Elongated_Yen7
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This is a fanfilm I've been pulling my money to make.. I have most of the locations and actors.. here is the basic Out:
Edward Nygma was mentally abused as a child
and his parent really adored his sister I mean loved her.
so.. when his sister dies of AIDs his parents kill themselves.
and that drives him completely crazy.
he works at the first gotham bank
Now.. Edward is fired.
and devises a way of robbing the place.. but since he has to tell the truth in some way
he leaves Riddles.. Hence.. Riddler.
but he is a smart guy
so he goes to get a Job at Wayne Enterprises...
Batman is all up and gitty because he needs to solve these Riddles.
but he takes the interview with Ed.
Ed wearing a green tie.. is asked by Bruce Wayne the famous
: "Tell me Ed, do you like the color green?" to Which he Replies
"Mister Wayne.. Green is considered by many to be the color of money.. and as many great philosophers have said.. Money is the root of all evil.. I am no evil man."
Ed and Wayne become friends
and Batman hunt down the Joker in a back alley
and captures him.
Bruce Wayne invites Edward to a party were they talk for a little bit..
but edward then gets a hunch..
what if he could solve the greatest Riddle of all..
Who is Batman..
So.. he thinks about it..
there is only 3 millionaires in Gotham
one is old
one is Crippled.
but then theres Bruce Wayne..
who just so happens to own one of the largest arms companies in the world.
so he goes to his computer
logs in
and find that some prototypes are missing
Edward figures this out
so he goes to Wayne Manor.
The Riddler uses an IP changer from his home computer
and hacks into the Gotham police record
to erase the Riddles.
he just so happens to be using the IP of Waynes personal computer.
so they trace the Log
and they arest him for being the Riddler.
after finding some planted evidence.
Wayne is in the cell with the Joker..
they start talking
and the Joker tells him about being the redhood.
he also hints at knowing he is in a fake universe.
but the Riddler strikes again..
another bank
and the Bat signal is turn on..
and it comes in threw the bars of the cell.
Bruce Wayne stands up and looks right at it.
Ed is in the Wayne Garden where he is comfronted by Alfred..
Ed tells him he is sorry and he punchs alfred.
Bruce Wayne gets ahold of an old friend
well he calls Jean Paul Valley.
and he tells him about the batcave..
so Valley goes to the woods near Wayne Manor
and enters the Cave from the dry well.
where he comfronts Ed.
they fist it out.
and Ed flees.
Valley then go to the Jokers old hidout
Bruce Wayne is then freed because the Riddler struck again..
and well he can't be him now can he?
he goes to Wayne Manor and finds a note..
a Riddle.
but its says that Alfred is kidnapped
and Vikki Vale is next.
so Bruce Wayne goes to the cave
and finds one spare Batsuit.
Valley is just plane out dealing with everything
from drugs to kingpins
so Bruce and Valley get into a fight
and then they decide to team up and go against the Riddler.
who as it turns out
plans to Bomb the Gotham Trade Building..
the bank robberies were just a way of side tracking everyone...
Valley sacrifices himself to stop the bomb
and Batman and Riddler get into a fight
when Batman asks the Riddler "Ed, Why would do this..?"
and the Riddler Replies "Edward Nygma was weak.. I'm the Riddler.."
and he reveals that he was working with Terrorists
to start a war
as he will say
"What is crucial to human devolopment.. but yet mankind fears it?"
Answer: War.
and then
batman punches the Riddler in the head
really hard
he starts bleeding
and he takes off his mask
and says
"Bruce.. I've never for this to happen.. it was only a game.. I can't figure out.. what is wrong with me.."
and the he is starts crying
"I need help.. I don't want to be this creature.. will you please help me?"
the Riddler is a slipt personality of Edward Nygma
after years of abuse
he has become a skitzophranic
Edward is carted away to Arkham
and the last scene will show Bruce Wayne, Alfred, Jack Ryder, and Vikki Vale at Valleys funneral.
after they walk away
and say that he was a great friend.. and he did a great thing for this city..
they get in a car and drive away..
but a man and a Duster Jacket walks over to the grave
and its Jean Paul..
he glares into the camera.. and the Bat signal can be seen behind him
Edward Nygma was mentally abused as a child
and his parent really adored his sister I mean loved her.
so.. when his sister dies of AIDs his parents kill themselves.
and that drives him completely crazy.
he works at the first gotham bank
Now.. Edward is fired.
and devises a way of robbing the place.. but since he has to tell the truth in some way
he leaves Riddles.. Hence.. Riddler.
but he is a smart guy
so he goes to get a Job at Wayne Enterprises...
