Just found my original Story on my made up Superheroes, including Electron. This is one of my first stories on my made up Superheroes, and Electron is the only one I really bothered with. But, anyway, I'll post the first chapter to see what you think, and if I get positive feedback I'll post the next two and then continue writing it. So, here's Chapter 1: U N L I K E L Y ~ H E R O E S Chapter 1 Jake Coles stood on the edge of the Rugby pitch, watching the other boys beating each other up to get to the ball. Jake never did like PE much. As the cold wind beat down on him, hurting his legs that werent covered by his shorts, Jake wished he could be back inside the classroom, reading a book. He was fifteen years old, and had brown hair and wore thick-rimmed glasses. He only had four friends Two of which were his sisters Chelsea and Tara. They were in the same class as him, but werent on the same PE field. Go on Jake! A voice from behind him boomed. He spun round to see the PE teacher, Mr Shuttleworth, looking at him sternly. Oh, but sir, cant I read about rugby instead? He pleaded. No! Mr Shuttleworth retorted, and Jake opened his mouth but was cut off, And dont give me any of that I dont like Physical Education crap, if you like to go to Athletics club you like Physical Education, so go play before you lose your Lunch break! Jake walked off. He wouldnt have cared if hed have got detention anyway; he only went to the library at Lunchtime. He made a feeble effort to kick the ball, when the bell rang. He sighed a heavy sigh of relief, and then ran back into the changing rooms. He quickly changed back into his uniform, before running to the coach. He paired up with his third friend Daniel Jefferson. Thank god for the bell. Jake said. You really hate PE, dont you. Daniel grinned. Yup, say, are you going to Athletics club tonight? Jake asked. Sure I am. That Athletics club may not have many members, but it sure is fun. People like me there! People like you anyway. Really, I couldnt tell by them shouting Geek and Four-eyes at me Twenty-four/Seven. Dont worry bout it. Daniel reassured, just as the coach pulled up. They all filed out and into their classrooms to get their coats and bags. Jake was ready first, so he waited outside for his friends, so they could go to Athletics club together. When they were all out they started walking. Have a good PE lesson? Michael Brant, Jakes fourth friend, asked. Me? Have a good PE lesson? I always have good PE lesson. Jake let out a sarcastic quip back. Ah, crap then was it? Chelsea asked. Yep. Never mind. At least we have athletics club now. Chelsea finished the conversation, and they got to the schools gym. It was only them in the Athletics club, but their teacher, Mr Savage, hadnt closed it. Today, class, we are starting on the High Jump. He explained. If you would like to get into a line, Ill explain how to do it. They did as he said, and he continued. Now you will run in a curved shape; either left or right, and take off on the foot farthest from the mat. You should take off on your side, and land on your bottom. The last bit received a few giggles from Chelsea and Tara, but they started. Michael was first, and he done a perfect semi-circle round the right of the area, and scored an eighty centimetres. Daniel was next, and he did it perfectly too. Then Jake. He swallowed, before running round and closing his eyes before jumping. Ninety-six centimetres! Mr Savage shouted out. Jake joined the back of the queue. Jake, that was amazing! Daniel whispered. Thanks. Jake whispered back. Then they heard something from outside. The girls had just finished their jumps, when a strange whistling pierced the air slowly getting louder. Mr Savage opened the double doors to look, and saw an orange spot in the sky, rapidly growing in size. Then he realised what this was. The meteorite, about the size of a bicycle, hurtled towards him. Children, get inside! He shouted, and attempted to follow. Too late. The burning Space rock smashed into the ground, sending waves of strange purple light out. The worst of it smashed into Mr Savage, and he howled in pain as light consumed his body. Jake turned round, and the last thing he saw was the mangled, smoking corpse of Ryan Savage hit the ground, before everything went black.