The Havoc of being a symbiote- My Fanfiction.

[Climperoonie]

I haven't been on here in a long while, how is everyone? I wrote this based on an RPG that's going on at the moment on another forum I go on. Anyway, on with the story!
The Havoc of Being a Symbiote
Chapter 1 - An odd find.
Well, this was certainly odd. First things first, let me introduce myself. I'm a sixteen-year old boy named Henry Baker. And this is my story of my odd find that changed my life forever. I was walking home from school one afternoon, when something in the gutter caught my eye. I bent down to look, and saw a strange green type liquid. I bent down and touched it, and it wobbled before lying still again. I wondered what it was, and decided to take it home. I scooped it up and took a small canister from my bag supposed to be for my science homework, but I didn't need four anyway. I dropped the substance in the canister, and kept walking. I arrived home shortly after, and went up to my room to look at the stuff. I put it under my microscope and saw the weird molecules. I got my handbook to help identify it, and was shocked to discover that there was a diagram of molecules that looked sort of like the ones of the peice of liquid, and it was in the chapter called Molecules of Living Organisms! I quickly shut it back in the container (Not noticing I hadn't shut it properly), and went down stairs. Unbeknowst to me, the liquid had leapt out of the container and crawl along onto my ankle. I went outside to go out with my friend Jake Coles and my girlfriend Chelsea Manning. We were walking along when Jake suddenly raised his eyebrow.
"What?" I asked.
"What's that thing climbing up your leg?" He was still staring at the back of my leg. I lifted my trouser leg round to look, and saw the green stuff spreading across it. I tried to pull it off, but it just jumped onto my hand and covered it, almost becoming a thick, green, slimy glove. It didn't stop there, it continued covering my arm. Jake was frozen to the spot and Chelsea began screaming. I started to scream to as it finished with my arm, and began with my chest. I clawed at it with my human hand, and it then covered that too. By now one-third of my body was transformed. I screamed for help, and Jake ran over and began to try and rip it off, just to be thrown back by a tendril that whipped out from the slime. My whole body was now covered, and I dropped to the ground as it covered my head. I raised up and Chelsea screamed even more as I looked down at my body in wonder. It was now green with some red veins. A blue square was situated on the back of each hand, and a giant blue spider broadened across my chest.
"What has happened to me?" I asked, more to myself than my friends. I realised my voice sounded a lot more, how can I put it, vicious and snakelike.
"Henry, you look....Amazingly awesome!" Jake said, half smiling in amazement.
"My God. My God. My God." Chelsea said, in complete shock. I was still shocked, too, at the transformation that had happened.
"How-How can I change back?" I wondered aloud, and as if reacting to my question. The suit became feature less and morphed into a cool green shirt with black jeans and some black Bumper boots. I grinned. I didn't know what it was, or how it had come here, but I was pleased I had it. I knew that I would begin to help out, destroy criminals.
"Weren't we going out?" I smiled, and strided down the road.

 

[Climperoonie]

Here's the second chapter, feedback would be appreciated
Chapter 2 - Fun
As me, Chelsea and Jake walked into the shopping district of McFarlane city, I began feeling good. Whatever this was, it was amazing. It was a weekday, some the town wasn't that crowded. We walked into a Department store, and found the Tech section. I saw the new iPod, and they had it in green.
"Well looky here, the new iPod, and in our favourite colour!" I said, and picked it up.
"'Our'?" Jake raised an eyebrow.
"What?" I turned and looked at him.
"You just said 'Our favourite colour', what do you mean our? You can't mean me, you know mine's blue, and you can't mean Chelsea; who's is purple, so who is it?"
"I - I don't know." I was now confused, but I just shrugged it off, "C'mon, let's pay for this."
We got to the counter and I put the iPod on it.
"One hundred dollars, thank you sir." The man said. I pulled out five twenty pound notes from my pocket, and was just as surprised as my friends were. I put it on the counter and the man put the iPod behind the counter and pulled out a box with the real iPod in. he put it in a bag and handed it to me. We left the shop, and didn't see the money turn into green slime on the counter. We then began walking along to our destination - Wembley Arena to see Snow Patrol in concert. We got the tickets and handed them to the ticket booth (After waiting in line for ages), and went in. We had tickets for the front row, and so we went along until we found our seats. Then the adverts and trailers came on - Spider-man 3, Pirates of the Carribean: At Worlds end, Shrek the third and Fantastic Four: Rise of the Silver Surfer. Then the concert started.
The whole room went dark, and a steady drum beat started. Then, there was three symbal smashes and then the whole place illuminated in blue lights as the band leapt onto the stage and began striking the first chords of a song as fire leapt up from the front of the stage. I suddenly got a splitting headache, and I felt my clothes moving around.
"I need the toilet." I said to my friends, before running down the rows and out into the corridor, where all the food stalls and toilets were. I couldn't escape the noise! There was still a really loud Boom-Boom-Boom coming from the concert. I ran into the toilets and that helped me get away from the noise. I looked in the mirror and saw my clothes where back to how they were before I got the weird green stuff. Outside of the cubicle I was in, the door opened, and I heard the music again. I screamed, and my voice was mixed in with another screeching noise, and I found green tendrils streaming out from my body. The door closed, and the tendrils wrapped around me, and a familiar transformation took place.
"Henry? Is that you?" I heard Jake ask from outside.
"Yeah. I just got a Headache." I said, my voice had the snakelike tone again.
"Your voice.... You're in your monster form again?" Jake asked. I looked in the mirror to see the green face with jagged white patches for eyes and a toothy grin staring back at me.
"Yeah, hold on, let's see if I can do something." I said, and began willing the costume off of my head. It immediatly obeyed, and the features of the 'mask' dissolved, and then the green bit left parted away like tendrils, and I could just say "Cool".
"What?"
"Hold on." I replied, and walked out, my body still clad in green, but my head normal with the creature's pointed teeth, "What do you think?".
"Cool." Jake repeated what I'd just said. I morphed back to my normal clothes.
"Can we leave though? The noise and heat seems to be affecting this suit." I asked.
"But we payed loads'a money for the tickets." Jake moaned.
"Your forgetting." I said, pulling a handful of twenty pound notes from my pocket, "I'm rich."
"Okay!" Jake said, nodding his head eagerly like a happy young child about to get lots of sweets and Ice cream. We left the toilets and met up with Chelsea outside, explained the plan, and then left.