Hype Survivor SHH Survivor 30: Big Brother (Week 6) - A Redneck's Point of View

[JewishHobbit]

6 way tie. You're all up for nomination.

 

[The Squirrel]

I'm completely drunk with excitement.

 

[Specter313]

Not just completely drunk?

 

[KALEL114]

I'm so drunk with excitement, that I am swearing off excitement forever. Although, I know that's a lie.

 

[Specter313]

Absolut Excitement.

 

[KALEL114]

Haha!

 

[JewishHobbit]

I'm bored

 

[Byrd Man]

Well what are we waiting on?

 

[KALEL114]

Seriously, can our amazing hosts please update us on where we are in the judging process? Thanks in advance.

 

[enterthemadness]

Then post the reeeeeeesults, sloppy de Lou!

 

[JewishHobbit]

Spider-Fan's who we're waiting on.

I've not received any judgements so I'm assuming he forgot to tell them to send them to us both.

 

[enterthemadness]

I'm just ad, font mind my postings, JH and SF left me no food in the jury room!

 

[JewishHobbit]

I think Immortal's drunk with something too

 

[enterthemadness]

No, just mad in real life and using iPhone.

Why is this door locked? And why does this jury room kook a walk in closet?

 

[KALEL114]

Should we be concerned for SF? Has he fallen into a well or something? Should we send Lassie?

 

[Spider-Nerd]

I have a life. Law school is ruining it. I'm finishing it up tonight. Grrrrrrrr.

 

[Spider-Fan]

I am sorry for the wait. Results have been slow. But, there will be results tonight. I guarantee it.

I blame the weekend. Everyone seemed to be busy...curse lives

 

[Spider-Fan]

Results will be posted by 9pm. That's my cut off for judging.

 

[Spider-Fan]

We've waited long enough...results time!!!

I want to note before I start, I only got judging from 1 person: Marx. But, I decided to serve as a judge for this challenge. However, I didn't get 1 set of results I was told I'd get yet, but since I am going on 2 days of waiting, I am just doing it with the 2 sets of judging...if you don't like me judging, TOUGH!

Thanks for judging this challenge, Marx...believe me, I appreciate it

 

[Spider-Fan]

First, let's grade Submission #1. That submission was by team: Hunter Rider, Cmill216, Byrd Man, and Specter313

Marx:

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Submission #1

Persuasion: 5
Validity: 5
Argument Structure: 5
Comments: Very simply put, this submission was incredibly well done from start to finish. It had a very clear argument and a structure outlined with bolded fonts. The only thing that I wish would have been longer was your conclusion. It was very short and did get the point across, but I would liked to have seen a little more depth to it than a single run-on sentence. That being said, great work. It is always hard to argue a position like this. (Trust me, I know. )


Total: 15pts

Spider-Fan:

Spoiler

Persuasion - 4.5: I feel your conclusion could have been phrased better, but otherwise, very convincing.
Validity - 4: Your section on stalking gets a little outrageous to the point where it seems like a waste to stalk you that long. Makes that point seem less valid. Otherwise, great.
Structure - 5: You stayed on topic and made great points

Total: 13.5

Grand total: 28.5 points

 

[Spider-Nerd]

I just got home from school and work. I planned on finishing tonight. bad judge! bad!

 

[Matt]

Can SN finish real quick? We've waiting this long, what's another hour?

 

[Spider-Fan]

Now let's move onto Submission #2:

Marx:

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B]Submission #2[/B]

Persuasion: 3
Validity: 5
Argument Structure: 4
Comments: Like the first submission, this submission is also very well done. That being said, the argument structure was not as well defined as the first submission. (Which is why I took one point off on argument structure.) I also had to take a couple of points off on persuasion. While this submission is arguing the more popular side of this argument, it just fell a bit flat for me. Having someone who 'admitting does not have a Facebook page' arguing the merits of social networking felt a little hollow.

Total: 12pts

Spider-Fan:

Spoiler

Persuasion - 4: Great points, but you tread the same ground a lot.
Validity - 5: Your points are great
Structure - 4: Some grammar errors and annoyances. Otherwise, solid!

Total: 13pts

Total: 25pts

So, scores so far:

Spoiler

Hunter Rider, Cmill216, Byrd Man, Specter313 - 28.5pts

Matt, KALEL114, Iron Fist - 25pts

 

[Spider-Nerd]

Up to SF. He seemed to want to enjoy being a smash up judge. That's hard to take away.

 

[Spider-Fan]

Can SN finish real quick? We've waiting this long, what's another hour?

I started already...posted 2 sets of them before I saw him say something. So, you guys already know what 2/3's of the submission results are if I wait.

Up to you guys...I just want to get this done.