgasm I ever seen....


Dig the rest of the stuff, but I think the first page is the most solid. Excellent pacing, dig the angles. It's like a refined Ben Templesmith. The other pages look a little hurried, but still look good. I'm not exactly sure what happened to the guy on page 4 though. Too many things pop in my head for what happened, for me to feel satisfied with the flow of the story.

Yeah, that's the only real weak-spot (besides the aforementioned weak-looking orgasm)--maybe some smaller panels of a knife slicing, blood spilling about and stuff, then showing the guy drop to the floor with the moon carved in him. I dunno, just a suggestion.

 

[forfeit]

Great artwork! I know very little about moonknight and so not sure who the undead dude is though hahaha

 

[Juggertha]

Page 5 be the weakest.

It's funny, because with the facial expressions, it has thepotential to be the strongest page... but it's just missing the mark a bit.

 

[Jack Rabbit]

Always like seeing stuff from you.

Page 2 is particularly nice, I love how you can see his mouth open under his mask.

Amazing work.

 

[RAMORE]

love it little confused did he brand that guys forehead?

 

[ghrendal]

Thanks alot guys for the crits and comments. Mk carves the moon in the dudes head. THe points about panels and expressions were invaluable thanks for take the time to look at it and comment..

Ted