Batman is all up and gitty because he needs to solve these Riddles.
but he takes the interview with Ed.
Ed wearing a green tie.. is asked by Bruce Wayne the famous
: "Tell me Ed, do you like the color green?" to Which he Replies
"Mister Wayne.. Green is considered by many to be the color of money.. and as many great philosophers have said.. Money is the root of all evil.. I am no evil man."
Ed and Wayne become friends
and Batman hunt down the Joker in a back alley
and captures him.
Bruce Wayne invites Edward to a party were they talk for a little bit..
but edward then gets a hunch..
what if he could solve the greatest Riddle of all..
Who is Batman..
So.. he thinks about it..
there is only 3 millionaires in Gotham
one is old
one is Crippled.
but then theres Bruce Wayne..
who just so happens to own one of the largest arms companies in the world.
so he goes to his computer
logs in
and find that some prototypes are missing
Edward figures this out
so he goes to Wayne Manor.
The Riddler uses an IP changer from his home computer
and hacks into the Gotham police record
to erase the Riddles.
he just so happens to be using the IP of Waynes personal computer.
so they trace the Log
and they arest him for being the Riddler.
after finding some planted evidence.
Wayne is in the cell with the Joker..
they start talking
and the Joker tells him about being the redhood.
he also hints at knowing he is in a fake universe.
but the Riddler strikes again..
another bank
and the Bat signal is turn on..
and it comes in threw the bars of the cell.
Bruce Wayne stands up and looks right at it.
Ed is in the Wayne Garden where he is comfronted by Alfred..
Ed tells him he is sorry and he punchs alfred.
Bruce Wayne gets ahold of an old friend
well he calls Jean Paul Valley.
and he tells him about the batcave..
so Valley goes to the woods near Wayne Manor
and enters the Cave from the dry well.
where he comfronts Ed.
they fist it out.
and Ed flees.
Valley then go to the Jokers old hidout
Bruce Wayne is then freed because the Riddler struck again..
and well he can't be him now can he?
he goes to Wayne Manor and finds a note..
a Riddle.
but its says that Alfred is kidnapped
and Vikki Vale is next.
so Bruce Wayne goes to the cave
and finds one spare Batsuit.
Valley is just plane out dealing with everything
from drugs to kingpins
so Bruce and Valley get into a fight
and then they decide to team up and go against the Riddler.
who as it turns out
plans to Bomb the Gotham Trade Building..
the bank robberies were just a way of side tracking everyone...
Valley sacrifices himself to stop the bomb
and Batman and Riddler get into a fight
when Batman asks the Riddler "Ed, Why would do this..?"
and the Riddler Replies "Edward Nygma was weak.. I'm the Riddler.."
and he reveals that he was working with Terrorists
to start a war
as he will say
"What is crucial to human devolopment.. but yet mankind fears it?"
Answer: War.
and then
batman punches the Riddler in the head
really hard
he starts bleeding
and he takes off his mask
and says
"Bruce.. I've never for this to happen.. it was only a game.. I can't figure out.. what is wrong with me.."
and the he is starts crying
"I need help.. I don't want to be this creature.. will you please help me?"
the Riddler is a slipt personality of Edward Nygma
after years of abuse
he has become a skitzophranic
Edward is carted away to Arkham
and the last scene will show Bruce Wayne, Alfred, Jack Ryder, and Vikki Vale at Valleys funneral.
after they walk away
and say that he was a great friend.. and he did a great thing for this city..
they get in a car and drive away..
but a man and a Duster Jacket walks over to the grave
and its Jean Paul..
he glares into the camera.. and the Bat signal can be seen behind him
Gotta love this move, especially since I am Jean Paul Valley
