Karem-Knight
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Yeah I made this thread for my short film scripts, And I hate to sound like a douce with out saying much bla oh hell with it here's one that I call Blank.
INT. A small white room
Jack is lying down on the floor wearing nothing but white and has a shaved head he wakes up looking at an empty white room, He gets up and takes a look around the room has no doors we cut as he looks Left, Right up, down and in front.
He touches the wall in front like a mime would, he doesnt feel anything
He touches the ground with his feet and stomps on it with his feet, and kneels down to touch the floor.
He lies down front flat and then gets up and stares around in a dizzy sort of way he
runs to the back part of the room realizing the doors arent there
Voice: Strange isnt it
Jack turns around we cut behind to see a man wearing a black suit with a Dark blue tie.
Jack: Who are you, Where am I?
The man walks over to Jack
Man: Dont worry young Jack, Sit down
Jack sits in a white chair He looks up to see the man now wearing a turquoise tie
Jack: Who are you?
Man: Call me the house keeper, Anyway Jack as you can see this is a very unique and cozy place and
Jack gets up.
Jack: How do you know my name
The man turns around wearing a red tie
House keeper: Jack please sit.
Jack: No tell me right now!
House keeper: Jack you are quite privileged, I am shielding you.
Jack: What?
Housekeeper: Shielding you from very worrying things in your own little room.
He has a drink in his hands and offers it to Jack.
House keeper: Drink?
Jack: What, What the hells going on?
House keeper: Jack, Were isolating you from the danger of the world
Jack: What danger?
Housekeeper: For you not to be the next person to die in the next 4 seconds
Jack: Youre going to kill me?
Housekeeper: No!
Jack: But, But why am I here, Is this a dream?
House keeper: Depends if you stay or not.
Jack: Well get me out of here
Housekeeper: Jack, You havent listened to its wonders yet.
Jack runs up to the man but as he runs the man disappears, He turns around in a rush, He turns around hes no longer there.
He breathes heavily for a minute and looks around and falls to the ground.
Blank
INT. A small white room
Jack is lying down on the floor wearing nothing but white and has a shaved head he wakes up looking at an empty white room, He gets up and takes a look around the room has no doors we cut as he looks Left, Right up, down and in front.
He touches the wall in front like a mime would, he doesnt feel anything
He touches the ground with his feet and stomps on it with his feet, and kneels down to touch the floor.
He lies down front flat and then gets up and stares around in a dizzy sort of way he
runs to the back part of the room realizing the doors arent there
Voice: Strange isnt it
Jack turns around we cut behind to see a man wearing a black suit with a Dark blue tie.
Jack: Who are you, Where am I?
The man walks over to Jack
Man: Dont worry young Jack, Sit down
Jack sits in a white chair He looks up to see the man now wearing a turquoise tie
Jack: Who are you?
Man: Call me the house keeper, Anyway Jack as you can see this is a very unique and cozy place and
Jack gets up.
Jack: How do you know my name
The man turns around wearing a red tie
House keeper: Jack please sit.
Jack: No tell me right now!
House keeper: Jack you are quite privileged, I am shielding you.
Jack: What?
Housekeeper: Shielding you from very worrying things in your own little room.
He has a drink in his hands and offers it to Jack.
House keeper: Drink?
Jack: What, What the hells going on?
House keeper: Jack, Were isolating you from the danger of the world
Jack: What danger?
Housekeeper: For you not to be the next person to die in the next 4 seconds
Jack: Youre going to kill me?
Housekeeper: No!
Jack: But, But why am I here, Is this a dream?
House keeper: Depends if you stay or not.
Jack: Well get me out of here
Housekeeper: Jack, You havent listened to its wonders yet.
Jack runs up to the man but as he runs the man disappears, He turns around in a rush, He turns around hes no longer there.
He breathes heavily for a minute and looks around and falls to the ground.